Hello! This is my very first fanfiction. I had a story idea, and I was like- " Ah, forget it. I'll get an account" So, if it sucks, I'm sorry. Helpful criticism or tips of comments are welcomed and I'd love to know more about being an author on here. ( Cause I've only been a reader on here…)
From reading (quite) a few fanfictions, I think that I have to write a disclaimer, so here-
Disclaimer- I don't own Naruto or any of it's characters, I just really liked the series and had an idea about a side-story.
I watched as a man wearing dark black clothing walked by. A silk handkerchief hung loosely out of his pocket. Let's try him. I thought. I ran in front of him, and put on my cutest face possible, trying to make my frail, 11-year-old self look like a 4-year-old.
"Sir… Could I have a coin? Please?" I asked, using a pleading voice, eyes big. "Please?" I asked. The man in black stepped to the side, and sped up the street. What? They always fall for that though. That isn't supposed to happen! That's so odd! Ugh. I hate him. A strong sense of hatred welled up in my chest, angry at him for not falling for my charms. I was curious, though, why he didn't fall for them. I wanted to follow him, find out more about him. I should learn about him. Find out why he didn't fall for it. No! Silly! He's probably dangerous.
I told myself again and again that it wasn't safe to follow him, and if it was, he'd probably just ignore me. But, the little spark of curiosity grew, and overtook it, and moments after the man disappeared, I flew after him.
—-30 Minutes Later-—
I followed him for almost a mile, trying to keep up with him. At last, he stopped in a district, which had some odd little fans, white stem with a black top. He stepped into his house, and when he turned right into the hallway, I stepped inside the house, the door closing behind me.
Does it suck? Is it awesome? Please let me know! Thanks!
Bigcatlover1 signing out.