Evening.
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Lifetime Of Missing You
The door slammed shut behind me as I jumped into the awaiting arms of my Alec, my boyfriend who stood smiling up at me as he caught me in his strong embrace. His smile intensified as I brought my lips down to his own, capturing him in a long awaited kiss.
"Hey beautiful" He said, pecking my nose lightly as he gently put me on my feet, always ever careful.
"Hey yourself" I replied, waving behind him to the two occupants of the car at the end of my driveway, where our two best friends, Max and Jared were waiting for us. Alec breathed me in as we walked towards the car and I smiled as I heard him sigh in happiness.
"Are you excited?" He asked as he opened the car door for me. I grinned back at him the excitement written on my face.
"Good" He said, climbing in after me and shutting the door behind him.
"Ello Liss" Max said, leaning over her chair in the front of the car to talk to me, her dark hair pulled back from her beautiful face, her lips stretched across her pearly whites in a grin which I'm sure matched my own in size.
"Max!" I said, my most serious face on show, leaning closer. The smile dropped from her face as she unconsciously leant closer.
"We're going to see OneRepublic" I said as calmly as I could without screaming. She stared back at me for a moment, her face totally clear of any emotion, until we both broke out in excited squeals. Jared and Alec chuckled at our childish behaviour, but I couldn't care less, OneRepublic had been our favourite band since we were thirteen years old.
"Come on, come on Jared! Start the car!" Max pretty much yelled, leaning over to peck him on the cheek to make up for it. He grinned back at her, the love he felt for her evident in his gaze.
5 Hours Later
"Ahhhhh!" Max and I screamed. "That was so incredible!" The concert had finished and we had just pulled into my driveway where we were all staying the night as my parents had gone out to a hotel for a romantic night, well they'd said committee meeting but I'm seventeen and know better than to believe that.
"All right ladies" Jared said as I opened the door. "Where's the bedroom?" He asked me, winking at Max over his shoulder, who giggled. I rolled my eyes at their hornyness, not that Alec and I were any better, we were just a little bit less obvious with it.
"Down the hall second door on the left" I replied.
"Not upstairs?" Max asked, an adorable confused look on her face.
"Nope" I replied, my bedroom was upstairs and I certainly did not want to listen to those two humping like rabbits all night.
"Condoms in the chest of drawers!" I shouted down the hall after them as they ran off.
"Soooo" Alec whispered from behind as his hands crawled around my waist. "What do you want to do tonight?" He asked, his lips against my ear sending shivers down my spine.
"Hmmm" I replied, turning in his arms to face his more than fine features. His face was that of the Gods, sculpted to perfection, his sandy hair tousled, just long enough to run my fingers through, always unruly. His green eye always changing, going from grass green to the darkest I've ever seen, all beautiful.
All his features were perfect, sandy tousled hair and changing colour green eyes, his nose was perfect for his face and everything about him was defined, and I knew exactly why; Alec is what you'd call a half vampire. His father was a full vampire in lust with Alec's human mother, a month later along came Alec whose mother was changed into a vampire afterwards, meeting Stephanie for the first time was nerve-wracking to say the least but now she was like a second mother to me. He grew fast, and when I discovered this I was disturbed to learn that technically I was in love with a 10 year old, despite that he had the body of a 17 year old and the mind of an adult.
When Alec was 3 months old his father left after trying to kill Alec, jealous of the attention he received from Stephanie, only for her to run his father out of the territory. His father Johan, left swearing revenge on Alec but they never heard from him again.
"Upstairs?" He asked. I nodded and in a whoosh we were falling onto my bed together, our lips locked. One of the positives of Alec being half vampire, is not only the speed and the strength but his powers. He can change his appearance to whatever he wishes, brilliant for when we want to get drunk and pulling pranks on people and his best talent was that he could manipulate his touch, which basically meant he could transform the effect of one punch and multiply it to kill you, or one loving touch heightened so much that it pretty much brings you to orgasm.
