eh im making a story about the guys in the 141 task force with my oc eden castro a raven haired satanist woman who would rather take a nap then make friends, so what is roach gonna do for our herione? get her a good group of friends weather she wants him to or not, will she make friends? find love (so cliche ) with someone in the 141 or will someone from her childhood come and take her away to have a normal life, or will she die in the line of duty? all will be decided by u the viewers, how im going to write this is by ur reviews, so if u want to see shepard do the chicken dance or a chapter all about ghosts fear of spiders then send in ur reviews, i dont write many stories (im usually giving my friends pointers on how their stories should start and finish) so there will be no doubt many errors and i would appreciate it if ppl will point them out to me. so with out further interuption here is my oc's profile so if u skip this then ur fucked cuz im not repeating everything in every chapter. and if ppl give me random reviews like "lol derp this sucks" im still going to write till i want to stop, or "roach is so cute~" then roach is gonna get raped by fangirls in a "chapter" (random crap which isnt even related to the story) so pretty much the soldiers lives r in ur hands so tread carefully!

Eden Castro

Age: 26 Gender: female Rank: seargent Call-sign/Nickname: pyro Appearence: raven colour hair, foggy grey eyes, 5'11, skinny, pale, nuclear tattoo on her left shoulder, fire design on both of her arms up to her elbows, checker design on her right hand (including on her fingers to her wriste) has the chinese characters for insanity and peace (shush up in my head it makes sense) on her lower back, her casual clothes (or civilian clothes) are a large baggy hoodie, white tank top with a pentagram drawn in red perminent marker on the bottem hem, ripped black skinny jeans with a pair of converse, her military uniform is the canadian uniform but her boots have a bit of a heel (more so then they already have) and they go up to her knees, her pants are more 'puffy' as she tucs them into her boots, wears a white tank top and wears her jacket over her sholders.
Choice of weapon: SCAR-H, claymore, the ocasional home made flamethrower Likes: fire, peace and quite, cake, pie, video games, satanic bible, cats Dislikes: being social, people acting like they give a damn, being woken up, dogs, girbles,swimming Crush: you guys can pick