How to Train Your Dragon
Riders of Berk
Alternate Tangent
As stated by the title of this disclaimer this is an alternate story branch from the Series DreamWorks Dragons Riders of Berk Starting after Episode 13 when Lightning Strikes I am introducing my own Character that thanks to Astrid's globe travelling aunt is a closer relation of hers also I'm hoping to run with this story for a few chapters so please submit reviews and suggestions if you like I'll look over everything you send and bewarned Flames are met with Flames right back so please watch your wording.
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I ONLY OWN TORKKAR AND ANYTHING ELSE I MAKE UP WITHIN THE UNIVERS OF HOW TO TRAIN YOUR DRAGON I OWN NOTHING ELSE IN THIS UNIVERSE BE IT MOVIE GAME OR BOOK RITES!
Updates:
It is advise you check here every so often to read the news and updates that would normally roll out in the chapters with other writers I put all that shit here so you don't need to read the fat just sink those teeth into the juicy meat of the story - See ya!
Read Chapter 1 First Possible Spoilers
January 3 2013 - Thank you all for so many reviews and comments as well as a nice sized group of followers and favorite adds your all great I'm just throwing the finishing touches on Chapter 2 and have decided to answer a couple questions.
First one was from Anonymous "why is Torkkar so big?" well Torkkar is the name sake given to my first fantasy character Torkkar the Giant was a D&D Barbarian and was ten feet tall and always used a Morph blade.
Second from a different Anonymous "What kind of Dragon will Torkkar have? Whispering death maybe?" that's a good question I was considering that or a Scauldron but then I saw them both on Dragons riders of Berk and decided no, to both. Instead I've made my own dragon species drawing inspiration from both Dragons Riders of Berk and Skyrim to make a new Mystery class Dragon what will it be? Just wait and see ;3
And lastly from a third Anonymous "why is Torkkar so pissed at mildew?" well not answering that now it may be answered in chapter 2 but let's say Mildew has an odd taste in Women remember his wives shield paintings 3 big ugly's and a sheep O_O' enough said right?
Also a slight apology to AppleDash22 I used Cadman and Hilda Hofferson as Astrid's parents but after reading your fiction I can't imagine two better names for them so I'll just mention here if you all like my fiction go read AppleDash22 Flying High it's got some spelling and grammar issues but is a solid read and not torturing you like I am waiting to get the sexy stuff :3 -see ya!
Read Chapter 2 First Possible Spoilers
January 13 2013 - Thank you all my readers for the 20 fresh followers from Chapter 2 I was hoping for more reviews though… But I'm going to answer some questions anyway But I do hope you send in some more reviews or questions for me to answer here.
First question from Anonymous "What the hell is a Crystal Hoarder?" Well like I said in the description There's going to be a New Tamed {MYSTERY CLASS DRAGON} since the description of the Mystery class is literally Unknown or little information such as the Boneknapper or the Seadragonus Giganticus Maximums or Red, Green, Purple Deaths, so I figure hey I can fit in my own creation here as it's a nice big loop hole in the universe for limitless creation.
Second Question from Different Anonymous "Good fiction and all but why so focused on Astrid and building her closer to her Brother?" This one is a good question I see Astrid's character in the movie and series as having suffered an early childhood Trauma like the Loss of a sibling leaving her confused and a bit Jaded so she bittered over time nearly forgetting him then growing closer to Hiccup softened her enough to build a good relationship with her dragon which sets her up to be a solid supporting figure to Torkkar and also allows Torkkar to support her new character changes in the later chapters.
Third Question From My Brother {I.R.L.} "who's the new Chick?" Well my brothers always been totally forwarded She's revealed in chapter 3 you all probably guessed who she is by now but I'm not saying anything solid yet.
Please people read and review and at least 3 of you ask a question for my next update before chapter 4 so I don't need to ask my I.R.L. family to read this stuff it's going to get embarrassingly nasty from here on in. -see ya!
January 28 - Thank you all for the reviews and all you fans who added me to your watch lists and favorites you've given me the fuel to go ahead with chapter 4 things will get steamy from here on in and more guts and blood as well :3 and now for the questions.
