authors notes: This story takes place right at the begining at the naruto anime . sue me if you must but i have never read one page of the naruto manga so i wont be taking anything out of that. in this fic sakura is a uchiha but the only thing different is she has ravenblack hair insted of pink shes also sasuke's sister.itachi is in this fic but hes not evil.ok people um the reason i dont use caps lock on the names i because im lazy i dont want to it doesnt change anything really the blond line names were not rushed i just wanted to make them short the names dont mean anyhting i just made them up
the pairings are going to be sasux? you decide that but it has to be a girl sakuxlee and naruxhina nejixten maybe im not sure if im even gonna make them a important part of the story.temxshikaxino again not sure if they will be in the strory much. also haku is a girl so shes up for the pairing with sasuke.also naruto will make more jutsu's and bloodlines in the future like ive already got ways to upgrade his uei or make a new bloodline all together.as for gammer i really dont care what you say if you can understand what it means then i dont need to spell check it.but its my story and i type it how i want to i think its good even if at first i thought i wasnt good at writing storys.just a heads up i also have a story ready for what happened to the uchiha's and what happened to sakura,itachi,and sasuke's clan ill proably tell you at the begining of chapter 3.on why sakura is an uchiha well she an uchiha because i felt like making her on its actually better cause now theirs 3 uchiha's left
this is the sasu pairing from the last time i had this on..i took it off so i could make some changes hope you dont mind.
sasuxino 0 inoxshika if ino doesnt go for sasuke
sasuxsaru 2
sasuxtemi 0 temixshikamaru if ino doesnt get shikamaru.
kiba:ren doesnt own naruto...or me
ren-sama:i beg to differ on that last part kiba-kun
kiba:gulp
anyways i think ive said enough
kyuubi talk
kyuubi thought (naruto cant hear this)
thoughts
inner sakura
inner hinata
naruto talking to kyuubi or his thoughts
----chapter 1-----
A 12 year old boy with bright blond hair in a bright orange jacket and pants that most people call a 'here i am kill me' suit was running down a road thinkning one thing.DAMN IRUKA-SENSEI IS GOING TO KILL ME FOR BEING LATE'. This boy is called uzumaki naruto the loudest ninja in konoha(village hiddin in the leafs).He went to a ninja academy and today was the day before the genin exams and his iruka-sensei was going to get him a bowl of ramen if he got on time today.sadly his alarm clock went off at a wrong time due to his electrcity going out.Uzumaki naruto lived alone all his life with the village hating him calling him 'kyuubi brat' and 'demon' or the ever popular 'dumb fox'.
naruto had finally arrived at the academy.he ran up to the gate of the academy and rushed through but not before he tripped over somthing on the ground and landed on some one.when he looked up he saw the most beutiful girl he had ever seen lavender eyes that shinned when the sun hit them,blue hair that also shinned,slightly pale skin,but what naruto found really cute was the large blush she had on her cheeks she was the one the only hyuuga hinata true he had met her before but everytime he saw her she looked more beutiful to him and he didnt know why.naruto quickly got up off of her and helped her up.
"sorry i wasnt watching where i was going"said naruto rubbing the back of his head
"its,its...its okay...naru...to.-kun" KISS HIM KISS HIM 'no...no..no.no.n.i co.uldn.t do tha.t .to him'even though you want to 'SH..U..T U.P.' hinata's cheeks went really red
'thats really cute'thought naruto. "ano...i have to get going now still im sorry about what happened hinata-chan" hinata gasped 'h.e h..ehe...h..ehe.he..h..ehehe..h.e.hehe call...ed me C...H.AN' YES SCORE ONE HINATA YOUR GOING DOWN SAKURA NARUTO-KUN WILL BE MINE yelled inner hinata inner hinata is like hinata counter part thats in her mind sakura has the same thing but whats weird is sakura doesnt know anything about it but hinata knows everything about hers.except how she got it why she got it and when she got it. naruto had a crush on sakura and as soon as hinata heard inner hinata was always trying to make plans to kill sakura.hianta had always liked naruto ever since they met.hinata was a shy girl on the out side but in battle she can KICK YOUR ASS.
