This is my first story here so I decided to start small, there will be only 2 chapters unless I make a sequel but there long so sit back, relax and enjoy…

(1/12/05) UPADATED: I'm sorry. I didn't know that the dialoged had to be like this. I asked my friend what would sound the most like the show and she said that the name then what they said would be best. And just to tell you. I do proof read anything that I write. I just get mixed up sometimes. It would help a lot if you could tell me if something doesn't make any since. Thanks. Spirit1s.

(12/3/05) UPDATED AGAIN: thanks for telling me the problems. Especially with Tucker's name. I didn't see that because it didn't register on my spell check.

I don't own Danny phantom and I never will. I do own the fake address for exodus labs though. To spare you the trouble of looking it up.

Thanks. Spirit1s.

UPDATED FOR THE THIRD TIME: hi, I don't know why but this story was deleted by the site, it said it was because it was in chat/script format but I fixed that so I am posting it again. I hope it works this time!

Spirit1s

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"And on your left you'll see the labs used in the creating of our many products." Said the tour guide. Danny and Sam were board, while Tuck was playing tic-tac-toe on his PDA. There class had been on this field trip now for almost 2 hours, and Danny was starting to wonder how board the tour guide must be by now. If he was " enjoying" it this much the tour guide must be all but, brain dead by now.

"OH MAN! That's the 18th time that I've lost now." Tuck was getting pretty desperate to have played 18 games in a row.

"Well that's good for you Tuck because I read a fortune cookie today at breakfast and it said your friend will looses 18 times but 19 is the charm." Sam was apparently even more board then the rest of the group walking though the halls.

"Really!" It was obvious that Tuck's brain was just about melted if he thought Sam was serious.

"Yeah Tuck! Right before flying hippos in hockey uniforms flew thought my widow and I had tea with Neptune soon to be divorce attorney!" Said Sam. The tour group was passing a storage room as Danny whispered to Sam and Tuck.

"Uh guys!" A blue white mist escaped from his mouth as he turned to face his friends. The box ghost stuck his head though the door, as Danny cried a sigh of relief. At least it wasn't anything serious.

"HAAAA! YOU SHALL NOT DEFEAT ME, THE MASTER OF ALL THINGS CUBICAL AND SQUARE! I AM THE BOX GHOST! BEWARE!" Danny phased thought the door while Sam and Tucker were watching thought the small window on the door leading to the storage room/garage that must have been used for unlading large crates of tools and hardware.

"I'M GOING GHOST!" Danny yelled as he transformed into a" shadow of his former self, the unfortunately infamous and illustrious Danny phantom, or rather " Inviso-bill".

Man that name is LAME!

"YOU SHALL BE PUMMELED BY THE TOOLS OF EXODUS LABS, 1894 WALLWOOD AVE. AMITY PARK!" The box ghost yelled as usual, just before he did something stupid. He threw 3 or 4 crates at Danny, who was board out of his mind, as the crates phased right through him and smashed into the wall behind him.

"Well that was fun!" Danny said to the box ghost as he bent over and grabbed the Fenton thermos from Sam's backpack that he grabbed just before phasing through the door.

"YOU SHALL NOT WIN! I SHALL PILE YOU UNDER BOXES WITH THINGS THAT I CAN'NOT PRONOUNCE! FOR I AM THE BOX GHOST! FEAR ME!" Shouted the box ghost as Danny sucked him into the thermos and changed back to the black haired, blue eyed Danny Fenton.

That is just in time to have him see two security guards come from behind the stacks of crates that the dufus box ghost threw.

"Huh?" Said Danny when he heard two people getting near. He went invisible, just in time to pass by the two security guards unnoticed.

"How did these boxes get moved? And that one is smashed!" Said the first guard.

"A stack must have fallen over." Was the only explanation that the second guard could come up with. "I will leave the night guy a note to check the tape," he said.

They left the room, passing by the horrified, invisible Danny Fenton, as he phased through the wall.

"Uh, guys we have a HUGE PROBLEM!" Danny yelled to his friends as they tried to catch up with the group…

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Can anyone tell me why this story was deleted, and sorry I haven't updated, they wouldn't let me and I have been sick, and getting dental work…