Authors Note - 10/07/06
I know. I suck. I am by far the worst fanfiction updater. I know that if I were reading this, instead of being the author, I would be pissed at the authors lack of updates. And I am truly sorry. I have decided to give you all shorter chapters, because I know I will be able to update them alot quicker if I dont have to worry that they're too short. So this one is only about half the size of the last. But don't worry, I am going to update it more often
Also, as you have probably noticed, I have moved this fanfiction to the Keisha'ra Series section.
Like I said in the last authors note, please don't hesitate to PM me and yell at me if I don't update in two weeks.
And once again, I apologize, and I know I suck. But I promise to update sooner.
Thanks for your patience,
:Kait
Authors Note - 08/28/06
I am SO sorry this took so long, but I've had a major case of writers block, and I got worried about how OOC the characters might be, and just. . . lots of things. Anyways, the chapter is here now. Almost two months after the last. I PROMISE the next chapter will be sooner.
Please, do NOT be afraid to PM me and yell at me to update. Reviews, and people yelling at me motivates me.
Umm. . . theres not much in this chapter that I really need to explain. So. . . I think I'm done talking.
Oh, I do want to let everyone know, AS OF THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE, THIS STORY WILL NO LONGER BE IN THE IN THE FORESTS OF THE NIGHT CATEGORY, IT WILL BE MOVED TO THE CATEGORY KEISHA'RA SERIES.
I hope that is clear enough for everyone to realize. So, when you do not see CE in ItFotN, it has not been deleted, it has been moved.
I apologize again for the wait, and I hope you enjoy this chapter.
Arrivederci,
:Kait
Authors Note - 07/08/06
Don't kill me. hides in corner
This chapter took this long because I wanted it to be good. I mean, good. And I think I got it to be good. I even proofread it twice, so it was good. All for you, my absolutely lovely readers. I love each and every one of you, and I promise to give you a cookie every time you review. If your review in anonymous, leave your email and I'll give you a cookie.
This is a major chapter in the story. (It is in Hawksong, too, but I'll still explain.) As well as seeing the beginning of the Danica/Zane relationship, this story marks a major character change. Adelina. After this, you will begin to see more of the b!tchy side of her. She'll get more jealous, and you'll see that. You'll also see Zane's . . . I guess . . . lust . . . for Danica. I'm writing this all so you don't stare at me like I had five heads and breathe fire when Adelina becomes a b!tch, and Zane starts thinking about Danica a lot.
I wasn't sure how long the trip to the Mistari lands took from the Serpiente palace, so don't yell at me if I'm wrong. From the way the book worded it--and I may be wrong, but--it sounded like it takes about two weeks. (Which is a fortnight, if you didn't know.)
Thank you to all my glorious reviews and reviewers. I love you so much, as I said before. Not to brag, but I've noticed that, for the amount of chapters it has, Cobra's Eyes has many reviews. I've got about six reviews per chapter, and that's a lot for a Hawksong/ItFotN fanfiction. And I'm so happy.
Constructive criticism is awesome, and I thank everyone who had noticed things I could do to improve my story. I also don't mind flames--I know I'm weird--so long as you give a REASON for the flames.
One more thing, and then I'll shut up. I stole Seraphyn's idea. (I have permission.) I'm putting authors notes in here from now on, as you can see. Half the time, fanfiction wouldn't le me update my profile, and it annoyed me. So, all authors notes will be in here from now on, so I don't have to keep them in my profile, but it doesn't interrupt the flow of the story. I also have a disclaimer for all me chapters at the bottom of this page, so you can't sue. (Haha.) I'm actually going to do this for all new stories, if anyone cares.
And I'm done. Review! Remember, you get cookies for doing so!
Arrivederci,
:Kait
Authors Note - 06/06/06
So cool. 666.
Anyways.
Chapter 2! It's finally posted! Not my best, by any means. It's got alot of Adelina/Zane fluff, and I hate writing it, but it has to be done. I mean, they did have a relationshipbefore Danica came into the picture, right? Whatever, I still hated writing it. Its not even bad, and I hated it. But reading it isn't so bad, it was just the arduous task of writing it. Anyways, sorry for the lack of Dainca is this chapter, you all probably thought I'd skip right to the Mistari stuff, but I wanted my story to be good, not rushed through. And if any of you think it still is rushed, please let me know. I want to get this story as good as I can.
Hey, want to hear something sad? If you read chapter 2, and get into the conversation between Zane, Adelina, Irene, Charis, and Galen, notice that Galen never says anything until a certain point. Want to know why? I completely forgot about him! And then as I was writing it, I realized that he was supposed to be there, so I added him in, but didn't fix any of the earlier conversation. So sue me, I'm lazy.
Arrivederci,
:Kait
Authors Note - 05/28/06
Just posted chapter 1. It's longer. Hehe. I'm going to write chapter 2 soon, so I'll have that up within the next week. Sunset is my priority fanfic, so I usually try to write that first, than I'll work on Cobra's Eyes. Anyways, check it out, and PLEASE review!
Arrivederci,
:Kait
Authors Note - 05/25/06
It is FINALLY done! You have no idea how long I have wanted to write this. I started it about a month ago. And wrote about 10 different chapter 1's. Finally, I came up with this. And I actually like this. The other versions were embarrassments. That's how bad they were. This I can live with. In fact, I like this. But that's just my opinion. In order for me to get your opinion, I need a review. So please, review. If you took the time to read my story, I think you have enough time to review. I need constructive criticism. Without it, my story will suck.
Also, I'm going to put Authors Notes right here from now on, so the Authors Notes don't innterrupt the flow of the story.
Also, Also: Sorry it is so short, but it is the Prologue, which is not meant to be as long. I'll have the next chapter up within the next week.
DISCLAIMER FOR ALL CHAPTERS: I do not own Hawksong. I never have owned Hawksong. So please don't sue. I have Lawyer-phobia.