Hi readers (: I have been thinking about this story for a while now but never really put it down in real words until I realized it could actually turn out to be a good plot. So I hope you enjoy this story, it will be a lengthy piece and I will try to add a chapter a week, but no promises are made for I get lazy sometimes xD Please review and tell me what you think, it would be really appreciated.

Disclaimer: Naruto doesn't belong to me..obviously

The rating might change later on in the story but that's still up for debate, it depends on where exactly the story will be headed, and input from reviews will really be what decides that. haha but hidan is in this story so... okay enough rambling :p

Chapter One: "The Order"

'I will change this world one day, a world corrupt with greed, shrouded in darkness by that same hatred and blood thirst….it shouldn't be like this….this world isn't what anyone should have to consider home…' a gentle knock on the door disturbed the young girl from her thoughts.

"What is it?" she questioned at the person on the other side of the door, her voice void of any emotion.

The meek voice that belonged to one of the staff around the large compound spoke up after a couple of seconds as if hesitating to answer her question.

"Uh..um..J-Jashin-sama wishes to have a w-word with you h-hime-sama, h-he said it w-was u-urge…" the meek servant girl gasped loudly as the door in front of her was harshly opened, the door creaking violently as if screaming almost breaking in two by the impact of the brute strength.

The servant girl's eyes widened as the young teenage girl stood in front of her, her own body wouldn't stop trembling. She had heard stories about the girl but she always believed them to be rumors. She had never met the girl in person and only now had she ever heard her voice. This was her first day as the girl's personal servant, a job only she could handle, or that's what the priests told her at least. No one ever talked to the girl, everyone around the compound was prohibited from approaching the said girl without Jashin-sama's direct order, but that wasn't necessary because no one was brave or stupid enough to approach her. She clearly remembered one incident that even if she tried to, she could never forget.

(Flashback)

"Adnelle-san please stop worrying so much and come sit down, you've been working on that headpiece for about a day with little rest, I'm concerned about you, so please" the older woman smiled sweetly and patted the empty space next to her on the bench.

Adnelle looked at her mentor with a bewildered look as she continued her diligent work transfixed upon the rare and irreplaceable cloth on her lap. The older woman didn't budge an inch to Adnelle's look; she just continued patting the seat next to her. The meek servant girl knew very well that Jinko-sama would never stop insisting until she got what she wanted, so very slowly she got up from her stool and carefully moved the headpiece to a nearby chest, making sure to lock it and secure it correctly. Jinko seeing this only smirked knowing her apprentice was always this cautious when it came to things regarding Jashin-sama's belongings.

Adnelle sat on the bench, her hands perched on either side of her thighs grabbing the bench tightly. Jinko raised her eyebrow at this and chuckled. Adnelle always sat this way when she was anxious about something. "Calm down child, the headpiece will still be there for you to finish, you just sat down to relax and already you want to go back to it?" Jinko's voice was calm and sweet but Adnelle knew Jinko was making fun of her a bit for being this anxious. Adnelle let out an audible sigh and moved her hands to her lap intertwining her fingers together. At this Jinko smiled and could sense Adnelle calm down considerably.

"That's better child, now please as your mentor I'm only here to help you, all my advice is for your own benefit, you work so hard Adnelle, you remind me a little bit of myself when I was younger, and that was a very long time ago as you can tell" Jinko let out a chuckle "and well I was never this fixed on making those dreadful headpieces but you seem to really enjoy it". Jinko smiled and tilted her head to the side. Adnelle blushed at this and looked away from her mentor.

"It's not that I like it Jinko-sama, it's just that I owe him my life, and I'll put up with anything if it pleases him in the end, the headpiece is only a token of my deep admiration", Jinko knew what she meant, another thing that made her very different from her apprentice was how they each viewed Jashin-sama.

The air was stale and Jinko chuckled lightly to lighten the mood. "Child please, think of your health as well, if you don't then you'll get ill and won't be able to do anything else for Jashin-sama, now please child, go to your chambers and rest, I'll finish the headpiece for you".

