Heyy this is my second fanfic i am currently working on two cause i started one then got new ideas for another one and couldnt wait for it, please chek out NEW SUN!!!
ok this about Bella Swan an amzingly gorgeous vampire who has extreme powers, she knows carlise and come to visit the family. Edward Cullen seems to resent her bieng there but will he keep avoiding her or will a new realatioship form?
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Once the animal was drained completely drained of blood I glanced around the rest of the herd hadn't even noticed, I inhaled deeply and lunged at the big buck, quickly snapping his neck so he wouldn't feel any pain. i drank my fill, the blood soothed the burning in my throat.
My jeans were vibrating AliceI thought to myself pulling the cell out my pocket and flipping it up.
" What is it Al" the rest of the herd were panicking I resisted the urge to chase after them.
" She's Here Edward " her voice was full of excitement
"What exactly do you mean here Alice?" I wondered whether here meant at the House or just in the same planet, knowing Alice it could well be the latter
"Well, she's not here-here but she's coming here, she will be here in about…" she paused thinking "a two or three days, it hard to tell"
" Have you told the others?"
" No, I wanted to tell you first" her voice turned slightly guilty and I knew exactly why. Urgh, yeah Alice's visions were amazing but sometimes they could be a right pain in the A-
" Hello, earth to Edward!" I sighed
" Right now hurry up and get your but home, now!"
" Why right now Alice, we have days to prepare" like we needed to prepare
" Yes, but your are coming shopping with me" she stated
" No way Alice"
"You need to look your best if you want to impress"
" And who the hell says I want to impress, huh?"
"you haven't yet but you will , I've seen it" right enough was enough, I flipped the phone down and hung up on alice, I was feeling guilty cause I knew how rude that was but she is seriously driving me insane with these visions of her.
Her being Bella Swan, a very old vampire frozen in a 17 year olds body. Bella is probably one of if not the most powerful vampire in the world cause of her gift. When she was human she could always persuade people to let her have her way, her gift was Control. Control of the mind and of the body. She could make humans heart speed up or suddenly stop, she could compel you, make you feel lust for her.
Bella's gift is only really powerful on a diet of human blood, but since she is vegetarian
Like my family and myself her powers aren't as strong, she still could make any human do just about whatever she wanted them to do, although being a vampire an absolutely stunning one at that she would have been able to do it anyway. But without human blood she doesn't have control over vampires.
She had stayed with Carlisle and Esme for a while, the time when I was away and on my own, before I restricted myself to animal blood. The Volturi were constantly after bella, she had stayed a while but she couldn't take it and decided to leave, probably cause the attention wasn't on her I thought bitterly.
Alice was having visions of Bella and me together, yeah right; I didn't want to be with some stuck up self-loving bimbo, I was quite happy being with just my adopted family, I didn't need some to hold and be held by, I didn't need love in my life.
Or did I?
Hey that was my first chapter i will update asap, i know its short ( nxt chapter be longer) but couldnt wait to know weither use like the idea or not! please review or pm me i need advice critism and everything else i mentioned at the start xxx let me know if you think i should continue or dump storie luv u
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