OK everybody im going to change this around. a bit so it could be a little like a book so let me know what you think. and if I should change the whole story like this.
Package
Tohru
just got done fixing dinner and now setting the table. After she was
sure that every thing was on the table did tohru call every body down
for bearkfest. After Yuki and Sihgure thanked tohru for making dinner
and began to eat did tohru realize that kyo havent yet came too the
talbe. Kyo may be late some times but hes always was at the table by
the time they all be gan to eat. Since Tohru didnt know where kyo was
she asked YUki and Shigure where Kyo could be.
"Don't you remember the stupid cat said he'll be late coming from Shihans Dojo." said Yuki after he got done refilling his plate.
"OH,
I hope he doesn't come to---." Said Tohru when someone was
knocken at the door.
After tohru put down her Sliverware she went
to go answer the door, along with Yuki, because he was curieus about
someone being at the door around dinner time.
AT
THE DOOR
When
tohru answer the door she saw that there was an Delivery Boy at the
door. When tohru opened the door all the way to show Yuki and Shigure
behind her (she dosent realize that thier behind her.) The Deliver
boy Takes off his hat and says"Hello, Im from Patalsca's deliver
service is there Aa Kyo Sohma around?" When tohru was sure
that the Delivery boy was done she was about to say that Kyo wasnt in
right now when Kyo inturruped her.
"Hey! Who the Hell are you? And your In my way!"-Kyo yells angerily he had a bad day at the Dojo and wanted someone to take it out on besides Tohru and the delivery guy was a good Idea. When Kyo was done yelling The delvier boy said very clamly like he wasnt effective be him and asked Kyo to sign here. When Kyo made no move to sign the delivery boy said. "Sir there is a package from Amer-" the deliver boy didnt get to finsih because Kyo graped the pad and pen said the paper and asked for the package.
When the delivery boy put the package in the hallway. He bended everyone a good night and left.
Okey everybody this may be the new way I write the stroy if you tell me I should. even if you donrt I'll still just probbly change everything.