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Story: This is my version of Star Wars. It starts just as Darth Maul kills Qui-Gon.
THE STAR WARS SAGA
EPISODE I
The Rise Of Darth Vader
Qui-Gon Jinn sits down and meditates as the force field prevents him from continuing the battle with Darth Maul. He senses Obi-Wan sprinting towards him. A lot of anger he senses. The force field drops.
He immediately engages in battle with Maul. He is pushed near the hole. His concentration is lost for a split second as he looks to see where Obi-wan is. That was all Maul needed he struck Qui-Gon throw the chest with his lightsaber.
Obi-Wan: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. MASTER.
Maul looks over to him and gives a smile.
The force field drops and Obi-Wan immediately attacks Darth Maul. He pushes him near the hole. He starts striking at Maul. Maul starts to slip over the edge. Obi-Wan keeps striking and stumble, they both fall down the hole.
The hole leads to a garbage pit. They both use the force to land safely. Without hesitation Obi-Wan attacks again. He strikes Darth Maul's lightsaber so hard that it fly's out of his hand. Maul falls back into the garbage. He pulls his lightsaber back to finish the job.
A clapping noise suddenly appears.
From behind a garbage pile Senator Palpatine appears.
Palpatine: Very good. Now give into your hate. Finish the job.
Obi-Wan: Never. Who are you?
Palpatine: I am Lord Sidious. You will accept me as your master. Just as Darth maul did.
Obi-Wan: I will never join the dark side of the force.
Obi-wan withdraws his lightsaber and turns it off.
Darth Maul uses the force to bring his lightsaber to him and attacks Obi-Wan. They start duelling again.
Sidious: Obi-Wan give into the darkside.
Obi-Wan: Never
Darth maul: You're a lot stronger than your pathetic master.
Obi-Wan: Don't talk about.
Darth Maul: It felt good watching his blood pore onto the floor. He was weak.
Obi-Wan screams and starts lashing out at Darth Maul. Darth Maul activates the other end of the lightsaber and swings it up to knock the lightsaber from Obi-Wan's hand. He deactivates one half and lifts the saber up to strike him down. Obi-Wan closes his eyes and throws Darth Maul into another garbage pile. Darth Maul's lightsaber drops it front of Obi-Wan. He grabs it and swings with full force at Maul's head. With that one blow he felt the dark side of the force and couldn't go back.
Sidious: Obi-Wan accept me as your master.
Obi-Wan: Yes, yes master.
Sidious: You will now go by the name. DARTH VADER.
Darth Vader: Yes master.
Qui-Gon Jinn's Funeral
Qui-Gon is burning on a table surrounded by Anakin, Queen Amidala, Yoda, Jar Jar and Mace Windu.
Yoda starts speaking to Mace Windu.
Yoda: A disturbance in the force I feel.
Mace: I also feel it.
Yoda: Obi-Wan dead is not.
Mace: He's location is not clear.
Yoda: Cloudy is his path.
Mace: I fear he has succumbed to the dark side.
Yoda: Powerful Jedi is he.
Mace: A powerful ally he is. However, a much more powerful enemy.
Yoda: The boy trained he must be. Future cloudy as it is. Only he have strength in force so great. As to go against this powerful enemy.
Mace: Who shall train him?
Yoda: Train him I shall.
Mace: Are you sure.
Yoda: Sure I am that.
A room in the Jedi Temple
Yoda stands in the room meditating. He repeatably tries to find out if Obi-Wan is out there. He senses a dark presence and is suddenly brought out of his meditation by a strange presence in the force. He stands up thinking to himself.
// A dark presence I sense. Someone known yet unknown //
A knock at the door brings the powerful Jedi out of thought.
Yoda: Enter.
Anakin Skywalker enters the room with a worried look on his face. Yoda doesn't move he stands where he was when Anakin knocked. (Staring at the wall).
Anakin: Sir, you called for me sir.
Yoda: Sit young one.
Yoda turns around to face Anakin.
Yoda: In you the force is strong. Noticed this did Qui-Gon Jinn. Reluctant was the Jedi council to train you.
