This is the first chapter.
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Satchiel looked around. There was no one. He crept into the kitchen, and saw the watch dwarf, asleep.
Satchiel almost snickered, because the watch dwarf was abnormally fat.
He touched the tip of his ear, which was slanted. He was kinda tall, but not really. He had strange ears, an angled face, and is unnaturaly athletic. His mother was like this, before she died to Galbatorix.
Satchiel, though he was called a boy, was really about eighteen years old, with light, shifting brown hair. It was a mix between brown and blonde. His eyes were an eccentric green color.
He silently crept around to the big pantry. He opened it, and was thankful that it was still oiled. He reached up and took the loaf of bread. When he turned around, however, the dwarf had stirred. Satchiel ran in a burst of speed, still silent, out through the door.
He heard silence as he left at first, but then a great roar of outrage. Satchiel went up to an abandoned level, where he kept his stash of food, his bed and pillow made of mushrooms, and his strange array of treasures.
The gold ring, which he found in the pantry, a rusted dagger, a cloak, and clear crystals He saw it on others, rich people, whos clothes were covered with them. So he gathered them. He had about.... 75? Somewhere near that number
Satchiel opened a basket in the square room. It looked like a monks room, a book case, filled with his treasures, a basket, filled with his food, and his bed, blanket, and pillow.
He added the fresh loaf to the bunch. He took out this pastry covered with this dilicious cream. He took a bite, and he was suspended in Wonder Land.
Satchiel reluctantly came back, and he noticed his latest treasure. He found it in one of the rooms upstairs.
An orange ball, with these white lines spider-webbing all over it.
He picked it up. He almost jumped when he thought he felt something. He put it back.
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Nasuada was visiting Trojeihm, when a abnormally fat dwarf blundered before her, and sort of bowed. Nasuada asked him what he wanted.
The dwarf cleared his throught, which made spit dribble over his chin. He sucked it back in. Nasuada watched this whole disgusting process. The dwarf said, "M *gurgle* lady, theres a *gurgle* boy who steals from *gurgle* the Varden's ki- *gurgle* -chen."
Nasuada was incredibly disgusted. Each gurgle, he had spit dribble over his lip, and had it sucked back in.
Nasuada said politely with some difficulty, "What would you have me do?"
The dwarf replied, "*guuurgle* Have im' strung up."
The last gurgle was a particularily big spit drop.
"I'll, *cough* see what I can do."
"Thank ye, m*gurgle*lady."
The dwarf left.
Nasuada said, "Guards? Did you hear what he said?" The guards nodded. "Then hurry up and do it!" She muttered under her breathe, "I never want to see that dwarf again....
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Unfortunatley, the gaurds couldn't find Satchiel, which he was blissfully unaware of, until he strolled down a corridor, looking for more clear crystals.
Fortunatley, for Nasuada, the guards were strolling down the same corridor with the dwarf. The dwarf tried to say that Satchiel was passing them, put he was so excited, all they heard was, "*GURGLE, SWIIIIIIPPPP, GURGLE, SWIIIIIIPPP*"
They couldn't figure it out, so unfortunatley for the guards yet again, they couldn't find him. Fortunatley though, one gaurd DID figure it out, just in time to see Satchiel round the corner. "FOLLOW ME!" yelled the guard. They ran after him, the dwarf with them, until his spit made puddles of water, and he slipped.
Satchiel had realized that they were after him, when he heard the FOLLOW ME! part. Satchiel put an extra fast burst of speed, and was gone before the guards could get around the corridor.
Satchiel almost laughed. They were so slow!
He started playing with the crystal things.
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When the guards came back, and told her what happened, Nasuada was confounded. Outran her own guards?
The dwarf was, of course, so incredibly mad, he was making a pool.
When he finished gurgling and left, she had her guards clean it up.
How did that boy run so fast?
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Satchiel went to sleep that night, fully fed and fast asleep.
Satchiel was in such a deep sleep, that in the middle of the night, he did not hear the egg hatching.
But...
He DID feel the electric charge.
He sat up, gasping and soon felt a tounge swiping over his hand. He looked to his right hand, and saw an orange dragon.
He gulped.
There was a dragon, licking his hand!?
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Well... I don't know if that was rushed or not, but hey! Its good enough.
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