Characters belongs to Stephenie Meyer. This is just a fanmade story by me.
Hey peeps!
Yep, a new story, but this one I've been working on for a while. I got this idea for almost 6 months ago or someth, but it's first now that I've decided to put it up. I really love this one myself because it's, well, amazing. Hehe.
Short summary for this story:
What if Bella had gotten hit by Tyler's van that fateful day? What if she fell into a coma? What if, through that accident, her shield came down as her mind's guard faltered? What if Edward could now read Bella's thoughts?
This first part here is an excerpt of Twilight, it's right before where my story starts.
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"My truck seemed to have no problem with the black ice that covered the roads. I drove very slowly, though, not wanting to carve a path of destruction through Main Street.
When I got out of my truck at school, I saw why I'd had so little trouble. Something silver caught my eye, and I walked to the back of the truck -- carefully holding the side for support -- to examine my tires.
There were thin chains crisscrossed in diamond shapes around them. Charlie had gotten up who knows how early to put snow chains on my truck. My throat suddenly felt tight. I wasn't used to being taken care of, and Charlie's unspoken concern caught me by surprise.
I was standing by the back corner of the truck, struggling to fight back the sudden wave of emotion the snow chains had brought on, when I heard an odd sound.
It was a high-pitched screech, and it was fast becoming painfully loud.
I looked up, startled.I saw several things simultaneously. Nothing was moving in slow motion, the way it does in the , the adrenaline rush seemed to make my brain work much faster, and I was able to absorb inclear detail several things at once.
Edward Cullen was standing four cars down from me, staring at me in horror. His face stood out from a sea of faces, all frozen in the same mask of shock.
But of more immediate importance was the darkblue van that was skidding, tires locked and squealing against the brakes, spinning wildly across the ice of the parking lot. It was going to hit the back corner of my truck, and I was standing between them."
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Bella's POV:
The sound of screeching car tires against hard, icy concrete filled my ears, and made everything else completely blocked out. I heard nothing but my oncoming death. In a matter of seconds it'd be all over. My life would be over.
I could see the van swerving against the ice, out of control. It would hit me any second now. The impact would be hard, and I would most likely not survive. That's what I kept thinking as Tyler's van came, inch by inch, closer and closer.
I'm going to die..
I couldn't help but to look to my left again, and at the person who was standing a few parking spaces away, leaning against the hood of his sleek, silver Volvo. His facial expression was of horror, and his skin looked even paler than usual. The honey-golden eyes were transfixed on me. Only me. He knew, too, of my fate.
I briefly imagined that he perhaps did care for me after all, even if he acted like a bipolar most of the time. At least he looked like he cared now, but perhaps it was just shock. Or my imagination, which was very probable here. Or a reaction to the shock that he no doubt saw on my face now.
How often did you actually see one of your classmates getting killed right in front of your very eyes after all?
It must be shock.
The van was now only a few feet away, and so I closed my eyes, preparing for the crash. It went faster than I would've thought, and I barely felt anything. It was just dark now.
I was alone, and there was just pure emptiness surrounding me.
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Next chapter = Edward's POV
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