A/N: This is my first story so please be gentle when you review if you flames. I think of them as creative criticism but if you have a few tips feel free to give them to me!
"Speech"
'Thoughts'
(A/N)
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Chapter 1
3 girls walk down a street after a long day at school. Luckily for them, it was half term and instead of a normal day, they had a good day full of movie watching and playing games on laptops or computers. It was a great day because they were allowed to wear casual clothes instead of their normal uniform.
"I have an idea! Let's go to Grandpa's before we go home. What do you think Sango?" A dark haired girl asked. The girl's dark hair that looked blue if the light hit it at the correct angle. Her hair was free and wavy. She was wearing 3-quarter length white jeans that were ripped at the knees with a lilac top that had Rachael Hale puppy on the front. She was wearing lilac arm warmers. On her feet was pair of white ballet flats.
"Sure! That's a great idea Kagome! What do you think Kikyou?" The girl whose name was Sango asked as the girl Kagome beamed. Her long brown hair was put up in a high ponytail. This second girl was wearing a light blue tank top with a pair of white tracksuit bottoms and a pair of Addidas trainers. Her trainers and tracksuit bottoms had light blue stripes on the side.
"Ooh yeah ok! I love those legends he tells us." The girl whose name was Kikyou agreed. (A/N: OK so Kikyou is going to be good for a change because this is my story) Kikyou's hair was free and straight. She was wearing a pale pink dress that had white lace on the edge of her collar and hem. On her feet was a pair of ankle boots that were white with pink butterflies on the heel.
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The three girls walked up the shrine steps. Their grandfather owned a shrine but had travelled everywhere before he brought it so the girls were always interested in his stories from around the world. Their grandfather welcomed them into his study. It was full of his books and souvenirs from his travels.
"I bet you want to here a legend I heard" betted their grandfather.
"Hai hai jii-chan!" the three girls agreed.
----------Grandpa's Story---------
Here's a legend I heard in Hokkaido:
In a different dimension, war raged between 2 groups, the demons and the humans.
This was ended when a human and a demon fell in love. They created the half-demon race that ensured peace between the 2 other races, but despite these half-demons the 2 races, the humans and the demons, are back at war and the seer says that 3 girls from another world and their guardian fire-cat will save this world with the legendary staff of peace. The staff is supposed to be made by using 3 things: the staff base is made from the bark of the tree of co-operation. Its power comes from the jewel of love and you attach them together using a special root that can only be found in the field of the dragon which is said to be protected by a wise dragon.
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"WOW!!" the girls said in wonder. They were all thinking the same thing: 'what if we were those girls!' They stayed there until it was dark and their mom came to pick them up in the car. Earlier, their grandfather had called to ask if their mom could pick them up from the shrine. In the car, they were all silently wishing that they would be those girls. What they all didn't notice was that there was a shooting star up above.
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When they got home it was late at night and they were all sleepy and didn't notice the small golden box on the table…..
A/N: OK, what do you guys think of chapter 1? Please tell me in your comment because this is my first EVER fan fiction! W00t! Yay me! I don't mind if you flame but just be helpful and tell me how to improve and I won't mind! If you flame and just don't tell me anything other than this story was totally boring or something then its just not appreciated!