Soul Eater Fanfiction (intro and description)
- Okay, Hi, It's Spacetime, the author. I'm going to be writing an Soul Eater fanfic on this site and updating it regularly. Just a few things I need to explain.
1. This is based off of a forum challenge: Okay, so basically, the main reason I am writing this is because somebody on a forum basically challenged/bet me that I could NOT write a Death The Kid x OC fanfiction without making it Mary Sue. I accepted this challenge, and will now be posting my fan fiction on this website.
2. I never really do OCxCanon if I can help it: Mainly because it does end up crossing in to Mary Sue territory, and I especially wouldn't have thought of doing OC x Death The Kid, as that poor canon is already the victim of plenty of fangirl's fantasies made in to grammar-abusive stories and posted on this website.
3. I would appreciate honest reviews: I am trying to write a GOOD, non-mary-sue story, so please give feedback, especially if you see it beginning to cross the line in to grammatically challenged, mary-sue inclusive, of just a bad storyline all together.
Okay, let's do this thing. .
This is the OC I plan to use for this story, I really do hope I balanced her traits all right. I tried to make her different from the other OCs I've seen out there.
Name: Kasumi Rikku (first, last)
Age: 15
Weapon/Meister: Weapon. She turns in to a small white dagger that is used to target pressure points on the body. It's light and can be easily hidden from view. While the blade is delicate and easy to break, it is extremely sharp. She does not currently have a meister.
Eyes: Her eyes are emotionless, cold, and extremely light violet. (AN: Now, I know that this is already crossing some sort of line. Eyes are not supposed to be purple, but I thought it would be interesting, and this doesn't seem too bad considering Soul has red eyes, Death The Kid's are yellow, exc)
Hair: Long, thin, extremely straight and pure white. It's actually fairly creepy.
Body Type: Kasumi is thin and medium height, with long limbs. She doesn't really have curves. Her skin is extremely pale, due to the fact that she is an albino. She walks with slow movements. She is very frail, and extremely weak. (Okay, if you're somehow imagining some kind of really pretty delicate snowflake girl here, stop. Direct brain more towards: CREEPY AS F*CK)
Clothes: White kimono with purple patterns, white lace up knee high boots.
Personality: Kasumi is a very strange girl. She has trouble feeling any emotion, and is extremely antisocial. She speaks in a monotone, and it's difficult to get her excited or angry about anything. She hates talking to or interacting with anybody else. Kasumi is very calm and quiet, and extremely intelligent, with a very high IQ. She is elusive and strategic. She is reserved and generally polite. On the other hand, she is naive and has very little street smarts. She has trouble concentrating on anything and talking to others makes her nervous. She is emotionally unstable, and can never win any kind of verbal fight, mostely because she refuses to participate in them. Her one easily triggered emotion is sadness.
Weaknesses: Emotionless, antisocial, weird, naive, Easily saddened, hard time concentrating, paranoid
Strengths: Intelligent, strategic, elusive, calm
Mental conditions?: Insomnia, extreme paranoia and depression.