A few hours later I stepped into the shower more than satisfied, humming to myself the lyrics that had been played only a few hours ago. Scrubbing my favourite summer fruits shampoo into my hair I thought about my future. I was in my last year at the private performing school I went to, the best dancer in my class, in front of Alice Cullen which is saying something because she can move to just about anything and do it perfectly. Alex, Max and Jared all went to the same school, Max majoring in music tech, Alec in music, and Jared in dance with me. I wanted to go to college in New York, the best performing arts school in the United States was situated there and I was determined to get in, I had already sent in my application and a few videos of myself dancing and was awaiting their reply any day now.
Turning the water off I stepped out and wrapped a towel around myself, dabbing my body dry and slipping some knickers on underneath the towel. All was quiet in the house, which was unusual because normally while I shower Alec would turn some music on quietly until I came out of the shower, but tonight was different. A chill suddenly made me shiver, a draft coming in from under the door, which was odd because all the windows in the house was shut as it was night time and I was not one for taking risks when one knew what was out there lurking in the dark. I opened the door, fully expecting to see Alec waiting for me on the other side, but instead I found an empty bedroom and a note.
Avie
Stay in the bedroom, lock the door and hide in the cupboard, don't come out until I find you, please.
I'll be back soon.
Alec, I love you forever.
My heart grew cold as a terrifying scream reached my ears from downstairs and forgetting the note I ran to the stairs and down them as fast as I could, stopping in my tracks at the sight that greeted my eyes; a tall dark haired man with an uncanny resemblance to Alec staring straight at me, blood dripping from his mouth. Neither Alex nor Max and Jared were in sight and the man was looking at me as if all his dreams had come true.
"Ah there you are" He said grinning at me a droplet of red trailing off of his cheek. He walked towards me and I ran, already knowing who it was; Alec's father Johan, Stephanie had always been wary of him coming back but after 3 years of being in the same place nothing had happened so he must have slipped through her defences. But before I could take five steps he was in front of me, grasping my throat in a hold that hurt but wasn't blocking my air.
"Now where you off to missy?" He sneered. "Do you know who I am?" He continued talking, his voice instilling a fear I didn't know I could hold. "I know who you are, Avalissa Green, best dancer at Maybel Performing Arts Academy, dating the best guitarist at the school Alec Woods, his mother's birth name" His eyes darkened as he mentioned his son's name.
"You're Johan Kale, the bastard who caused Alec and Steph pain for so long. " I spat, I had a deep hatred for the man that caused my almost mother and love pain. He chuckled quietly to himself, tightening his grip around my neck, I scratched at his hands but it did nothing just broke my own nails.
"So Alec has told you what he is, and you've even met my dear Stephanie, how sweet of him, you must be very important to him, he would be" he paused his red eyes flashing as the caught the light of the moon from the window "broken if he lost you, am I right?"
The fear deepened as he lifted me off my feet and took me into the kitchen.
"What about my friends?" I asked as another droplet of blood dripped off of his angular chin. He grinned at me and licked his lips.
"They tasted good you know" I cried in rage, my best friends were gone because of this bastard. My arms had a life of their own and my legs kicked against what felt like stone but he merely laughed at my attempts to hurt him.
"They screamed like pigs as I drank the blood from their veins, and one by one they succumbed to me. Alec couldn't save them, merely dragged them away from me after pushing me through the wall, strong my lad is" I growled, the pain barely reaching me through the anger and his grinned widened.
"I give it to him though, he's picked a fine one in you, so beautiful" He stepped closer to me and brought his other hand to my face, stroking my cheek. "so feisty and brave. Your blood is strong, it will be a shame to waste it, but I want him to smell you off the walls when he gets back, and by then it'll be too late for you."