"WELL SEE YA LATER HINATA-CHANNNN"yelled naruto as he ran down the hall way and toward iruka's class room.hinata soon followed after slightly getting over the chan thing.
sakura,ino,shikamru,kiba,shino,chouji,sasuke,and a army of possibly insane fan girls came into the room and sat down. (heres a seating chart)
( Un un immportant)
Un Un Un Hinata Naruto Kiba Shino chouji shikamaru
Ino Sasuke Sakura Un UN UN Un UN UN
Un UN UN UN UN UN UN UN UN
Iruka(not here yet)
Sakura looked back and hinata and naruto and she saw hinata smiling and looking at naruto while he was 'asleep' with his head in his arms.sakura got really mad secretly she had loved the blond like another brother .'damn you hinata trying to take naruto.' YOUR GOING DOWN HYUUGA bring it sissy OH ITS ON (insert inner hinata thrashing inner sakura here).everyone in the room could see sparks fall between the two withc made everyone slightly scoot away from the soon to be fight everyone but naruto who was still 'asleep'. the reason sakura hates hinata's crush on naruto is because she wants whats right for her 'brother' and she doesnt know if hinata is the right girl for him.(overprtective much)
then Iruka stpped into the room."ok class first off-huh" Iruka looked at the sparks flying between hinata and sakura as they glared at eachother.iruka sighed and turned his attention to a certain blonde.he picked up a eracer off the chalk board."naruto WAKE UP" he then throu the eracer at naruto.what happened next surprised everyone(and took hinata and sakura out of their galring match)naruto flicked it and it landed back on the chalk board.naruto lifted his head up his eyes half open but went back to normal when he slipped half of his 'mask' back on.really he had been up the whole time but he wanted people to think he was asleep.
"somthing wrong iruka-sensei"he said before yawning and rubbing his eye
"nevermind naruto"iruka then turned to the chalk board behind him. 'was it luck or skill' thought iruka and almost everyone else in the room only a few people had different thoughts.
'sooo troublesome'
'my bugs since somthing strange about him'
amazing naruto-kun' YES THATS MY NARUTO-KUN
'GO NARUTO' ALRIGHT NARUTO
'dobe...hn'
'zzzzzzzzzzzz'(kiba)
'zzzz'(akamaru)
'i wonder if sasuke will notice me...or shika-KUNNNN'
'munch-heh-munch-naruto-munch-is more -munch- then meets the eye-Munch-chips-munch-rule'
"well any way class today we will be reviewing the henge no jutsu" many awwws were heard in the class room."FIRST UP uzumaki naruto"
naruto sighed and went to the front of the room eyes half open.he put up a seal and iruka prepared for anykind of prank...but none came the smoke from the jutsu cleared and there stood iruka not missing a thing except his eyes were half open."am i done now" said 'iruka'
"uh yeah good job naruto" 'Iruka' then turned into naruto and walked back to his seat beside hinata and put his head in his arms again.everyone just stared at him until iruka said."NEXT SASUKE UCHIHA"
--two minutes later--
"okay class with that out of the way...hmm well thats pretty much it..okay i guess class is over have a nice day" iruka then left the room
everyone cheered and either jumped out the window ran out the door or...ran away from insane fan girls...or in naruto,hinata,and sakura's case just stayed there.
both hinata and sakura glared at eachother then looked at naruto.hinata poked him then sakura came over and poked him. he didnt budge."um nnn.n.n.arto..-kun..clas..s..is..over"said hinata
"i know"said naruto
"then why are you still sitting here baka" said sakura
"because...i dont feel like going home yet"
"why"
"because"
"BECAUSE WHY"
"i dont feel like it"'hey wait a sec...I SHOULDNT BE ACTING LIKE THIS SHIT I FORGOT TO PUT MY 'MASK' ON'
"NARUTO" sakura then punched him in the head leaving a huge bump
"OW" yelled naruto as he shot his head up. "why did you do that sakura-chan"
"because"
"because why"
"because i felt like it" stated sakura
'well that was mean'"so why are you two still here anyways" asked naruto
"WE WERE WAITING ON YOU BAKA"
"why its not like im anyone to wait for"
"uhhhh" 'SHIT' poor naruto
"n..naruto-kun" hinata could tell he forgot to put his mask up she knew about it she saw it slip sometimes and when it did it was when he was training.she couldnt believe how good he was when he trained he could proably take out three chuunin with the skills she saw.but when he had the mask off you could see in his eyes that he was sad,angry,and worst of all in a lot of pain also when he had his mask off he had a IQ that riviled shikamaru's infact when he puts his mask on half way hes like shikamaru with out the troublesome catch frase.
