NARUTO: SHADOWS
AN:Welcome . this my first story so please support and reviews .Story has been updated again due to so many mistakes, even my laptop stopped working *giggle*.Non bold, italic characters are and italic characters are the speech of the man standing over the mountain.I really want to apologize for posting the chapter with so many errors, For that now you people will review,Will try to repair the other two chapters ,bear with me.
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And story would not be left halfway through,so don't worry..
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto. But who knows when ill have a job ,i would buy it.
PROLOGUE
chapter 1 : THOSE EYES
nothing was all that a soul could see...
rivers of blood, mountains of dead ,and smell of flesh was all that was left...
Suffering, pain ,guilt, fear in the air...
Loss of family, friends, loved ones was what was left within the survivors...
hope was no where to be seen...
the few alive could only wait for death to embrace them in her loving arms and take them away...
Out of the void shrieks of a woman could easily be heard..
Two figures could be seen running towards the source of sound at human speed.
The woman was running as fast as she could to escape...
Panting hard,sweat and blood dripping down from her body,screaming her lungs out ,only wanting to be heard and rescued from the horrible fate following her in the form of a giant MONSTER.
But, it was not a monster from old bed time stories ,would have been bigger than mountains, blood lust in eyes... or eye that could burn even the oceans dry ,the black scale that can even hide a bright summer day in a cape of dark hollow night ,an aura so evil that it could swallow all of the happiness out of the world.
Imagine the horrors of seeing such a thing..
the only distinct feature other than its size was its tail,or tails?
not one ,two , three ... there were ten long tails possessed by the demon big enough to bridge across towns ...if there were any.
The woman stopped as a barrage of huge rocks landed in front of her blocking every place to run away to .She turned around to witness the red eye glaring at her. She screamed and pleaded "P..pl...please let m..me ...go" ,the demon was still glaring at her with hunger in its eyes. It raised its claw to tear through the pleading woman and THRASHED..
"NOOOOO..." the woman screamed closing her eyes. Memories of her life flashing in front of her eyes.
It was when she heard a thud sound. Opening her eyes she witnessed a man standing in front of her with his swords drawn and the giant claw fallen on the ground beside the standing man.
The man standing in front of her looked back and said ,"run..." .It took the woman some time to register the words, and the next moment she was running...so hard that,she felt her lungs would burst from the pain.
She was searching for a pace to hide when her eyes witnessed another man standing on top of a could tell from the looks that the man was in great pain ,what caught her eye was the fact that he was Illuminating?
She could feel her legs getting numb below her ,body resisting every step she took,she do not felt when she hit the ground as her vision became blurred and the darkness swallowed her.
The demon was glaring at the man standing on top of the mountain,it heard him say,"JUBI, you can't win!"
"Shut UP" the beast exploded in anger. A deadly silence fell upon the continued with malice in its eye."You INSECT ,you may have sealed most of my energy in you. But I can still kill YOU".The beast used its tails to throw rocks at the man vanished out of sight and appeared near the other man.
"Rikodou, i can't seal any more energy without controlling my chakra and it will take time as its unstable from the last man coughed blood and continued, " Use the ways i show you to seal it in you" said the illuminating man who was now on his knees, trying to control the pain.
"But,how do you know I would be able to do it" said the confused man.
"Because, i believe in you" said the man with with a small grin.
Rikudou concentrated his chakra and closed his next moment he opened hi eyes,he could see everything differently.
The beast turned towards the man and was shocked to see the result...the eyes
The eyes were not like anything he had ever seen, it looked as though there were stationary ripples in the man's felt as though those eyes were calling it.
"What is THAT!" exclaimed the angry beast."This, is my trump card ...My RINNEGAN!" shouted Rikudou dashing towards the beast.
The beast snapped out of the hypnotic vision of the man's eyes to realize that the man was dashing towards it with the two swords in his started throwing rocks again.
Rikudou jumped upon the first rock and than leaped towards the other one at an amazing rocks came at an angle of 60 degree to each other .Rikudou jumped towards the other and was now running upside down ,keeping his speed for not falling off. he jumped again and sliced the third rock into two parts,only to witness a huge tail coming towards him at a very high speed.
The tail caught him at his chest when the man vanished with a poof and smoke. Jubi watched in disbelief as the man appeared above the tail , cutting it with one swipe of the
swords .The tail was now lying on the ground as a new one grew in its place.'What?'. "Who Are You!?" the beast said. "I am Rikudou Sennin and I will defeat you".The monster laughed "You cant do anything".The man let out a small grin and charged ..."Really".
He thought to himself as the man lunged towards it forming different signs from his man shouted " DRAGON SEAL..." ."NOOOO" was all the beast could say as the man's hand reached its head ..."SEAL".The beast began to tremble as it felt its energy getting sucked up through the hands of the man.
"...how" was the beast's last word as it got completely sucked up inside the man .Once done Rikudou was himself illuminating.'not bad...' he thought to himself as a little blood oozed down from his watched around and started heading towards the direction where the wounded woman headed , only one thing in mind "...is this the end" .
From behind him came the other man looking better and less luminous and said "No".
That's a wrap .Reviews please...
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