This is my first Disgaea story, i love the series, but i wanted to try adding one of my own characters to it, and i thought an unprinny would be an interesting twist. please review, and more will be on the way soon. i'm thinking of adding more of my own characters later, but let me know what you think.
I don't own any of the Disgaea characters, only my characters. If you want to use them, send me a message and i'll let you know.
Disgaea 4: the story of an unprinny
Prolog
My name is Steven Kazamatsuri, I'm Fuka Kazamatsuri's brother. I am 16, and her older brother. I'm tall, like 6 foot or so, and I have short brown hair. I wear glasses and some jewelry, a necklace my little sister gave me and two leather cuffs. I have bright blue eyes, and like her, i died and went to the Netherworld to become a prinny, but unlike her, I know this isn't a dream, and that we really did die. I'm not sure why I went to hell, nothing I ever did deserved sending a kid to hell, but I can't fix that now, I'm just shit out of luck I guess. I also don't know how we died, we were attacked by something, I remember that, but nothing else. Our Father is a scientist, and he wasn't around very much, so I really had to step up and take care of Fuka after our mother died. Since then, we've been really close, so it's no wonder I got unlucky enough to die with her. But I'm getting off topic, and to far ahead with the story, I'll start from the beginning, in the prinny factory.
"Fuka?" I ask quietly, unable to see anything because of the pitch-black darkness. Afraid to make to much noise, she grunts angrily, and then kicks something roughly,
"Where the hell are we?" she whispers angrily, and I reach my hand out towards her timidly, afraid I'll hit something else. I finally find her hand and grasp it trendy, a smile on my face despite the darkness,
"I don't know, but I'm sure we will be fine, your big brother is here with you, so don't worry. Now, wait, are we moving?" I ask quietly, reaching my hand to the left to feel for a wall. Finding nothing, I look around quickly until I see a light far ahead of us, "Hey, I see a light, it's getting closer right?" I ask quickly, and Fuka squeezes my hand twice, our known rule for a yes,
"But where the hell are we? Do you remember anything?" she asks sadly, and I squeeze her hand once, a no,
"Something happened to us though right? Like… weren't we… attacked?" I say slowly, my memories slowly returning. Fuka squeezes my hand twice, and then starts walking towards the light, dragging me behind her quickly, "Fuka what are you doing?" I asked surprised, and she laughs quietly before answering,
"There is a light, and we can't see, why not walk towards it hehe, I don't see a problem with that, if it's something dangerous, I have you to protect me." She says warmly, dashing off quickly and dragging me behind her.
"Ok fine, just stop pulling my arm out of socket!" I yell loudly, and she stops in her tracks, letting me role my arm around, "There, back in socket, now, let's walk slowly towards the light, we are moving on our own, so let's not dash forward to fast ok?" I ask slowly, and she squeezes my hand once, and leads me up to stand beside her. Slowly, she takes a step forward, and I follow suit.
"Left right, left right, it's going to be fine, I'm sure we can handle whatever is there in the light, it seems like we're close." Says Fuka happily, the light becoming more of a large portal now. Swallowing loudly, I squeeze her hand for comfort as the light begins to blind us and whisper,
"Ready?" to which she responds by squeezing my hand back.