Anakin: But master Yoda-
Yoda: Finish I will. The council reluctant it is. No choice but to train.
Anakin: Woo Hoo
Yoda: Shush.
Anakin: Sorry sir I was just-
Yoda: Impatient you are. Anakin your trainer I will be. Forced to do this I am. Your future is unclear but Obi-Wan Kenobi's future is almost certain. Master Mace Windu and myself have felt his presence. Find him we aren't able to. I tried again before you entered. I sensed him to be alive for sure. Only I was broke from meditation by a strong presence. The presence was not one of Obi-Wan. The presence was of someone known to us all. From the darkside was this force. Stronger than Obi-Wan's there for I must assume a new master he has. I fear he has succumbed to the darkside. Speak now you may.
Anakin: Master Yoda. Please may I request one thing?
Yoda: Go ahead.
Anakin: Master Yoda please can we go rescue my mother from Tatooine.
Yoda: Jedi look for fights they do not.
Anakin: But Yoda I fear that if Obi-Wan has joined the darkside that he may try to turn me.
Yoda: True.
Anakin: He may go after my mother to try and turn me. Please.
Yoda: Immediately we must go.
Aboard a Republic Cruiser
Yoda is sitting by his new padawans side. Anakin is piloting the ship. There are two Jedi aboard with them Wehm Yoshin, a Jedi Knight who was sitting meditating. He was a quiet Jedi. Den Kit also was aboard he had Wehm as a padawan before Wehm passed the Test to become a Knight. Den was sitting down floating things around with the force.
Den: How long now.
Anakin: We have just arrived in orbit.
Den: The excitement is intense.
Yoda gives Den a shifty look.
Yoda: Bring us down on the outer rim of the planet.
Den: Hey Wehm wakey wakey
Den uses the force and aims a lamp at him. Wehm reacts quickly and strikes it in mid-air with his lightsaber.
Den: Good former padawan. Come on where there.
Wehm: Master Yoda I sensed a disturbance near in the force.
Yoda: Also did I.
Anakin: Master we must hurry I fear my mother to be in grave danger.
They land and all four get off the cruiser. They each get aboard a Jedi Speeder and speed to the main city in Tatooine. They speed straight to the slave part of town and Anakin leaps of his he runs into he's old home.
Anakin: Mother quick come on.
Shmi: Ani how are you.
Anakin grabs he's mother by the arm and drags her outside.
Anakin: Mother some one is coming here after you.
Shmi: Watto will never free me Ani.
Anakin: Oh yeah I forgot.
Yoda: A problem that is not pay him a quick visit I shall. Wehm, Den make sure Anakin and his mother make it safely back to the cruiser.
Den: Yes Master
Yoda: Young padawan may the force be with you.
Anakin: Bye master.
The two Jedi and the young padawan with his mother speed of towards the cruiser. Yoda speeds of towards wattos shop. He speeds straight into it and stops inches away from Watto.
Watto: What are you doing?
Yoda: Anakin Skywalkers mother. Free her.
Watto: Never.
Yoda waves he's hand and says it again.
Watto: What another Jedi I cannot be fooled by that.
Yoda looks impatient. He puts out he's hand and throws Watto against a shelf. He holds him against it with the forcer and walks over to him.
Yoda: His mother free?
Watto: Yes go go.
The Republic Cruiser
Wehm, Den, Anakin and Shmi get in sight of the cruiser.
Wehm and Den scream at Anakin.
Wehm & Den: Anakin stop their stay here.
Anakin pulls back his speeder. In addition, Wehm and Den do.
Shmi: What is happening.
Anakin: I sense it to.
Shmi: Sense what?
Den: He is aboard our ship.
Shmi: Who
Wehm: Obi-Wan.
Shmi: But I thought he was a Jedi.
Anakin: He has joined the dark side.
The ramp lowers from the cruiser and a dark hooded figure emerges. He walks to the bottom. Turns to face the four and drops his black hood. The face that once was Qui-Gon Jinn's padawan was the same. But some how it was different it had lost the young spirited feeling. It was just filled with pure evil thoughts.
