Ok people, my first fan fic hope u like!

Prologue: the dream

It was dark with no hint of light. I looked around hoping to see something but nothing happened. I stepped forward a step and the darkness shimmered. With a little hope, I stepped forward again, and it shimmered more. The more I stepped the more the darkness shivered. At last, I stood in a giant ballroom covered in red and white roses. The floor was spotted with more roses and a few rolls of silk. 'Wow' I thought 'these people must be really rich.'

A man in a elegant, black old English tux walked over to me. He was tall with lean mussel's shiny black hair and ice blue eyes. Upon closer inspection, I discovered he was not really a man but only 17. "Princess" he stated as he bowed low to the ground "we will come for you soon" with that he vanished. The darkness consumed me again I woke a terrible shrill voice screamed, "we will come dreary we will come and soak your future in blood and pain!"

sooooo how was it? good? great?

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