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Annabeths POV

" Wow, it's HUGE!" My father rolled his eyes at me." Well it is Titanic, no one would want to ride it if it were small now would they, Annabeth?" " No, I guess not," I said. He chuckled at me. I was excited, I heard Titanic, was the "Ship of Dreams." However, let me just say it takes forever to actually bored it! Once we did, we got to our room. It was a enormous. It was like two suites put together. Anyway, I didn't even realize it, but by the time we were unpacked and all, it was time for dinner. I slipped into an elegent creamed colored dress with lace at the top. It looked beautiful.

Dinner was absolutly boring. I wasn't one for people to drone on and on about some relentles topic. Finnaly it ended, as me and my father were, getting up from the table, someone caught my eye. I didn't get a very good look at him, but, he had jet black hair and a very muscular body. He was cute, but I didn't get a good look at him. I wanted to know what his name was, but it was almost midnight. Besides, I was sleepy.

The next morning my father and I went to breakfest. The same thing, boring talk. As I was staring out in space, someone walked past me. Their scent was very odd, for an classy person, I guess you could say. It smelled like the ocean. Now, I know were on a ship in the middle of the ocean, but it was indors. And, classy people bombard themselves with perfume, and you can only smell that. But this scent stood out from others. I looked in the direction of the smell, and there was that man I saw yesterday. I watched as he sat at a table. I got a good look at him. He had deep sea-green eyes, that I could see from even over here. He had messy jet black hair and, as I said a VERY muscular body. He was actually hot. He caught me staring and I looked away, blushing ferociously.

I would definetly have to meet him.

What do you think? Sorry it's so short. Please Please Please Please commet. I want to know pros and cons or whatever. Should I create another chapter or stop with this story?