Adnelle knew Jinko's work on headpieces was the most beautiful and no one came close to perfection like Jinko did with the hand sown articulate designs. "Arigatou Jinko-sama, I would object but I know how even I couldn't match your work and I know it would please Jashin-sama greatly" with that she stood and headed to her chambers when she remembered something. Quickly she turned and looked at her mentor, "oh yes, Jinko-sama I heard from Hisako that you were getting promoted, a job that Jashin-sama himself assigned to you". Jinko's sweet smile disappeared and a serious tone took form. Adnelle gulped at the sight, she had never seen her mentor like this.

"Yes Adnelle-san, I have been assigned as the personal servant to Sunnora-sama herself".

'WHAT? Sunnora-sama actually exists?'

Her head reeled with unanswered questions she wanted to ask her mentor but her voice seemed to disappear. She stood there frozen. Jinko shook her head lightly and smiled at Adnelle once more before getting up from the bench and moving over to the chest to retrieve the headpiece and as she walked out the room she looked towards her apprentice.

"Adnelle-san you take care and rest, I'll give this to you tomorrow" lifting the headpiece slowly and stopped "but right now I have to introduce myself to Sunnora-sama" and with that the sunshine of a woman was gone.

-Exactly 25 hours later-

Loud pacing back and forth footsteps was all that could be heard from the servant quarters as Adnelle waited for Jinko to appear before her with the finished headpiece. Her lower lip was bleeding as she had the habit to bite it when extremely anxious.

Hisako appeared before her and gave Adnelle a questioning look, "um..Adnelle-san if you continue that you will leave holes on our floor" Hisako said with a giggle but abruptly stopped when she saw her friend's face. Hisako and Adnelle were best friends and had both been Jinko's apprentices. Hisako was the main servant in the kitchen while Adnelle was in charge of the cleaning of the lower floors and order of the compound. Jinko was Jashin-sama's most trusted servant so was allowed in every room chamber as well as the upper level personal chambers and the only one who knew the personal details about the Drutalli line other than Jashin's personal priests. Hisako adopted a concerned facial expression after observing her dear friend for a couple of seconds.

"Adnelle-san what's wrong?"

"The headpiece Hisako..The headpiece, Jinko-sama said she would have it back to me like an hour ago and I have to deliver it in thirty minutes to Keiko so she can add the finishing pieces to it" Adnelle groaned covering her face with her hands.

"This isn't like Jinko-sama, she is never late, are you sure she hasn't already delivered it?"

"No Hisako, she told me she would give it back to me, she wouldn't deliver it herself without informing me first…uh where could she be?"

"Come Adnelle, let's look for her"

Hisako took Adnelle's hand and led her away from the servant quarters to the main compound area.

"Where would Jinko-sama be at this time of the day?" Hisako wondered out loud.

"Jinko-sama usually cleans the upstairs chambers at this time while Jashin-sama and his priests are at the main temple"

Hisako scrunched her face.

"Upstairs chambers huh?"

Both girls looked defeated at the realization. They both knew that there were guards everywhere on the upstairs compound, they never saw it themselves but Jinko told them once after her first day in the chambers many years ago, that every move was tracked by the compound guard's eyes.

"How much time until you have to deliver the headpiece Adnelle?"

Adnelle didn't even want to know but she counted it in her head anyways, her voice going down an octave as she spoke.

"Five minutes Hisako"

Both girls groaned but suddenly stopped as a loud heart stopping shriek was heard. The air seemed to still, breathing halting at the terror in the owner's voice.

"A-Ad-Adnelle-s-san w-was t-th-that….", Hisako's voice was no louder than a whisper and just by glancing to the side she could tell Hisako was trembling. She knew Hisako's question even though she didn't finish it because she was thinking the same thing. Only she didn't want to ask it out loud for it seemed much more real, she wanted to wake up from this and laugh it off as another weird dream but she wasn't waking up.

