Omoidashite anata wo

Okay guys here is my first shot at writing a fan fiction .Please let me know what you think so I know whether to keep writing or stop -- haha…well I hope you enjoy it

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Usagi's long blonde curly teasels of hair wave in the brisk evening air, her white empire waist gown trailing behind her as she enters the crystal Tokyo palace ballroom. a million thoughts reel through her head, she feels dead to the world her only life line cut off to her " Seiya I miss you" she whispers to herself.
A sweet violin lead melody plays across the room as hundreds of masked people twirl and spin about the room. Usagi makes her way down the elaborate gold laden staircase, her hand tracing the railing on the way down.

"Usako!" a stern low voice calls to her. A tall charcoal haired man takes her hand in his own guiding her through fountains of dancing people. Usagi's eyes stay affixed to the floor being sure not to peer into Mamoru's loving gaze. she can't look at him she hasn't been able to since her encounter long ago with a certain raven haired man who captured her heart. But she was now a queen and a wife she shouldn't have these thoughts. Usagi had accepted her destiny although much to her dismay. Months had passed since her marriage, a marriage she resisted and regretted. she held onto the hope Seiya would return for her, but he never came. Usagi finally gave into her friends' pleas and married Marmoru but her heart would always lie elsewhere. She was a slave now to her thoughts she was haunted by them with every breathe.

In a flash the palace was flooded with a burning red light the seared through the room. She was immediately surrounded by eight very beautifully dressed women her guardians and friends the Sailor Senshi. Screams ricochet around them, Usagi brought her hand to her face shielding her eyes from the light. Pain grips the senshi and cries of agony escape them. "fighter please!!" Usagi screams.

The light fades and the dust has settled the room is littered with bodies. Usagi and the senshi now silenced drop to their knees and their pale lifeless bodies collapse forward to the ground.

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Seiya's indigo eyes dart open and his sits straight up in his bed, his breathe heavy and quick. he immediately brings his hands to his sweaty face " Odango..."

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Okay well there you have it…. Let me know what you think.