Darth Vader walked towards them. Wehm and Den departed from their speeders and walked to meet him on his path. They both activated there Blue and yellow lightsabers. Vader activated his Double sided lightsaber.
Den: Obi-Wan you have betrayed the Jedi
Vader: I am no longer Obi-Wan I am Darth Vader.
They all started duelling. Vader back flipped away from them both and used the force to throw Wehm to the floor. Vader then used the force to take Den's lightsaber he swung to strike a helpless Jedi but Wehm blocked the shot. They started fighting. Den went for his lightsaber back but Vader turned round and threw the lightsaber into the cruiser. Den sprinted to the cruiser. While Wehm was paying attention to Den Vader struck him in the face with the middle part of his saber. He stumbled and Vader struck him in the chest.
Anakin: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Vader turned round and saw Den emerging from inside the cruiser. Vader closed he's eyes and raised his hand. Suddenly the ship exploded in flames.
Anakin: NOOOOOO Den.
Anakin started up his speeder but it wouldn't move Vader was holding it back. Vader walked right up to them and grabbed Anakin by the throat. He threw him into the sand and used the force to keep him held down but made sure Anakin could see what was happening. Darth Vader grabbed Anakins mother and pulled out he's lightsaber again. He pulled it back to strike down Shmi. Suddenly Yoda threw Vader threw the air and onto the sand. Yoda used the force and threw Anakin and Shmi onto his speeder. He pressed a button on the speeder and it turned into a mini ship. It went flying into space on a course for Coruscant.
Back on the planet Vader stood there.
He had killed two Jedi and wasn't able to go back.
A mysterious Sith Ship
Vader was knelt before Lord Sidious.
Sidious: Vader you have served me well. As well as Maul did.
Vader: Yes master.
Sidious: I intend to take out the Jedi council eventually so you will need help.
Vader: Yes Master.
Sidious: Vader your new apprentice the clone of Darth Maul.
Maul: Master I will serve you.
I will write Episode 2 of this if I get some reviews please give me some ideas in your reviews. Any ideas are welcome and may well be used. So please Read and Review.
Story: This is my version of Star Wars. It starts just as Darth Maul kills Qui-Gon.
THE STAR WARS SAGA
EPISODE I
The Rise Of Darth Vader
Qui-Gon Jinn sits down and meditates as the force field prevents him from continuing the battle with Darth Maul. He senses Obi-Wan sprinting towards him. A lot of anger he senses. The force field drops.
He immediately engages in battle with Maul. He is pushed near the hole. His concentration is lost for a split second as he looks to see where Obi-wan is. That was all Maul needed he struck Qui-Gon throw the chest with his lightsaber.
Obi-Wan: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. MASTER.
Maul looks over to him and gives a smile.
The force field drops and Obi-Wan immediately attacks Darth Maul. He pushes him near the hole. He starts striking at Maul. Maul starts to slip over the edge. Obi-Wan keeps striking and stumble, they both fall down the hole.
The hole leads to a garbage pit. They both use the force to land safely. Without hesitation Obi-Wan attacks again. He strikes Darth Maul's lightsaber so hard that it fly's out of his hand. Maul falls back into the garbage. He pulls his lightsaber back to finish the job.
A clapping noise suddenly appears.
From behind a garbage pile Senator Palpatine appears.
Palpatine: Very good. Now give into your hate. Finish the job.
Obi-Wan: Never. Who are you?
Palpatine: I am Lord Sidious. You will accept me as your master. Just as Darth maul did.
Obi-Wan: I will never join the dark side of the force.
Obi-wan withdraws his lightsaber and turns it off.
Darth Maul uses the force to bring his lightsaber to him and attacks Obi-Wan. They start duelling again.
Sidious: Obi-Wan give into the darkside.
Obi-Wan: Never
Darth maul: You're a lot stronger than your pathetic master.
Obi-Wan: Don't talk about.
Darth Maul: It felt good watching his blood pore onto the floor. He was weak.
