Stars
A short, sweet, ikari fanfic. This is my third lol. I can count! Hope you like it.
Love you all
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Disclaimer: I don't own pokemon or ikarishipping
Stars
Paul and dawn are finally together enjoying their first ever date together. As dawn was staying in veilstone with Paul for a few days, their date was at Valor Lake. It was late. They were alone. The stars were out. Neither of them spoke until Paul broke the long silence.
"Troublesome"
"Hmmm" dawn hummed letting him know she was listening
"Do you know what the stars look like?" he asked
"Stars?"
"Apart from that"
She thought long but nothing came to her. She shook her head.
"No. what do they look like?"
"Your eyes" he says looking directly into her cobalt eyes
"How?"
"They shine just like yours. Their bright just like yours. Beautiful just like you…"
Dawn was lost for words.
"I love you dawn and I will never ever ever let you go"
"I love you too"
Right there and then, they shared their first kiss. The dark night was eternity to them. Their love didn't end the day after, the week after, the month after nor the year after. Their love lasted forever even after death…
Admit it people, this one wasn't the best. I know I can write better but this is just… bad. So let me know what you think. Can you plz tell me what I can do to improve, I need criticism badly. Do you have any ideas for my ikari story's coz I'm running out, maybe that's why it's bad… does anyone like the idea of 'one shots'? I'm thinking about doing some for my favourite shippings. There will probably be:
Ikari
Darkness (don't read them if you don't like it)
Contest
Oldrival
Daytime (don't read if you don't like it)
Soulsilver (lyra x silver I think)
And whatever you guys want. So… I hope you guys enjoyed it. If you didn't I don't blame you, I didn't.
Love you all
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