"JINKO-SAMA!", Hisako ran up the long corridor of stairs tripping under her feet at every 3rdstep. As Hisako reached the top a pair of large glove covered hands reached out and held her back. The guard was 2 feet taller than her and seemed to hold back the distraught and out of breathe Hisako without much effort as she kicked and punched at the man begging to let her go. Tears covered her face as she pleaded with the man to let her pass.

The man was covered in all black cloth; no inch of his skin could be seen except the smallest slit for eyes. 'These must be the guards Jinko-sama was talking about' Adnelle thought to herself as she stared at the picture in front of her. The man placed his large hand on top of Hisako's head and a violet light was emitted.

"You are Kiyoko Hisako, you do not have permission from Jashin-sama to enter this part of the compound, please step away or I will be forced to use violence" the man said in an almost robotic tone.

Hisako couldn't believe what she was hearing, the man must have heard the scream as well, so why wasn't he doing anything?

"P-Please l-let me th-through!", Hisako continued trying to move forward, the words almost unrecognizable as every syllable was slurred by the terror in her voice.

Adnelle knew Hisako very well, she wasn't surprised by her actions, Jinko and Hisako had always been very close, almost like mother and daughter, so it hurt her more not being able to really feel what Hisako was feeling at this very moment.

"HISAKO PLEASE STOP, HE'S SERIOUS, IF YOU CONTINUE THIS HE'LL HURT YOU, PLEASE HISAKO", Adnelle yelled at her friend, but Hisako must have not heard her or decided to ignore her plead for she only increased her kicking and screaming at the guard.

Adnelle shivered as she noticed the slight change in the man's eyes and stance.

"PLEASE HISAKO STOP" Adnelle ran forward tripping every once in a while on the stairs but kept going trying to get her friend out of the guard's reach.

"You were warned"

Adnelle stood there gaping at the scene before her. Her legs gave out under her as she fell harshly, the pain was bad but she didn't even notice a thing as her vision was clouded with tears. Less than three feet away hovered Hisako off the floor, the thing lifting her up was the large katana in the middle of her chest. Hisako was still conscious which made things worse. She was in pain and looked as though she didn't know what was going on around her. The usually chipper bright eyes were now dull and lifeless, covered in tears and her mouth was parted, blood escaping the ends. The man flicked his katana like it was nothing and Hisako fell to the ground with a thump. Her eyes caught some movement at the very end of the hall that the guard was guarding. A child with dark blood red eyes stared at her with a huge grin and eyes dancing in amusement.

-Six years later-

No one around the compound spoke of the incident. Hisako never received a funeral and mention of her name was prohibited. Jinko was also never found and received the same treatment as Hisako did. Even other servants who treasured and admired the two women turned away when Adnelle brought up their names. It was as if they never existed. Adnelle got promoted to Jinko's old position and after receiving Jashin-sama's permission was allowed to go to the upstairs compound but rarely went anyway, the only time she went was when she had no other choice. No one around the compound knew what Jashin-sama looked like or talked to him personally. Adnelle wasn't even sure if Jinko did either, she never really spoke much of the God like man. All his orders were passed through his priests and even then they only seemed to get their orders from scrolls.

Adnelle shook her head 'this isn't the time to be thinking about such things' she thought and headed upstairs to the meeting room. She was supposed to get new orders from one of Jashin-sama's closest priests today. Opening the large door she looked inside and only saw a table in the middle of the spacious room. She sat down on her knees and waited for the priest to approach her. A man covered in black loose cloth entered the room and she bowed before him. Never looking him in the eye as he spoke.

"I will cut to the point of this summoning to save us the waste of precious time", he paused and cleared his throat.

"Nao Adnelle, you have been chosen to be Sunnora-sama's personal servant, a servant was assigned to her about six years ago but it seems Sunnora-sama wasn't… " he paused then continued as if regretting in the direction he had taken his words "It is Jashin-sama's decision that Sunnora-sama is now more capable of interacting with people", the priest felt Adnelle's whole body cringe.

