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csi does not belong to me,mistakes are mine no flames pease,and i will accept cc and ideas!
Ryan walked slowly down the street wondering what to do on his week off . But then he looked up and he was eye to eye with a mysterious man. Ryan knew this man was part of the Russian mob. The man said meet me in the ally on 32 street tomorrow at 3:00 pm. Ryan looked at the man with the evilest look he could think of. Why should I he whispered in an angry tone. If you don't I will kill everybody you love. I don't know…. And the first I'm after is all the people here. WHAT, you said that you were only involving the people I know! Well if your upset you care about these people. Fine I'll meet you there…
Ryan ran to the ally with all the power in his legs. Dame it!! NO, WAIT I KNOW IM LATE PLEASE DON'T! Sorry but you were late I don't like it when people are late. GOD DAME IT DON'T KILL ANYONE! The man pulled out an a-k 47 hopped on his motor cycle and drove toward the diner. Ryan ran towards the crime lab screaming for Horatio. Horatio herd Ryan and rushed to him. Yes Ryan? Th.. the di..ner! what about the diner? The Russian mob is going to the diner their going to kill everyone! Get in the hummer were going.. No they want me I'll go! Ryan that is not a good idea. H, I can do it I can save the diner I'll call back up if I need it! Huff.. fine but be careful..
Ryan sped towards the diner in his hummer, finaly he reached the 3 mile distance. When he reached the diner the mysterious man smiled and mouthed I wanted you to see them die.
well i hope you enjoyed the first chapter i'll make a new one soon!