This is my second fanfic. I already have a metroid fic going but I'm not sure I will continue it. I've liked the zelda games ever since I played ocarina of time which was one of the games that first got me into video games. So I decided to write a zelda fic. I don't know if this is any good but please review and tell me what you think of the story. Don't be afraid to criticize my story if you find something you don't like. Criticism alerts me to ways I can improve my writing so it's actually appreciated. Just don't get carried away with it.

The light green lizalfo named Tokay grunted and pulled himself up out of the hole. It was so good to feel the warm air on it's skin. The golden sun filled him with awe. This was only the third time he'd seen a sight such as the sun thanks to the mean humans driving him back under the earth. He flexed his clawed toes, feeling the soft grass under his feet. He looked about taking in the beautiful scenery and adjusted his armor. It was so nice on the surface. Unfortunately his kind weren't welcome there. Greedy humans. He would help fix them. Soon the surface would belong to the lizalfos! Him and his offspring would bask in the glory of the brightly lit surface for infinite generations with the humans under their feet. The humans would pay for their arrogance and greed!

He looked about him and saw that at least twenty other lizalfos were already with him. General Tozor stood tall with the sunlight glinting off of his silver armor. He lifted his black, serrated blade and pointed across the expanse of the green field and toward the small village about a mile off.

"First of many! For the children of our children we will all kill as we will." The other gathered lizalfos responded by clashing their weapons and then they charged. They were swift and strong. Their legs would not tire and their ready feet quickly took them to the village.

Tokay breathed in the pleasing smells of the village. Mm, someone was having a barbecue. He immediately identified the scent of cooked chicken. Tokay marked this in his memory. Chicken was a rare delicacy when one lives underground and he would not pass up this opportunity. He was brought back to reality by Tozor screaming profanities into his ear. "Sorry, sir." He fell back in line with the posse and joined his other comrades in running into the village square. The area was crowded with large, brick houses and people going about their business, mostly conversing and bargaining with the visiting merchants. These humans were caught entirely by surprise and began to panic, running in all directions and screaming. This would be easy. Tozor began the attack by plunging his sword through one old man. The man gasped, clutching his stomach and fell over.

Seeing this, the other people surrendered or began running away.

"Very well!", stated Tozor in a rough voice, "Your village will have the honor of being our slaves. Provide us with weapons and food and you will live. I can be very merciful if respected."

A hush went over all the town. At this point a small boy began crying. His mother picked him up and whispered to him.

"Shut up that baby!", shouted Tozor.

The woman's eyes opened wide with shock, not knowing what to do. The baby continued crying.

"Give me that thing!", said Tozor reaching for the baby. The woman screamed and ran away.

One blue-bellied lizalfo volunteered, "I'll catch her, then we can eat the baby!" He ran after her. Tozor shook his head. He would have to discipline his men later that day. He did not need people hunting him down because his men did stupid things. Tokay was watching the scene and saw a shadow growing over Tozor.

"Watch out!", he cried. But it was too late. A high pitched scream filled the air and a small being dressed in green landed from on top of a tall house. He used the speed of his fall to bring down his sword and slice through Tozor's helmet and into his head. Green blood shot out and drenched the surrounding area.

Tokay was surprised and dread washed over him. The being was a small boy perhaps 11 years old. How could he bring down their great general? Before any of his comrades could react the boy threw down a glowing pellet. Everything around him was engulfed in a ball of fire. Tokay could hear the screams of his friends writhing in pain. While they were still on fire the boy placed his right foot forward then spun in a circle on his left foot, swinging his sword. This beheaded five lizalfos, some of them Tokay knew.

"Uhohs", Tokay said to himself and ran while the others fought the green boy. He hid behind a crate and was soon joined by Rhineclane whom he knew.

"What is that?", panted Tokay, holding his shaking hand.

"I thought it was just a myth but that is the link. I have heard the surfacers speak of him. Anything that fights him dies.", hissed Rhineclane.

