A/N Introducing My Immortal. The worst fan fiction in the history of histories. I will put the translation first, then put the original version below. I'm gonna comment on it as well! YES! I realize that some mistakes are going to still be there. I'm going to correct the grammar and spelling. And yes, I realize that some are way funnier miss spelt, but you can read the original for that! Please get the men in white coats ready for me once I'm finished!

DISCLAIMER_ I did not write this story, thank goodness, Tara Gilesbie did, so the storyline is not mine. All I did was the translating!

Chapter 1.

AN: Special thanks (get it, because I'm gothic) to my girlfriend (Ew! not in that way) Raven and bloodytearz666 for helping me with the story and spelling. You rock! Justin you're the love of my depressing life, You Rock as well! MCR ROCKS!

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get the hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a Goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was Draco Malfoy!

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me thanks!

Chapter 1.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way That is one looooooooong name. I have a feeling its gonna get longer! and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz! How original. Fangs. Does she realize that Ebony doesn't have fangs, so it doesn't make any sense?

A/N If you know how to contact Tara, please tell me. I'd like to talk to her. And did Raven really die in 2008 or is it just that she didn't want anymore publicity and pretended to die? If you want full details, check out XXXbloodyrists666XXX. It's her profile. I LOVE YOU TARA! No I don't. Yes I do. No I don't. See what this fanfic has done to me? Its MADE ME CRAZY ALREADY!