"hey naruto why dont we go get some ramen or somthing hinata can come"
KIT come on its time to train
right
put more weight to your weights and go to your house
HAI KYUUBI-SENSEI
what have i told oyu about calling me that call me kyuubi-san or kyuubi
right sorry kyuubi-san
naruto was trained by the demon inside of him the kyuubi that attacked konoha 12 years ago.he only attacked it because a konoha ninja's killed his kits and mate and he wanted revenge even if it meant destoying his friends at konoha like the fourth hokage witch didnt kill the kyuubi but sealed it inside naruto his son witch kyuubi told naruto about.
"sorry hinata-chan sakura-chan i have to go" said naruto as he put up a seal and started to get up. but as soon as he did he tripped down the stairs and left a HUGE 20 feet hole in the floor.sakura and hinata eyes went VERY WIDE (think of the big white eyes with black marks on the egde in animes).naruto got up and started to rub the even bigger bump on his head.WHAT THE HELL NARUTO-KUN CAN ACTUALLY MAKE THAT BIG OF A HOLE
kyuubi-san remind me to get new shoes
right
"huh i wonder why i didnt notice the hole in my shoe"said naruto as he went to the door leaving a still shocked hinata and sakura
-----clearing near naruto's house-----(theres a small lake and its surrounded in trees)
ready kit
yeah
ok make 20 clones and make them all look like the bastard then go to the lake over there put a large tree trunk in it and make sure it floats then put a leaf on your head and dont let it fall as you walk on water and keep your foot from going off the slippery tree trunk...got it this is a test of great chakra control. also i want you to practice the bloodlines you made
hai kyuubi-san
naruto did the first part and as he got one foot on the log his first blood line activated. his eyes became clear like a hyuuga but his were blue and he had no viens on the side.this blood line he calls uei (just made it up) its the same as the byakugan but his was stronger and could see if anyone was a enemy or ally.then he ativated his second bloodline his hair turned a brightwhite and his hands began to glow white. this one is called ieun(also made up)this takes chakra from other life forms and puts them into pure light chakra for more powerful moves or for making more chakra when he is out it also can make chakra form into different things.then he activated his last bloodline and his hair began to have black lines in it and a black light began to form in the white light.this was called nuei what this one does is it can put chakra into other things from himself also he can make jutsu's with no hand signs also he can make chakra appear out of thin air then use ieun to form it into somthing else.he began to make balls of white blue and black chakra form around him while standing on water with one foot and standing on a log with another and keeping a leaf on his head with his clones of sasuke(hahah) doing the same.