"That is all, here are the scrolls Jashin-sama assigned to you, and it may not seem like much but this is a job only you can do" and with that the man got up from the floor and left her alone.

Adnelle quickly recalled the conversation she had with Jinko a couple of years ago…

"Yes Adnelle-san, I have been assigned as the personal servant to Sunnora-sama herself"….

'That was what she said the day before she disappeared'

(End of Flashback)

Adnelle looked at the girl before her eyes. There was no denying it, for in front of her stood the same girl she saw that evening about six years ago, but not a child anymore.

Her eyes were dark blood red, her hair was black like nightfall long and beautiful, and the skin was pale and flawless. Her expression showed no signs of being alive. She was a little taller than herself and wore simple clothing. Black tight cloth surrounded her slim yet curvy figure all the way from just below her eyes to the middle of her waist. Her arms were covered in the material ending at her wrists. The same tight black material covered her legs just below where her fingertips could reach and she wore simple black shoes. She wore the Drutalli bloodline emblem just below the hem ending at her waist and just above the waistline of her black clad skirt. The emblem being held in place by silver pieces covering her navel. Adnelle had never seen a girl as beautiful as Sunnora. Everyone she spoke to around the compound had swore to her that they had seen the girl and that she was a monster but now that the girl stood before her she could tell they were all lies for the girl was elegant, a true goddess.

"You may leave if that is all", said the calm voice of the girl.

"H-hai Sunnora-sama" and with that Adnelle quickly mustered the courage to make her legs move and fled from the girl. Even as beautiful as she was, she was still the most frightening sight, it wasn't really Sunnora herself, it was more the eyes she possessed. She remembered the eyes she saw that horrible evening when her best friend died, they hadn't changed in the slightest. The ones that stared at her, she was now absolutely sure they belonged to none other than Sunnora Drutalli.

Sunnora approached the large empty hall leading to large wooden doors.

Sighing she went in. Sunnora looked around but quickly stopped as she noticed the room was empty. 'Another opportunity gone' she thought with furrowed brows as she placed the hidden katana behind her back in its sheath. She was angry, the only reason she came all the way here was because she was sure the man she had been trying to kill for years now, had the guts to face her in person. If she knew he wasn't going to show she would have never have left her chambers. A deep voice awoke her from her thoughts.

"Sunnora, I have an order for you"

"You have an order for me? You really have the audacity to order me around and not even face me in person you lowly scum!" she hissed at him.

"This is non-negotiable Sunnora, you will obey" the voice stated, not even affected by her words in the slightest.

This only angered the hot tempered goddess even further.

"NO! I WILL NOT DO WHAT YOU SAY YOU DEMONIC BASTAR..", her yelling was abruptly brought to a stop by the invisible grip around her neck. Her whole body had been thrown backwards like a rag doll as the strong ghost like being in the room pressed her against the wall, her feet dangling about a foot above the floor.

"Really? Do you think this will make me change my mind, nothing you say or forcibly do will make me change my answer", the young girl stated calmly as if she wasn't in the situation she was currently in.

"Sunnora, I control everything around you, just because you are who you are doesn't stop me from doing as I wish, now…your orders are written in that scroll, take it with you and I will send a messenger when I wish for you to return, don't disappoint me", the deep voice chanted a few words and a bright purple light appeared before the wide-eyed Sunnora.

"YOU CAN'T DO THIS!" but it was too late, even she knew that. For when that bright light appeared before her she knew that this discussion was over.

"I'LL KILL YOU, I SWEAR I WILL KILL YOU JASHIN D…." she screamed but her voice trailed off as she was pulled into the light and gone from the realm she called home.

The deep voice remained in the room letting forth a low chuckle.

"I know you will my daughter…I know you will".

So that's chapter one, I do plan on making all future chapters pretty lengthy, so please review and tell me if you like it so far.