Obi-Wan screams and starts lashing out at Darth Maul. Darth Maul activates the other end of the lightsaber and swings it up to knock the lightsaber from Obi-Wan's hand. He deactivates one half and lifts the saber up to strike him down. Obi-Wan closes his eyes and throws Darth Maul into another garbage pile. Darth Maul's lightsaber drops it front of Obi-Wan. He grabs it and swings with full force at Maul's head. With that one blow he felt the dark side of the force and couldn't go back.
Sidious: Obi-Wan accept me as your master.
Obi-Wan: Yes, yes master.
Sidious: You will now go by the name. DARTH VADER.
Darth Vader: Yes master.
Qui-Gon Jinn's Funeral
Qui-Gon is burning on a table surrounded by Anakin, Queen Amidala, Yoda, Jar Jar and Mace Windu.
Yoda starts speaking to Mace Windu.
Yoda: A disturbance in the force I feel.
Mace: I also feel it.
Yoda: Obi-Wan dead is not.
Mace: He's location is not clear.
Yoda: Cloudy is his path.
Mace: I fear he has succumbed to the dark side.
Yoda: Powerful Jedi is he.
Mace: A powerful ally he is. However, a much more powerful enemy.
Yoda: The boy trained he must be. Future cloudy as it is. Only he have strength in force so great. As to go against this powerful enemy.
Mace: Who shall train him?
Yoda: Train him I shall.
Mace: Are you sure.
Yoda: Sure I am that.
A room in the Jedi Temple
Yoda stands in the room meditating. He repeatably tries to find out if Obi-Wan is out there. He senses a dark presence and is suddenly brought out of his meditation by a strange presence in the force. He stands up thinking to himself.
// A dark presence I sense. Someone known yet unknown //
A knock at the door brings the powerful Jedi out of thought.
Yoda: Enter.
Anakin Skywalker enters the room with a worried look on his face. Yoda doesn't move he stands where he was when Anakin knocked. (Staring at the wall).
Anakin: Sir, you called for me sir.
Yoda: Sit young one.
Yoda turns around to face Anakin.
Yoda: In you the force is strong. Noticed this did Qui-Gon Jinn. Reluctant was the Jedi council to train you.
Anakin: But master Yoda-
Yoda: Finish I will. The council reluctant it is. No choice but to train.
Anakin: Woo Hoo
Yoda: Shush.
Anakin: Sorry sir I was just-
Yoda: Impatient you are. Anakin your trainer I will be. Forced to do this I am. Your future is unclear but Obi-Wan Kenobi's future is almost certain. Master Mace Windu and myself have felt his presence. Find him we aren't able to. I tried again before you entered. I sensed him to be alive for sure. Only I was broke from meditation by a strong presence. The presence was not one of Obi-Wan. The presence was of someone known to us all. From the darkside was this force. Stronger than Obi-Wan's there for I must assume a new master he has. I fear he has succumbed to the darkside. Speak now you may.
Anakin: Master Yoda. Please may I request one thing?
Yoda: Go ahead.
Anakin: Master Yoda please can we go rescue my mother from Tatooine.
Yoda: Jedi look for fights they do not.
Anakin: But Yoda I fear that if Obi-Wan has joined the darkside that he may try to turn me.
Yoda: True.
Anakin: He may go after my mother to try and turn me. Please.
Yoda: Immediately we must go.
Aboard a Republic Cruiser
Yoda is sitting by his new padawans side. Anakin is piloting the ship. There are two Jedi aboard with them Wehm Yoshin, a Jedi Knight who was sitting meditating. He was a quiet Jedi. Den Kit also was aboard he had Wehm as a padawan before Wehm passed the Test to become a Knight. Den was sitting down floating things around with the force.
Den: How long now.
Anakin: We have just arrived in orbit.
Den: The excitement is intense.
Yoda gives Den a shifty look.
Yoda: Bring us down on the outer rim of the planet.
Den: Hey Wehm wakey wakey
Den uses the force and aims a lamp at him. Wehm reacts quickly and strikes it in mid-air with his lightsaber.
Den: Good former padawan. Come on where there.
Wehm: Master Yoda I sensed a disturbance near in the force.
Yoda: Also did I.
Anakin: Master we must hurry I fear my mother to be in grave danger.
