Beauty and the Beast
I knew I couldn't. I couldn't let that beast win! He had Will, and Jem had run off too fast for me to stop it. The Magister said an hour was all we all had left. This reminded me of Beauty and the Beast, where Belle made the ultimate sacrifice so punishment would not be given on her father. She stayed with the onion breathed monster. That gave me an idea. I walked over to East Fleet Street, where I knew the Magister was keeping Will. I knocked on he door, and saw Archer greet me. I smiled at him, and walked in. I saw a mirror, and suddenly, it was as if the room had become ice. I looked at it again, and saw the Magister out of the corner of my eye. A wave of panic washed over me, and I nearly screamed. I gripped onto Will's letter, his forced letter given to us. I quickly felt my clothes shrink, so finally Will's fit onto my body. Why didn't I Change before? I didn't know, but now I was Will. The Magister looked shocked, so I did not know if he had seen me as myself, or as Will. But I smiled mischievously at him, and lifted my hand, and wiggled my fingers at him. Exactly as Will would have done it. Then I sprinted. I ran for the stairwell, and went up. So I let myself onto the balcony. Only a gunman there. I knew what he was making me do. I went over to the railing. So he escaped, yesterday, at the hotel. I knew that I had no time to revirie, so I did it. I jumped. Will was there, at the bottom, waiting for me. With outstretched arms, to catch me.
Entry by Talonxdreamer
Total no. of words: 297
The Colour of the Last Half of 2012: Sable
For the Month of December: E is for Element
Write a paragraph/short story on any theme. Any genre, pairing is allowed. Character must be specified.
Requirements:
*A maximum of 300 words.
*Include these words: Beast, Hour, Ice, Mirror, Novel, Onion, Sea, Punishment, Reverie, Yesterday. (Derivatives of the words are allowed).
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Latest by 31st December 2012.
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Criteria:
*Language (Grammar, Vocabulary, Spelling etc.) - 30%
*Smooth inclusion of all requirements - 20%
*Captivating storyling - 30%
*Well-developed characters - 10%
*Writing Style - 10%