Hey, everyone.
This story is originally titled as Midnight Writer. It's identical to the first version with the exception of OC's and the dizzying switches from one character point of view to another. I've deleted the first version and am considering whether to delete the second one (MW Rewritten) too.
Here's the latest, cleaner version.
As we all know it, Butch Hartman owns Danny Phantom. And we were (still are) all disappointed that they discontinued it.
PROLOGUE
Patience was definitely not Vlad Plasmius' best suit. Everybody knew that. It was evident when his two thick, black ghostly eyebrows furrowed hard as something materialized in front of him. His sadistic, frightening, red eyes narrowed fiercely as a stout bluish ghost appeared right before his being, trembling like a baby chick.
"Well?" He demanded, his rich voice reverberating in the solid walls of the dark castle.
The ghost flinched visibly. "Uh...Uhm.."
"Where?" Bellowed the vampire-featured ghost, his eyes turned to sharp slits as he threw a pink ray toward the pathetic ghost.
The azure fat ghost emitted an ear-shattering girly shriek as the beam almost hit him. His ghastly eyes widened in fear as he looked frantically to his master. He swallowed a large lump from his throat and began to speak.
"I..t-the b-box gh-" He started shakily, trying to amplify his voice as if attempting to fight off the wave of fright that was trying to eat him.
"I need the place!"
The box ghost started fidgeting again. "Uh...it's..."
"Where?" This time his master's ghostly arm was already stretched out, aiming directly at him. The box ghost panicked. His eyes darted back and forth and his floating body quaked harder and faster.
"A-Amity Park, sir!" He blurted out, his arms both raised up in defense, eyes closed in fright.
All of a sudden, his master's angry expression seemed to fade away. He let his arm fall back to his sides.
"Amity Park." The master echoed as his bloody red eyes lit up slyly. The box ghost couldn't figure out whatever he was thinking. All he knew was that he was safe from his master's punishmentâfor now.
"He's searching for him." The vampire-like ghost stated, the box ghost didn't know if his master was still talking to him or himself. "Craving for revenge." His master then let out a loud lunatic laugh that went bouncing off the walls of his freezing, almost deserted castle.
-The summary was about Sam and the prologue started off with Vlad. That reflects my unpredictability, I guess.
-Is it better than the two previous versions or I only made it worse?
-Thanks.
~T.E