----hokage's office---
the hokage was watching naruto with a crystal ball and with wide eyes along with iruka,Jiraiya,kakashi,kurenia,gai,asuma,and hiashi."what the hell is that"said asuma
"it looks to me like its chakra control asuma"said the hokage with a slight smirk
"THATS NOT WHAT I MEAN I MEAN WHAT IS THAT HE DOING WITH THE CHARKA IN THE AIR AND HOW IS THE DEADLAST DOING ALL THIS ANYWAYS" yelled asuma
"iruka didnt you say he was the dead last of the whole school" asked hiashi
"he he he is hes never done anything like this before" said iruka
"hmm it seems that he doesnt want anyone to know" said kakashi
"i dont understand that"said jiraiya
"i mean he doesnt want people to know hes good so they'll either underestamate him or just ignore him all together"
"THIS BOYS SPRING TIME OF YOUTH BURNS BRIGHT"
"shut it gai" said kurenai
"yes ma'am"
"anyways i suppose you know why i called you all here"said the hokage
"yes sir" said everyone but hiashi and jiraiya and gai
"you are to pick out your teams of the best ones that will graduate witch are shino,kiba,hinata,sakura,sasuke,ino,shikamaru,chouji,and if he wants to show some power naruto at least this is what iruka told me" said the hokage "so who wants who"
"hokage-sama i would like to have four students"said kakashi
"very well"
"i would like naruto uzumaki sakura and sasuke uchiha and...(guess who)hinata hyuuga"
"WHAT I CAN NOT ALLOW THAT"yelled hiashi
"why not its not because of naruto is it"
"huh...HAHAHAHAH no no no its not that its just that you just made a group of rivals" said hiashi while everyone stared at him with wide eyes "oh you dont know do you sasuke and naruto are rivils and sakura and hinata are rivils"
"they are i knew about sasuke and naruto but sakura and hinata weird"said kakashi
"the pink haired one doesnt like hinata's crush on naruto as such she developed a rivalery between the two"
"i see"said kakashi
"why dont you care that he is in hinata group i thought you hated naruto"said jiraiya
"huh i dont hate naruto hes my friends son and...heheh hinata is his fiancé" said hiashi with a stern look(kinda he was trying not to burst out laughing)
"NANI THEY ARE ENGAGED"yelled kurenia
"yep"
"since when"
"since they were born i guess"
everyone was staring at him wide eyed. "what"asked hiashi
"enough about naruto and hinata's...arangement...let us first find out what naruto is doing"said kakashi
"yeah i want to find out what this brat is doing"said jiraiya
---back to naruto--
kit
ya i know their watching me
and you dont care?
no they cant copy this because of my uei bloodline plus i doubt they will tell anyone
right making this bloodlines is a very special talent kit...i just hope you know that
kyuubi-san its getting late you should go to sleep
oi i stay with you till your done training no sooner
fine then im going to bed in 1 hour
okay make sure you keep this up till then it will help your control and reserves
right
-back in the office 30 minute later-
"HE HASNT DONE ANYHTING DIFFERENT FOR A HALF HOUR"yelled jiraiya
"but the question is jiraiya is how he is still doing it"said the hokage
"huh"
"it looks to me like that chakra could defeat at least 20 highly trained chuunin"
"hes right maybe i should go and see how much he is-" said hiashi but he was cut off
"hiashi if you go down there...you'll be blind for a days"said kakashi
"and how do you know that"
"if he drains that much chakra think about how much is just lingering there"
"i...see your point kakashi"
----another 30 minutes later----
"damn with all that chakra he could kill 3 jounin"said jiraiya
"you dont think...its kyuubi's chakra"said kurenia
"no its not kyuubi chakra is red all i see is white black and blue"said hiashi
"okay so blue is naruto's chakra but whats with this black and white chakra"said gai
"i suppose its part of the things hes doing...i will call him here after hes done and ask him about it"said the hokage
"may we stay would we like to know too"said jiraiya
"if he wants extra people to know and...if he wants anyone to know at all"
"right"
---back to naruto---
okay kit times up hurry before some one comes
right naruto then turned off all his bloodlines, the leaf fell off his head, and his foot slipped off the tree trunk and landed on the water and the balls of charka around him along with the clones disappeared in a puff of smoke or a bright light.he then walked to the edge of the lake and preformed a couple of seals and dissapeared in a blast of black,white,red,and blue flames.
--hokage's office (again)---
"where did he go" said hiashi
"where did who go"said a voice behind hiashi.everyone turned and looked behind and saw naruto standing there calmy with his back on a wall.
