Steel Shadow: no harsh or mean reviews please. Just read and if you don't like keep it to yourself. Like I always say; if you don't have anything offensive to say, don't say any at all.
Chapter 1: Yoshi, Kirby and an exploding pie.
One day Yoshi and Kirby were walking down a street, when both of their bellies began to growl like a pack of wolves fighting another pack of wolves (with sound effects).
They were looking around for something to eat when they saw four men carrying bags of pies from a grenade shaped building.
They walked up to the men and Yoshi asked, " Could we buy one of those pies?"
The men talked for a second then one of them came over and said, "that'll be twenty dollars please." He held out the pie to them.
"What flavour are they?" Kirby inquired.
"Blueberry." "Apple." "Strawberry." the three other men said at once.
"Hooray!" Yoshi said ate the whole pie in one go.
"Hey!" Kirby yelled. "I want pie too!" so Kirby used his B attack to swallow Yoshi.
Then, KABOOM! It rain pink fluff and green scales.
And Yoshi and Kirby never lived happy alive again. The end.
Steel Shadow: Like it? I wrote it to annoy my friend who likes Yoshi and my friend who loves Kirby. Of course I always beat them when we play Super Smash Bros Melee at my house. Samus Aran rules. Adoflpotter just tell me your review at school and Short man (AKA Vader the second) that goes for you to.