He grabbed a knife off of the side board and swung it at me. I moved too late the blade caught the skin of my stomach and the pain that went through me was nothing like I'd ever felt before. I held the two sides of my previously flat stomach in my hands as Johan breathed deeply, his eyes darkening to a coal black and he stalked to towards me. I fell backwards and crawled as fast as I could away slipping on my blood soaked floor, but was not fast enough as he pulled my hands away and smothered his own hands in my blood and walked away, my blood dripping off of his fingertips. I had never wished for Alec more in my life, if anyone could help me it was him, I needed him now.
The last thing I saw before falling into a pain filled abyss were two blondes bursting through my kitchen door, their golden eyes looking so deep into my eyes I almost felt safe. Almost.
Rosalie POV
Jasper and I were hunting when we smelt it, the fresh scent of split human blood and then a piercing scream reached our ears from the west. We took off running, already fearing what we might find, we already knew there was a vampire in the area, the human deaths coming closer and closer to Maybel and now finally we may have a chance to warn him of our plans if he continues to kill or at least kill him if he doesn't comply.
"Jasper hurry" I said to him as he slowed slightly, now was not the time for him to be worried about his bloodlust. "You'll be fine and if you're not then you can leave"
He nodded stiffly and quickened his pace. It took us about 5 minutes to reach the large house, which I recognised as a girl from school's house as she had a party a few weeks ago and invited us all, which was strange as we never got invited to human things, but alas the house was that of Avalissa Green's house. I was secretly jealous of her, she was very pretty for a human, beautiful by human standards, and the best dancer I'd ever seen, and I live with Alice. The scent was much stronger here, and the sound of a knife cutting flesh reached my ears along with a low grunt of pain and more blood. I stared at Jasper but could only see determination in his eyes, he was pissed. Most vampires just bite, drink and go, apparently this one liked to play games with his victims something Jasper disliked more than anything.
We ran to wear the scent was strongest and found a door for the kitchen and burst through. The sight that met my eyes would be forever engrained into my memory; Avalissa lying on the floor holding the two flaps of her stomach, her tear filled eyes staring into my own before they closed and a dark haired man writing a message of the opposite wall in blood, Avalissa's blood. I growled, no one deserved to be put through this pain, definitely not one so young as Avalissa, her guts in her hands and she fell slowly behind the veil, I wouldn't allow it, even if it went against my every instinct.
Jasper motioned for me to take care of Avalissa and I didn't need to be told twice. I bent down as Jasper exchanged words with the man.
"I heard you coming" The vampire said, staring at Avalissa. He was a tall dark haired man with an uncanny resemblance to Avalissa's boyfriend Alec Woods. "She's beautiful, such a shame I had to do this to her, it's not her fault he loves her."
"Who are you? Why have you done this? She's just a child, she doesn't deserve this!" Jasper roared, he obviously felt the same protectiveness I felt for the girl.
" She deserves everything she gets! Everyone does! He deserves it! She protected him! She loved him more than me, the thanks I get and she chooses the brat over me" The vampire growled, he obviously had some issues.
"What are you on about? This girl has done nothing to you, she's seventeen years old!" I replied my confusion and anger growing as he shook his head at my apparent foolishness.
"Not her. You're right she's done nothing to me, but they love her more than they ever loved me. Stephanie and the brat, that's why she needs to die, so they can feel the pain they put me through."
Jasper had had enough and lunged at the vampire, and I was torn between helping my brother and the girl who was dying in my arms. But it seemed my decision was made for me as Alice and Emmett burst through the door behind me, Emmett going to help Jasper and Alice lifting the girl out of my arms.
"I'm taking her to Carlisle, go to her room, bring important stuff its in the guitar and draws, there's an album on her window sill, bring that as well, then torch the house." She ordered before running out the door with Avalissa.
Alice POV
The girl was light in my arms as I ran through the forest, her blood was dripping all over my new dress but I wasn't too worried about that at that moment in time, I knew I had a limited number of minutes before the girls was too far gone to be saved, I pushed myself faster and was relieved to see Edward waiting where I told him to wait, he was the fastest runner in the family and if anyone could get her to Carlisle in the smallest amount of time it would be him
I thrust Avalissa into Edward's arms and told him to run.