First from Ultimoto The Great - "Ya! Something to finally got me out of my Boredom I thought I'd never get out of" ok so it's not a question but it's still good praise if it's not typed in sarcasm but thanks U.T.G. hope you like the rest of the chapters.
Second From Anonymous " Great Story, upload fast" I try to keep the chapters fresh reading other fics writing poems and playing lots of game to forget when and what I've posted helps keep the guys fresh in my head {its total hell in there} so I try to write one new chapter every 10 days or so and so far I'd say doing it all this slowly helps to keep me on track so every 10 days or so look for a new chapter.
Third from gkz10 "omg that was amazing u have to keep going with this story I Really liked it please keep uploading to this story" Well thank you for another enthusiastic comment I intend to keep this going for a while and who knows if it gets popular enough maybe I'll ask Dreamworks to make this story into if nothing else another season to the Riders of Berk or maybe a book or manga tell me what you guys would like to see happen though I'd need to get this up to 24 chapters for a TV show season.
February 13- ok my faithful readers having now seen episode 14 of riders of Berk I now know a whispering death can fly however too many spikes make it impossible to mount that things body has more spikes than a hedge hog, and it's too small for Torkkar anyway.
Also for any talented Artists that may read this I'd like to ask a request some people would like to see Torkkar, Hiccup and Aldra in a story cover with Torkkar holding Balmier in a victory as the center with Hiccup and Aldra to the left and right (similar to the star wars complete collection box set art) if anyone thinks they can do it just read chapter 1-3 and try to draw the description of them all if I like your drawing I'll use it for the official story cover image instead of that Hero machine image of Torkkar, and now on to the questions.
First from ReddFox1 "Oooo sweet! Torkkar is one rough and tumble dude! I just gotta know more about this Crystal Hoarder! :-) Torkkar's magical weapon, and a mysterious Archer? I gotta read more! On to chapter three!" I'll be first to admit ReddFox1 is a little behind the curb but it is a solid statement and a question about Torkkar across all the universes He's in. A lot of you probably think a weapon forged by a god is far over powered for Torkkar but as you read on you find it does have limitations and weaknesses it adds to Torkkar. As to the WHY he has it again relates to my old D&D life my half Giant/Elf barbarian Torkkar was given an item to be use in the forging of a weapon it was made into a War Maul Hammer but the magic item gave this hammer the spirit of a Morphic Slime giving the weapon the ability to change to suit its masters needs but it always had to maintain its same weight.
Second from megadracosaurus "Great chapter! Suck on that, Mildew" I think we can all agree on that one and Mildew will be sucking on some things in chapter 5 :3
Third from Ferdoos "Awesome story can't wait for the next chapter, Mildew is so gonna die. Btw when does the M rating kick in?" Well with the line "Sheep Fucker" in one of the chapters the M rating dose cover that type of swearing but I do agree this story needs to get more adult but also I want Shock value! When the sex scenes start a pairing so unexpected you'll never see it coming! Maybe a little bit… crazy? See ya!
WARNING CHAPTER 5 CONTAINS ADULT CONTENT MUST BE 18+
February 5-2015 My apologies for the near 2 year absence my faithful readers had A LOT of life bite me in the ass one being a virus that wiped out chapters 6-9 and one insane X-GF but now that my PC is back up and operational expect more chapter Rage, and love is this a winning combination? Well let's find out.
Also sorry for getting your hopes up with the change made this morning I just Replaced Chapter 5 because of horrible type-o's chapter 6 should be up in a few days see-ya!
February 13 Ok the long anticipated Chapter 6 is now up and warning it's a teaser we see the start of our soon to be Hiccup X Astrid hook up Chapter, also I took the time to further Develop Morgan Hofferson her clothes, and personality got some needed Depth as well as the Dragon Hatchlings. Hope you all enjoy this rather tame cutesy Chapter and spoiler alert gonna have a Big Battle scene mounting hopefully before chapter 10.
As allway's read, enjoy and please Review and comment let me know how I'm doin See Ya!
