I was on my way to my aptitude test when the train stopped. I flew forward, I slipped out of the train barely holding on. My fingers grip the edges and I look down at the ten story drop below me. I pushed myself up as my left arm slipped
off. "Come on Carolyn!"
I pulled with my right arm and threw my self onto the train. I called my mom. She didn't pick up,
Mom the train stopped, are you guys okay? I love you.
I called my dad who picked up and I said,
Dad!
Carolyn are you okay?
Dad the train is stopped!
The power is out here, Four is fixing it. It should be back up soon.
Dad where's mom?
I don't know, did you call her?
Yes she didn't pick up!
I will look into it.
I heard a whistle and saw a blinding light through the windows. I sent my dad a messageSOS. I heard a bang as the moving train collided with the one I was on. I jumped out of the side onto the roof. I looked into the first car
and saw a little girl trapped in some rubble. I swing myself into the car, I pull her out. She gives me a huge hug I say,"Stay here!"
I move to the other train and hear gunshots. Suddenly a bullet flew through the roof and hit my leg, there was another one, this time my shoulder, then one more into my hand, that I had put on the roof to steady myself,and I hit the tin roof
with a thump. Blood drips, down over the windows and I pull myself to the stopped train. I push myself over the gap and into a car with Marlene and I say,"Help."
The world goes black and I feel nothing.
I wake up to a bright light and my dad says,"Thank god, Carolyn! Theo and I were so worried!"
Theo was my eleven year old brother. He was pale with blond hair and grey eyes, just like my mother. I had light brown skin, chocolate colored hair, and brown eyes. I also had some curves! All the men in Dauntless had fallen for
me. I say,"Where is mom?"
"Carolyn that power outage was a diversion, Erudite defectors took her."
"Dammit!"
Sorry for the short first chapter I have to go on vacation in twenty minutes, so this was rushed!
The rest will be longer.