My first FMA poem. Please tell me what you think. It's between Ed and Al.

Brother Dear,

Brother dear,

Forever I fear

That you might hate me

Brother dear,

Never fear

For I can

Not hate you

Brother dear,

I always fear

That you might

Blame me

Brother dear,

Do not fear

I will never

Blame you

Brother dear,

Do you fear

That I might

Not turn you

Back to normal?

Brother dear,

Do not worry

I will always

Trust you

Brother dear,

What I fear

The most

Is that I

Might loose

You

Brother dear,

I do fear

That I might loose

You

Brother dear,

When we cheer

We will be back to normal

Brother dear,

When we cheer

We will be back to normal

Brother dear,

There's something I want you to hear

Please listen closely

I love you

Brother dear,

Listen here,

I love you

End.

Tell me what you think.