Couldn't stand it
Dawn's POV
I just couldn't believe what I was hearing no matter how many times I heard it even though the evidence was right in front of me.
1 hour earlier
I was happy with my life, I couldn't ask for a better one. I mean who wouldn't be happy living in a nice big two story house, a well-paid job, and living with your soon to be husband. I just couldn't say no to him when he proposed. What I felt was happiness and ….sadness. Don't get me wrong I was excited when Paul proposed it was exciting. It's just I all was pictured my best friend Ash would be the one to propose to me, but I'm and all was will be just a friend to him. But even thou Paul wasn't the one I pictured I still said yes. Things were going great, until I resaved a call from Brock when I was washing dishes. When I first rely it was Brock I first thought he was just calling to say hi and see what I was up to. But from the sound of his voice I could tell I was way off. When I first asked him what's wrong his response maid me regret asking that. His exact words were "Ash is dead". Those words sent chills down my spine. I couldn't believe what I was hearing. I just couldn't believe it, the guy survives anything is died. I was brought back when Brock told me I should go to the site. When arrived at Ash's house I couldn't believe what I was seeing. There was Ash lying on his bed with a Model SW1911 handgun in his right hand and a gory sight of blood ever where on the wall from the bullet shot through his head. As I looked over his body, the look on his face looked filled with pain and sadness. I saw Brock walk over to me and tell me chilling news.
Present
I just couldn't believe what I was hearing no matter how many times I heard it even though the evidence was right in front of me. As I looked down at the paper Brock gave me had all the proof. The more times I read it the more I couldn't believe it even thou it was all on this paper. Paul finally arrived taking me home a few minutes later. When we finally arrived home he took me up stairs and sat me on the bed. I couldn't contain all the tears coming out of my eyes as I cried on his chest until I fell asleep.
Normal POV
As Dawn cried herself to sleep the note laid open on the floor saying:
To: Dawn
I'm sorry but I couldn't take it any more watching with my rival. Ever since you to got together I just couldn't stand watch him having the love of the girl I love with my very being. I all was put on a fake smile when you guys were around. So many times I felt like telling you he's not the one for you I I'm, but I couldn't bring myself to do it, because of the way you stare at him with those eyes of yours. When he proposed to you and you said yes my whole world crumbled before me along with my heart. So I decided to the first thing that came to mind. I'm not sure if it's the right choice but it's too late to turn back now. I just wanted to say good bye Dawn and I will always love you. I just…couldn't stand it anymore…..I'm sorry good bye Dawn.
Love Ash
I hope you guys liked my second story.
P.S: both this story and my other one called wishing are written the exact day they are published. Thanks. :D