The moment that Amelie told Myrnin that he would be having Claire as a new assistant:

She walked through the portal into the disorganised, cluttered mess that was his lab. In the corner was a man feverishly reading through a book, his hair messed up in a tangled mess, clothes dirty and matted and just a general mess. Under the thick layer of dirt was a beautiful vampire, with chocolate brown eyes and a crinkled smile. His name: Myrnin. His eyes were beautiful: but above that was the feverishly crazed look in them which surfaced when he had only a few moments of sanity left about him for now.

"Myrnin," Amelie greeted her old friend coolly, in her custom manner of being distant to everyone: even her oldest friend. Ever since she left her true love she had been even worse than she was before, and Myrnin could appreciate that, even in his crazed state.

"Amelie, my darling, how cow you doing in my lovely jubly home on this frequently fine evening," he said to her, making word salad.

She rolled her eyes at this, an ice sculpture dressed in pale silks, her pointy features enheightened by this.

"I am here to inform you that I have found you a new assistant to help you in your mission to find the cause of our disease," she said to him. He sat upright with this, his eyes clearing away to form sanity once more.

"No, you cannot. I cannot. Do you remember my track record?" he raged, pulling at his hair before he grabbed a book nearby and flung it across the room.

"5 dead including 3 vampires," Amelie said harshly, "However, this human child is quite possibly as bright as you were yourself at that age."

this made him stand up in rage and begin to advance towards her... Before Samuel Glass emerged from behind her and snarled at the advancing vampire. He cowered back, and returned to his seat and fought to remand control of his body for a while longer.

"A human. No, you have to be joking me!" he raged even more. "She'll be dead within minutes with my degraded control now! I can't even stay sane for more than two or so hours now alone, let alone with a human in here!"

"That is why she be having Samuel here as an escort to save her," Amelie explained coolly, motioning to her true love that she still will not admit her feelings to. She has only just brought him close to her, because now she finally couldn't be apart from him no longer. But has she admitted her feelings? Oh no, this is ice queen Amelie, the one who will not admit emotions to anyone...

"No, no NO!" Myrnin yelled at her but she doesn't react.

"No, she will be coming, whether you like it or not. Or else our entire race will die out. So yes, you will work with her, I order it!" she hissed at him, fangs showing in anger.

She turned away and walked out of the portal with Samuel, knowing that this was her last chance to save her kind... Forever.

What did you tHink? I tried to emulate how she was described as being: ice cold and perfect as well as ordering everyone around- how did I do?

Please review!

Vicky xx