"when did you get there"asked jiraiya "i didnt see you come in"
"you guys are blind if you couldnt see my flames"
"naruto you knew we were watching didnt you"said the hokage with a smile naruto smiled back
"of course i could sence your charka from the crystal ball"
"WHAT" yelled kurenia "that impossible to do not even the byakugan can see this far"
"ah but i can with my uei"
"uei"asked everyone in the room
"yes uei my blood line"
"naruto you dont have a blood line like that" said the hokage
"i made it"
everyone was staring at him wide eyed.everyone but the hokage and kakashi they gave naruto a look like that but it was smaller
naruto sighed "i guess i should tell you...i made 3 blood line uei,ieun,and nuei i made them while i was reading about bloodlines"
"you made bloodlines..." said gai as he put his head down and everyone but naruto plugged their ears. "THIS IS TRULY THE POWER OF THE SPRING TIME OF YOUTH" SUPER YELLED GAI. naruto yawned.
"well mister spring time of youth i must be going.. using all that chakra has made me tired"
"naruto" started the hokage "i want you to know...keeping that 'mask' of yours up isnt smart it will hurt you and those around you when you finally let it down"
"i know jiji" said naruto " demo...im not going to let it down until...i finish my training..oh right heres a scroll the kyuubi wanted to give you BYE" said naruto as he bursted into flames again leaving a very shocked room of people. the hokage opened the scroll and it told the story about why the kyuubi attacked konoha and a 2 notes.written by naruto but throught by the kyuubi. (kyuubi had control of naruto when he wrote the scroll)
notes on scroll: the man that led the ninja's that killed my kits and mate was a tall man with white skin purple tounge yellow slited eyes with purple markings around them and looked slightly like a snake his name was...orochium(you probaly thought i was going to say orochimaru didnt you well no i wasnt) brother of the konoha sennin orochimaru(yes brother)
note two:orochium is dead i killed him when i found him beside my kits and mate and i made sure that he couldnt be revived by anyone...also i want you to make sure naruto the boy im in right now has...at least some happiness in his life if i were to ever leave him for some reason
"well then this changes everything"said the hokage as he told everyone to tell the village about the scroll
--1:00 in the morning--
"HOKAGE-SAMA WHY DID YOU CALL ALL OF US HERE"yelled a villager the hokage had told every adult in the village to come here at 1:00 when their children were asleep
"SCILENCE I HAVE CALLED YOU ALL HERE BECAUSE I WISH TO TELL YOU THE TRUTH OF THE KYUUBI ATTACK"
everyone started mumering about somthing until one villager shouted. "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT THE KYUUBI ATTACKED US BECAUSE HES A MOSTER JUST LIKE THAT BO-" the villager was cut off by 50 anbu surrounding him along with itachi in his weasel anbu uniform.
"naruto isnt a monster and neither is kyuubi stay quiet for five minutes and let the hoakge talk or ill slit your vocal cords and you wont be able to talk ever again"said itachi with a kunai right above the villager's vocal cord(i dont really know where that is).the man stared to sweat but grew scilent either way
the hokage chuckled a bit at itachi's actions but it stopped as he grew serious. he then yelled out "I WISH TO TELL THE THE TRUE REASON FOR THE KYUUBI ATTACK NOW AND A SECRET THAT WAS NOT TOLD TO ANY OF YOU IN CASE NARUTO WAS PUT IN DANGER" the hokage paused for a minute."THE REASON THE KYUUBI ATTACKED IS BECAUSE OROCHIUM OROCHIMARU'S BROTHER HAD KILLED KYUUBI'S KITS AND MATE WITH LEAF NINJA'S THE KYUUBI KILLED OROCHIUM FOR HIS CRIME AND THEN KILLED THE NINJA'S BUT HE DIDNT STOP THERE HE WAS BLINDED BY RAGE AND ATTACKED KONOHA FOR REVENGE"he paused again."ALSO I WISH TO TELL YOU THAT THE FOURTH WHO SEALED THE KYUUBI IN NARUTO WAS...NARUTO'S FATHER"ended the hokage as he left.everyone then felt sorry for ever treating naruto the way they did and wanted to say that they were sorry but they knew they couldnt...why? because he was asleep and everyone was tired.they all left to their homes and went to bed.even the hokage.
little did they know that naruto was up the whole time on a roof and was smiling not a fake one but a real one.
'maybe now the kit can be happy even with out his mask' come on kit time for bed
hai kyuubi-san
---end chapter---
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