She needs to be changed.
Edward POV
The girl was dripping blood all over my hands but I knew if I didn't get her to Carlisle fast enough many members of my family would be extremely angry with me, and the girl would die, so I pushed my legs as fast as they could move and reached the house in record time.
I placed the girl on the table and called Carlisle from the living room.
The rest of the family followed behind him and winced at the sight of the open girl on Esme's new dinner table, she was covered in a cold sweat, her hair sticking to her forehead and her pretty face scrunched up in apparent pain.
"Carlisle, Alice says she needs to be changed, and changed now" I said, relaying Alice's vision in my mind. He nodded, and stepped forward after kissing Esme softly.
"Her name?" He asked. It always helped knowing that the person you're biting is a person, not just food.
"Avalissa Green, she goes to our school, the dancer" My Bella replied. Carlisle nodded and bit down quickly on Avalissa's neck before moving onto her wrists and ankles. Once he was finished he ran outside, running for the forests.
"Esme, Bella, will you take her to one of the rooms, change her into some clothes" I said. They nodded and lifted Avalissa softly and quickly moved her into a room on the top floor. Now all we had to do was wait.
Rosalie POV
It wasn't for another half an hour before we left Avalissa's house. I had her things gathered in some boxes, Emmett carrying the rest of her possessions while Jasper ran ahead, searching for the other members of the house as their had been more than one scent of blood but only one body and one I'm sure Alec would have been there that night if the house was empty except for Avalissa, they were teenagers after all, but there was no sign of them and Jasper's and my own worry for Avalissa was more than our worry for the other three.
We headed back in a fast run and ten minutes later we were at the house. I immediately gave the things to Edward and made my way upstairs where I could hear Avalissa thrashing about on a bed, Bella and Esme soothing her with their cold hands.
"How is she?" I asked, setting myself down beside Avalissa on the bed and placing my hand on her head.
"She's fighting it, it hasn't been long inside her but it won't be long now until the fire consumes her and then we'll see" Esme replied softly, stroking Avalissa's long hair back from her face.
"What happened?" Bella asked. I sighed and told them the events up to which had led to Avalissa's death.
"So this vampire was of some relation to Alec? His father? And Alec is half vampire? Like Nessie?" Bella asked.
"I believe so, we'll find out when she wakes up I suppose"
Jasper POV
Avalissa was upstairs in agony on the second day of her change when it happened, one moment I could feel all her pain and the feelings of those around me and the next it stopped. There was nothing, only my own feelings to feel. I rushed back into the house to see Alice and Edward standing in the middle of the living room, each of them holding their heads while the rest of the family looked on.
"Jasper?" Carlisle asked, his voice sounded confused, but for once I did not know for sure.
"I can't feel your emotions anymore, nor can I manipulate them" I replied, walking over to Alice and putting an arm around her petite frame.
"I can't hear your thoughts" Edward said.
"And I can't see, it's not blank, the visions just aren't coming." The house was quiet except for the moans of agony coming from upstairs.
"It must be her, her power, whatever it is must be doing this"
The next day she finally awoke, her eyes blinked open and we all gasped at what we saw; violet eyes peeking up at us through her long lashes.
"Hi" She whispered meekly, sitting up on the bed and we all tensed, I pulled Alice away, afraid of what might happen considering our powers were currently not working.
"It's alright Jasper, I won't hurt you" She said, staring at me well not at me but around me.
"Do you know what we are? What you are?" Carlisle asked stepping closer to her.
"You're vampires and I'm guessing I am one now also? Hence the days of pain" She replied, staring at us all one by one. "So this must be my power" She said in a soft whisper, standing up and stepping towards Alice giggling slightly.
