Naruto and the Veil of Demons
My first try on giving a harem to the title name character, though I'm leaning a little more Naruto with the Hyuugas, though, there will be no same gender ones, as I'm not ready for it yet, as well as since it does not sit well with my stomach at the moment. Meaning Hinata and Hanabi are included, though for NaruNeji one is also female to male and will be clearer in later chapters. At least that's my plan at the moment but like in life, nothing is set in stone so I might change it if there are enough factors. Anyway, please be kind and if it is not much to ask of you guys then please review as well. Constructive Criticism is very welcome here as are those for my Grammar and misinformation on the Anime and Manga, with simple praises an ok addition. Flames on the other hand not so much, since, like I said before, I'm only just starting out so please don't expect much, though I am hoping to get better as I continue this. I encourage readers egging, or is it bugging me to continue this as I need a lot of kick in my bottom to get me going. You should also know that I'm pretty new in this site, as I only understood the basics so if anyone would be kind enough to tell me how to use certain functions such as the beta, which I'm considering right now, and will decide at the next chapter, as well as the private message, which is where I encourage those who want to egg/bug me to continue put their messages to so that they can freely express themselves to me in private. Also, I don't own the Anime named after one of its characters as well some here you might think to be my Original Creations, as well as other things I might include. Why, I'll leave that to your imagination until I'm able to disclose it when the story gets there, but you can guess and tell me via my e-mail and I'll tell you if it is correct, so that I can continue to see who guess right on their own. I will say though if something is entirely mine, like the idea of this story or the noticeable changes it the story I'm going to make, like say the teams, and such. Anyway, I guess that's all that is needed to be said so now on with the story.
Chapter 1 Aged Conflict
A male youth by the age of eleven walked in the road between two rivers with a smile bathed by the setting sun's rays.
The youth had blond hair that looked like short spikes from the youth's head, with three scars on each side of the person's cheeks that looked like whisker marks with a pair of eye opened only slightly not reveal the color the person's eyes.
"I finally made a connection with someone." stated the youth happily while walking the path that lead to a forest which the youth does not seem to care at all even though the place grew darker as the ball of light descended in one of the endless rivers.
"Though, why does it have to be the Teme?" wondered blond wonder before shaking his head lightly.
"Oh well, beggars can't be choosers, I guess." he continued before his eyes suddenly opened to their full length revealing a pair of bright blue eyes who was suddenly looking around in panic.
"Seems like you found me already Demon in human skin named Naruto?" Stated a male voice before the sound of rustling leave can be heard by a nearby bush bringing the youth now named Naruto 's attention at it.
Soon, a figure appeared from it dressed in all black as the light finally disappeared in the river behind him.
"How can I not find you when you are not hiding your killing intent?" Asked Naruto as he slowly started backing away and deeper in the forest while the black grabbed man matched his pace moving towards the retreating blond, his hand on the handle of the blade slung over his back, just left of his face, which he slowly drew to reveal a glimmering blade.
"Having been exposed to it when you were young had helped you keep your movements I see." He stated as his blade finally left its sheath, before set it at his side in a tight grip as the blond backed away faster which the male mirrored as well.
"For a monster who took away my savior, my master, the one who taught me, an exiled foreigner's abandoned child from a different land, the one who gave me my NAME!" stated the male shouting the last word as the blade begins to glow brighter which was soon being reflected by his pair of cold azure eyes, which prompted the blond to turn and run as fast as his legs could into the now dimly lit forest as the male continued his advance at the same speed.
"I don't know what you are talking about and why do you call me Demon?" asked back the blond in a panic as he continued running only to be faced with a dead end as he looked back at his front.
"I do not have to answer a demon, all I need is to slay it and bring peace back to my Savior who had died honorably in battle only for the wretched demon to live? It's INEXCUSABLE!" blew loudly as he finally stopped before a trembling Naruto before getting into stance with the blade now surrounded by blue flames at his side, gripped by both hands.
"My name is ASA HARI will complete my Master, Yondaime-sama's unfulfilled mission!" declared the one named Asa, before dashing towards the blond raising his blade high over his head before bringing it down the blond with all the strength he had while the blond closed his eyes and crossing his arms in front of his face bracing for impact only for none to come instead, a gasp of pain, a sound of something hitting the ground.
Naruto slowly opened his eyes to see Asa on his knees, impaled by a long black staff on the left side of his chest with his weapon. To the blonde's surprise lay beside his left side, with the glow fading from it slowly.
"I see you've been watching me, Sandaime, you TRAITORIOUS DEMON LOVER!" Asa stated, shouting the last three word in anger before choking up blood as the Sandaime appeared within a plume of smoke.
With a sad look on his face as he slowly walked towards Asa, and was about to touch the black staff before his hand was slapped away as Asa slowly started facing him with a glare.
"As I'd let you get your weapon back HOKAGE-SAMA." Asa stated adding sarcasm, and mock respect at his last words.
"I only wish to take it out before we go to the Hospital Wing." The Hokage stated calmly though Asa could detect a tone of urgency.
"Then you would heal me right? Get real, Sandaime I know what you are going to do, you are just going to brainwash me, like you did to some Hyuugas into thinking that this brat isn't a demon, I know all about it, Fugaku told me about it." Asa stated angrily before coughing up more blood as Sandaime's expression darkened.
"Do you honestly believe what Fugaku says?" The Sandaime question Asa seriously.
"Yes, since if what he said is true then all my questions will be answered, like why you assigned me to guard the brat all those yes ago, without giving a clear explanation." Stated Asa with a smile before tightly grabbing the black vest he wore and ripping it to reveal his chest covered with explosive tags which started to hiss as the Hokage realized what he intended to do.
"GET DOWN NARU-" began the Hokage who ran towards the shocked blond as Asa called out his final words.
"THIS IS FOR YOU YONDAIME-SAMAAAAAAAA!" he blew out shortly after a loud explosion enveloped the forest.
Guess this is a good enough place to stop. By the way, Asa Hari is my own creation. Sorry for cutting it here, but I starting to feel that the quality of this story is beginning to drop and it would become worst if I continue anymore. Sorry for those who are looking for the Harem factor, but as they say, haste makes, waste. Anyway, what do you guys think?
Next Chapter
"Hokage-sama, are you oka… What is with that face?" stated one of the new arrivals who had a bowl hair cut with a pair of black eyes looking at the perverted grin of the village's strongest protector.
"I guess the rumor about our leader being a pervert is true." Stated the second calmly though as the person looked at the old man the person's pair of red eyes had one of its eyes twitching every second, contradicting what the red eyed one's voice and action was showing.
Chapter 2 Dog and Fox