Ok this story is a cross over between The Lovely Bones and Maximum Ride…kinda. I mixed it up a little, The lovely bones mixes in because it is the idea list, What happens in that book happens in this story! And Maximum Ride mixes in…because all the characters are in it!

The flock has defeated Itex and Mr. Chu (I call him chewy…hehe). The flock has not fought in a while…so they have gotten weaker. Max and Fang has bought a house in Pennsylvania(in the country…like corn fields are every where). They are all in school, Max, Fang, Iggy, and Nudge are in college(Nudge just starting) Gazzy is in 11th grade, and Angel is in 9th grade. (everyone at school knows Angel as Angela)

Max-22yrs old

Fang-22yrs old

Iggy-22yrs old

Nudge-20yrs old

Gazzy-16yrs old

Angel-14yrs old

This Story may be sad! Just saying….death of a character.

Chapter 1, The Horrible Beginning.

Angels POV

My name is Angel Ride, but everyone knows me as Angela. I was 14 years old when I was murdered on November, 19 2013.(Random date…I don't really know when Angel will be 14). Everyone expected me/the flock to be murdered by random evil sciencetists…but no one expected our neighbor. Someone we knew but not exactly trusted.

The flock has defeated Itex and Dr. Chu a couple of years ago. After that Max and Fang bought a house in Pennsylvania in the country. We all live there. We went to school, made friends. But of course all the happiness had to end. Max went to college to be a lawyer…and she wasn't that bad! Fang is now a doctor, Iggy is a fireworks maker, and Nudge is a fashion designer. Gazzy and I were still in high school. Everyone's life was working out great…until the horrible day came.

I was walking home from school. It was starting to get dark out. You may ask "why isn't Gazzy walking with me?" it's because I had to stay late at school to work on a project the day I was murdered. I pulled my hat over my head and adjusted my charm bracelet. My charm bracelet had each one of the flocks name on it, and a beautiful pair of wings. I walked onto the cornfield, my house being just a couple of blocks from here. Then I saw a man, my neighbor. His name was Mr. Hurst, Max and Fang talked to him a couple of times and found nothing wrong with him, he seemed ok. His thoughts were very difficult to read though…everything was twisted. He approached me.

"Hey, aren't you the youngest Ride girl?" He asked me while adjusting his glasses. Mr. Hurst looked like he was in his late 40's. He wore those cloths that you would see on your grandfather.

"Umm…yea" I said.

"So how's your family?" He asked. It would have been weird if anybody but our neighbor would have asked that.

"Their all just great. Now I must be leaving…Max likes me home before its too late."

"It's all ready pretty late Angela." Now that I look back on what he said I would have thought what he said was pretty weird.

"Yea I guess it is…."

"I want you to come check something out I made." That didn't sound to bad.

"Sure…let's see." I said happily…trying not to sound too scary. And that was my first mistake.

I was thinking about Max and Fang in my heaven. Thinking about what they would say or think when they find out I'm missing. I was also thinking about Mr. Hurst going up to them and saying "I hope they catch the bastard". "Has he no shame?!" I asked Karen, my intake counselor in my heaven. "Exactly" she said and made her point. There was no bullshit in my heaven.

I followed Mr. Hurst I little farther into the cornfield. But suddenly he stopped,

"Here it is." He said proudly.

"I don't see it." I said looking for some kind of man made thing.

"Then you should be more observant." I wish I would have been at that time. "It's a clubhouse under ground. The opening is made of wood but the rest is made by earth…come on in." He made his way inside the clubhouse.

"Sureeee." I said while going inside. It was very awkward going into the clubhouse because the opening was small.

I was inside the clubhouse. This was my second mistake. I was pretty cool inside because it was made by earth.

"Sweet! This is cool!" I said not suspecting anything.

"Thank you! Now it's kinda hot in here….you should probably take off your jacket." I did what he said…that was my third mistake.

"Why don't you have a coke." He said.

"I would love to stay but I must be going." I said while picking up my jacket.

"But all the other kids would…I'm made this clubhouse for kids in the neighborhood." I read about these kind of people…the kind that have no wife or kids. He must be lonely. I took a drink of coke.

"Thanks for the coke. But now I have to go."

"I don't see why you think your going." He said. I just noticed that he was blocking my only exit.

"Mr. Hurst please I have-"

"Take off your cloths." He interrupted me.

"what?!" I was starting to get scared.

"I need to see if your still a virgin." wow he was a creep.

"I am, Mr. Hurst."

"Your family will thank me" He said.

"My family?"

"They only want good girls" He said smiling.

"Please let me leave!" I pleaded.

"You're not leaving Angela. You're mine now.

I was remembering this all…thinking of how stupid I had been to go with him. "It's not good to look back on the past, your dead…you have to accept it." Karen said.

He attacked me then, pinning me to the ground. I fought hard…but not hard enough. He was stronger then I thought. My forth mistake…not fighting hard enough. Then he pressed his lips to mine, while I was struggling beneath him, wishing I could scream…..

Cliffy… I love the book The Lovely Bones! But it is quite sad…I'm sorry about putting Angel in this situation! The next chapter will have a lot more. Please Review! Tell me if you like it or not.