"Seriously Jasper I'm not going to hurt Alice, I'm watching the scenes outside her head"
Avalissa POV
It was finally over, after days and days of excruciating pain that blocked all else out it was finally finished. My body felt strong as my heart stopped beating and I knew what I was. I could hear movement around me and slowly opened my eyes, taking in the scene in front of me; 8 vampires, all with different coloured glows around them, the glows surrounded by a thin line of pure gold light streaming towards me. All around there was parts of the glows stripping off of the main body and floating towards the blond haired man I recognised from somewhere, and words were streaming out of the peoples heads and going towards a bronze haired boy who I also recognised but couldn't place, but they were all blocked from reaching the blond and bronze boys by the gold light and were brought back to me. After taking careful time I discovered the blond was a boy named Jasper, and the girl beside him was Alice, his wife.
They all tensed as I moved and I laughed quietly to myself, I knew exactly what I was, what I didn't know was how I came to be one.
"It's alright Jasper, I won't hurt you" I said, staring at the colours of light that flowed towards him, only for it to bounce off of my light. The colours all turned to blue and I had a feeling this meant they were confused.
"Do you know what we are? What you are?" Another blond man, an older one asked me. After studying him for awhile I discovered he was Dr Carlisle Cullen. The name Cullen rang a bell somewhere but I couldn't place it.
"You're vampires and I'm guessing I am one now also? Hence the days of pain" I replied. I stared at each of them, the tall bronze haired boy was Edward and the dark haired girl beside him was Bella and they were married. The gorgeous blonde girl in the corner was Rosalie and the big guy beside her was Emmett and the small woman beside Dr Cullen was his wife Esme.
I watched the colours change from light blue to a deeper blue, with different tinges of light, all the females had some soft pink in them as well as Jaspers, and Dr Cullen's had some orange in it and Alice's was bright yellow, all of them also had some purple in them.
What was beside Alice's head caught my eye and I moved to see it closer, to which all but Alice's glows turned a shade of dark green and white and everyone tensed.
"Seriously Jasper, I'm not going to hurt Alice I'm watching the scenes outside of her head" And I was. Outside of Alice's head the area was slightly blurred and flashes of images were showing, along with the sounds of what was happening.
"What is that?" I asked, stepping closer my arms held out in front of me to prove I wasn't a threat. It was showing myself running out the door to a house after being explained to what happened.
And just like that I remembered everything, Johan in my house, Johan with the knife, the knife slashing through my stomach, Jasper and Rosalie bursting through the door, knowing my best friends were dead, Alec..
"Alec"
Rosalie POV
"Alec" Avalissa whispered before shooting out the open window and running into the forest towards the burnt house.
We followed after, not knowing of her bloodlust or who could be at the house.
We arrived shortly after she did, the house was in ruins, the roof collapsed into the top floor, the entire thing which had previously been white now charcoal black.
Avalissa was standing on the porch her eyes staring lifelessly at the ruin before her.
"My home" She whispered before turning back to us. "What did you do?" She screamed before collapsing to her knees and sobbing tearlessly, her newly strengthened emotions coursing out of her.
"It's gone" She whispered. I slowly approached her, weary of the state she was in.
"Avalissa?" I asked, kneeling down beside her, placing a cold hand of her shoulder as she shook.
"Why can't I cry? Why did this have to happen to them? They didn't deserve this, they had no part in any of this. They shouldn't be dead!" She said as she cried into my shoulder. I cooed softly in her ear, not bothering to tell her it would be alright, because I knew for her it wouldn't be.
"What happened? Please tell me, I need to know" She said her violet eyes pleading with my own. I sighed quietly to myself and began to recount the story of how we'd found her and what happened afterwards.
"And you looked for them?" She asked, her pretty eyes wide, I didn't have it in myself to be jealous of her beauty. Her chestnut red hair was perfectly curled down to the middle of her back, she had wide violet eyes that glowed, her lips were cupid bows and red, her nose thin and finely shaped eyebrows graced her white skin. She was tall around 5"10 with a long slender body.
"We looked, but we couldn't pick up the trail, it was raining. I'm sorry Avalissa" I replied and she flinched.
"I won't give up hope, Alec will find me again he promised he would" She mumbled. I could only nod, perhaps he would find her again.
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