Just a poem about Riku's feelings when she found out Daisuke and Risa are now a couple. She regrets not confessing to him when she had the chance. WARNING: My first poem-story, be nce but still give my constructive criticism
Read/Review OH! And I no owneth the DN Angel manga or anime I am sorry to say!
Whenever I walked down that hallway
I would always see you waiting,
You're eyes bright and happy
For the girl of your dreams you are now dating.
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After years of worrying
You finally asked her for a date
I've never seen you this happy
I guess I must accept my fate.
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I could've pushed my worries away
and asked you out instead
But rather I hid my love
and kept my feelings dead
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She didn't even love you;
called you short and strange
But after you confessed
Her feelings were rearranged
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She accepted you
You couldn't be happier
As you two walked out in the sunset;
Nothing could be sappier
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I guess this is my fault
I've loved you since forever
But now you're with her
And our love will be never
Yah, so that's it...opinions, please?