True Love Will Prevail: a Tribe Fic
By TribalGrl79
Disclaimer: I, TribalGrl79, do not own The Tribe or any characters or terminology created by the team of the aforementioned. Legal actions will not be necessary.
Author's Note: Hey everyone! This is my first fic and will probably turn out to be one really long one, but I'm posting a little of it for now to see everyone's comments and whether or not I should continue it. Please be honest, I'm looking for constructive criticism. This is based on Tribe Season 4, season 5 just started here in USA and yeah so...don't be like Oh Jay gets with Amber, then Trudy!! I know and am aware but this is my story!!! Okay so...On with the story!
A girl of about sixteen with golden blonde hair with pink and red feathers in it, and a Techno battle in a crowded street. The girl snapped when the Techno pushed her out of the way, they had taken everyone she loved including her boyfriend. Well, he used to be her boyfriend, they broke up right before he was captured. Revenge now burned in her eyes.
"You stupid, Virt," shouted the Techno, "You think you're stronger than me?"
Watch and learn Techno trash!" she shouted back.
She was being beaten badly, her nose was broken and bleeding, soon to be a purplish color. She had a black eye, and gashes on her left eyebrow and arms.
The Techno saw her weakening and took advantage of it. He lifted his arm with his zapper attached to his wrist. With one zap, the girl fell to the floor like a ton of bricks. "Let this be a lesson to you all! Don't mess with the Technos, and if any of help her, you will be in the same position." He then ran off to report to Ram.
The former Techno general, Jay, was watching the action and as soon as the Techno was out of sight, ran over to the girl's side. He easily lifted her and carried her to the mall to be treated
At the Mall
"Oh my gosh, Jay!! What happened?" cried a distressed Salene.
"This girl had a run-in with a Techno," replied Jay.
"Well then take her to Patch to be taken care of."
Jay the girl on a cot and sat by her side, grasping her hand and praying hard. Medicines were running low, so treating the open wounds was difficult. Jay had experience with infections, one he would never forget.
When night fell, Jay returned to his room to lie beside Ebony. His thoughts kept returning to the girl. "What frequency had the Techno used? Did he delete her? No, she's still breathing, barely," he thought to himself.
"Jay," Ebony interrupted his train of thought, "We need to talk." Four words Jay dreaded to hear.
"W-what about?" he asked nervously.
"I feel like we're drifting. I feel like I don't know you anymore. I mean you're out all the time, I don't even know where you were today."
"What, you don't trust me?"
"I don't know."
"If you cant trust me, maybe we shouldn't be together!"
"That's not what I'm suggesting!"
"Yes you were! If you can't trust me, we can't be together! We have become two separate people, with separate lives."
"No, Jay! I won't let you leave like this!" Ebony begged.
"No, this -you and me- it's over!"
"No, please!"
"Goodbye Ebony." Jay walked out of the room, slamming the door shut behind him.
Author's note: Okay we are off to a slow start, but I promise it gets better! Review and maybe ill continue if I get a lot of good reviews. It is Romance though, it doesn't come yet, you have to let it blossom, but I think the pairing is obvious. But I'm trying to make a good story! Please R&R!!!