"You've been with the surfacers."

"Yes, now is not the time. Quiet yer trap." Tokay lifted his head and peered over the edge of the crate. Some thirty yards away the massacre raged on. One lizalfo swept a claw at link which he back-flipped to avoid. He nearly fell to another lizalfo but he rolled and somehow ended up behind it. The lizalfo didn't have time to ponder how this happened before a sword went through his neck and he began to gurgle blood.

The lizalfos had turned around and began their assault once more but Link threw down a nut which burst into a blinding flash of light. Link made quick work of three of them while they couldn't see. The others roared in anger and charged Link but he blocked all their blows with his sword and shield. They finally had him backed into a corner against a building and saw that he was tiring. One lizalfo cheered as it's sword cut into Link's right arm and he dropped his shield.

They were about to descend upon him with their weapons, thinking the fight was about over. Before they could enjoy such a great victory they were interrupted by more assailants. It wasn't fair. Just when they were about to enjoy their kill. Two Hylian soldiers in full armor came up behind them and stabbed at their backs, killing several of them. The remaining lizalfos turned and hammered away at the soldiers denting their armor, and beating them into the ground. Their metal armor made horrible creaking noises as it bent in unnatural ways. It was then that a cheer erupted among the observing villagers. This couldn't be good.

One lizalfo shrieked like a girl when he turned around and saw that Link had risen from his position on the ground and was running at him with a large purple and green sword. He had never seen a boy wield a sword so huge. It was unnatural. The sword cut him into two pieces along his middle and then the boy charged for the others. They braced themselves for the approaching death-bringer but he dug his sword into the ground and vaulted clear over them. They turned around and were instantly greeted by a swinging sword which sliced through them all as if they were air.

Back with Tokay and Rhineclane

"I says it's time to leave.", said Rhineclane. Tokay nodded in agreement. They then both took off into the field, running through the gate and away from the town. Tokay looked behind him and to his horror the green monster boy was chasing them, his sword sheathed but with his hand poised to draw it once he was close enough.

"Er, run faster." Tokay then got an idea he thought was pretty brilliant. They could split up. He then started slightly to the left while running and veered away from Rhineclane. Maybe Link would chase down RhineClane and that would give him time to make his escape. To his dismay Link was chasing after him. Rhineclane pushed his legs as hard as he could manage and he felt like he was actually losing Link. He looked back and saw that Link was standing still fishing around in his pockets and then pulling out some kind of musical wind instrument. This was about 200 feet behind him.

What was he doing? Well Tokay didn't want to stay and find out so he continued running for the bridge in the distance. He could see the bridge getting closer and a little beyond that was a forest. Surely he could hide and lose Link there. He looked back once he heard the whinny of a horse. There was Link closing in on him fast riding a young horse. Seeing them gave him a sense of dread and hopelessness. The horse galloped along mightily, kicking up dust and snorting as it pushed itself faster and faster. It looked eager to trample him. On it's back was Link holding on with one hand and with a deadly glare in his young eyes. His cap flowed in the wind like the banner of a dark army.

"Hiyah!!!" The horse went faster with each cry of the fierce warrior. Tokay could now feel the warm air from the horse snorting on his back. The galloping stopped. Yes. He was being let go!. He was wrong. A whistling sound accompanied the arrow which embedded itself in his back. He grabbed at the tail of the arrow and pulled but it wouldn't come out. The pain only intensified and spread. Tokay then felt faint and his vision began to go dark. In his blindness he still ran and he stumbled over something hard. He felt air rushing past him and wasn't sure what was happening.

When his vision returned he saw a river rushing at him. He must have missed the bridge and fallen off into the canyon. He flailed his clawed arms and his tail, desperate to find something to grab onto but there was nothing. The raging water raced toward him and greeted his face and his body with a horrible stinging sensation.

"Oh crud."

"Pain."