They land and all four get off the cruiser. They each get aboard a Jedi Speeder and speed to the main city in Tatooine. They speed straight to the slave part of town and Anakin leaps of his he runs into he's old home.
Anakin: Mother quick come on.
Shmi: Ani how are you.
Anakin grabs he's mother by the arm and drags her outside.
Anakin: Mother some one is coming here after you.
Shmi: Watto will never free me Ani.
Anakin: Oh yeah I forgot.
Yoda: A problem that is not pay him a quick visit I shall. Wehm, Den make sure Anakin and his mother make it safely back to the cruiser.
Den: Yes Master
Yoda: Young padawan may the force be with you.
Anakin: Bye master.
The two Jedi and the young padawan with his mother speed of towards the cruiser. Yoda speeds of towards wattos shop. He speeds straight into it and stops inches away from Watto.
Watto: What are you doing?
Yoda: Anakin Skywalkers mother. Free her.
Watto: Never.
Yoda waves he's hand and says it again.
Watto: What another Jedi I cannot be fooled by that.
Yoda looks impatient. He puts out he's hand and throws Watto against a shelf. He holds him against it with the forcer and walks over to him.
Yoda: His mother free?
Watto: Yes go go.
The Republic Cruiser
Wehm, Den, Anakin and Shmi get in sight of the cruiser.
Wehm and Den scream at Anakin.
Wehm & Den: Anakin stop their stay here.
Anakin pulls back his speeder. In addition, Wehm and Den do.
Shmi: What is happening.
Anakin: I sense it to.
Shmi: Sense what?
Den: He is aboard our ship.
Shmi: Who
Wehm: Obi-Wan.
Shmi: But I thought he was a Jedi.
Anakin: He has joined the dark side.
The ramp lowers from the cruiser and a dark hooded figure emerges. He walks to the bottom. Turns to face the four and drops his black hood. The face that once was Qui-Gon Jinn's padawan was the same. But some how it was different it had lost the young spirited feeling. It was just filled with pure evil thoughts.
Darth Vader walked towards them. Wehm and Den departed from their speeders and walked to meet him on his path. They both activated there Blue and yellow lightsabers. Vader activated his Double sided lightsaber.
Den: Obi-Wan you have betrayed the Jedi
Vader: I am no longer Obi-Wan I am Darth Vader.
They all started duelling. Vader back flipped away from them both and used the force to throw Wehm to the floor. Vader then used the force to take Den's lightsaber he swung to strike a helpless Jedi but Wehm blocked the shot. They started fighting. Den went for his lightsaber back but Vader turned round and threw the lightsaber into the cruiser. Den sprinted to the cruiser. While Wehm was paying attention to Den Vader struck him in the face with the middle part of his saber. He stumbled and Vader struck him in the chest.
Anakin: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Vader turned round and saw Den emerging from inside the cruiser. Vader closed he's eyes and raised his hand. Suddenly the ship exploded in flames.
Anakin: NOOOOOO Den.
Anakin started up his speeder but it wouldn't move Vader was holding it back. Vader walked right up to them and grabbed Anakin by the throat. He threw him into the sand and used the force to keep him held down but made sure Anakin could see what was happening. Darth Vader grabbed Anakins mother and pulled out he's lightsaber again. He pulled it back to strike down Shmi. Suddenly Yoda threw Vader threw the air and onto the sand. Yoda used the force and threw Anakin and Shmi onto his speeder. He pressed a button on the speeder and it turned into a mini ship. It went flying into space on a course for Coruscant.
Back on the planet Vader stood there.
He had killed two Jedi and wasn't able to go back.
A mysterious Sith Ship
Vader was knelt before Lord Sidious.
Sidious: Vader you have served me well. As well as Maul did.
Vader: Yes master.
Sidious: I intend to take out the Jedi council eventually so you will need help.
Vader: Yes Master.
Sidious: Vader your new apprentice the clone of Darth Maul.
Maul: Master I will serve you.
I will write Episode 2 of this if I get some reviews please give me some ideas in your reviews. Any ideas are welcome and may well be used. So please Read and Review.