This is my first fanfiction so please review...
JUICENET
Rikki and zane sit at a table.
"So do you wanna come over to my house?"Zane asked
" Your dad hates me though." Rikki replies
" So what? It's my dads bussiness meeting and he said I can bring anyone." Zane says while smiling
" ok But i'm keeping my distance." Rikki replies rolling her eyes
ZANES HOUSE
Rikki and zane walk in and see miriam
Zane walks over to his dad
"What is Miriam doing here."Zane says really annoyed
" I brought her so you could go with her" Zanes dad said
Miriam walks over to rikki. Rikki notices that she has a wine glass in her hand and steps back
" Get away from me miriam!" rikki shouts
"oh I'm sorry" she says as she spills the wine all over her
Rikki gives her a dirty look and Zane runs after her. She runs into the bathroom and turns into a mermaid. Zane stands outside the door waiting for her to try herself. Rikki stands up and walks out.
"You okay?" Zane says
"Yup, but my shirt is coverd in red wine" Rikki says sarcasticly
"Here." Zane says as he leads her into his bedroom. He opens his dresser and pulls out a t-shirt
" No, Zane I'm fine."Rikki says
Zane walks behind her a pulls of her top revealing her bra to Zane.
Rikki's POV.
it must have been the most the most akward moment ever.
Zane POV.
I liked it. ya know rikki in her bra
Noones POV.
He puts his t-shirt on rikki
"thanks." rikki says
"no problem." zane replies
The shared a long kiss
Sorry its short but i"ll work on chapter 2 soon
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