Evil n Bored: I made a new name because it suits me so well for the Bunny overlord like me Mwhahaha!
Kid: so why are you rewriting this then and then what do we call you if you're not TJ then
EnB: FOOL! I am EnB (pronunciation: Ee-bee) sounds like Evee! Also since I felt I could make my story less confusing.
Maka: so what are going to change? Also are you getting rid of characters like Tori or something
EnB: actually Tori is staying because readers seemed to like her but I might introduce her early and have others including Kid struggles people accepting her like in earlier reviews.
And maybe might add other OCs of people I work with as writing partners but it's just a thought also new deleted scenes! Yay!
Maka & Kid: Oh lord death helps us...
EnB: Start the story! I might even do an intro song from a season of Bleach I saw (yes I'm watching Bleach and I'm still waiting for Ichigo to save Rukia and they're dragging it along in my frustration)
88EvilnBored88 does not own Soul Eater no matter how many times I blow out the candles on a cake (even when it's not my birthday)
Reaper & Witch Re-Edit Version
Chapter 1:
The Mission
A teenage boy wearing a white dress shirt with a comic skull ornament fastened to his shirt collar. Wearing black jacket with white decorations embroidered on the shoulders and front, black dress pants, and black loafers. The boy was pale, black hair with three white stripes that wrapped half way on the left side of his head.
His hands were stuffed in his pants pockets while walking under the red guillotined path surrounded by a desert full of jagged crossed grave stones. The sky was a bright blue with wisps of white fluffy clouds floating by. He kept walking with a blank look on his face until the guillotined path came to an end where a few steps led to a smooth-stoned platform with a ten foot tall mirror with three candles one on each side of the curved mirror at the end of the circled platform. The boy looked up when interrupted from his thoughts by a high pitched voice with a blank look in his amber eyes and pale features.
"Hello, Hello Kiddo-kun thanks for coming! I've got an important job for you" Lord Death to his son. Lord Death was wearing a jagged robe that made his body out of proportion and had a comic skull mask same as the ornament Death the Kid is wearing.
Death the Kid twitched at the mention of his pet name his Father has given him when he was little but chose to stretch the little self control he had and ignore it. "Father what's the mission you have for me?" Kid questioned.
"I felt that you were perfect for the job so I called you down here for you to guide someone here to the Death Room to be protected under the DWMA." Lord Death said putting his boxed glove together.
"A guide?" Kid said raising an eyebrow in confusion. Protecting who exactly? Kid thought to himself.
"Right you are son. I need you to go to the forest at the edge of Death City to protect and guide Death Scythe's daughter back to the Academy." Lord Death explained. "Make sure she gets back here unharmed"
"Seems easy enough Father but who am I protecting exactly and why?" Kid said not entirely sure what his Father's motives are on having him do this mission. His Father always seems to hide things from him and always had trouble trusting his Father about what he told him or what he was thinking considering the mask he wore blocked off almost all emotions.
"I'll explain that part when you bring her back here but she is my current Death Scythes daughter and she's endanger so no time to waste now shoo, shoo and remember UNHARMED" Lord Death said emphasizing 'unharmed' to make his point while moving his box white gloves in a shooing motion and Kid got the point his Father was making and turning on his heels and walked down the few steps and backed on the guillotined pathway that stretched all the way to the big red doors.
As he walked under the guillotines, Kid thought to himself and began to space out ignoring the occasional wispy cloud that would fly by his face. Why does Death Scythe's daughter need protection? I wonder why she isn't in the Academy. What is this person is li-
BAM!
Kid's thoughts were interrupted by a big red door to the face and a loud giggly voice "KIDDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-KUN~" A girl slightly taller than Kid, with short shoulder length hair and bangs cut a little above the eyebrow. Big blue eyes full of happiness, wearing pumpkin shorts, black high heel knee boots, with a sleeveless red shirt and short silver tie that shoes her slightly tan skin with a cowboy hat slammed the door in Kid's face while having one arm out and a leg in the air with a big smile on her face not really paying attention to her surroundings.
"Huh…? Where'd Kid-kun go?" The giddy blonde questioned looking around unaware of what happened to her meister and started to turn her head left to right searching for her "missing" meister.
"Um…Patty…" The short blonde girl turned around to see her big sister standing next to the unconscious Kid with a bump on his forehead and a nosebleed. "I think you swung the door too hard…" Liz said with a sweat drop as she looked at her meister sprawled out on the floor. Liz sighed slightly annoyed and pulled out the emergency first aid kit she carries around when situations like this happened and kneeled down to with a white 'x' bandage on the bump on Kid's forehead and stuffed his nose with tissues to stop the bleeding.
Liz and Patty had the similar features to be twins but differences in hairstyles and clothing. Liz had more serious look in her eyes, longer hair that was parted in the middle, and a sun kissed tan. They had the same clothes and color patterns just Liz had jeans and wore silver bracelets on her wrists and black ankle boots but the rest was the same.
They're the Thompsons sisters that grew up in New York born as weapons and used that power to their advantage till Kid befriended them and gave them a roof under their head and food in exchange for being his weapons.
Kid snapped awake angry and jumped to his feet stomping and yelling at the younger Thompson sibling "PATTY! WATCH WHERE YOU'RE SWINGING THOSE DOORS YOU BAFOON!"
The younger Thompson sister just giggled "Sowwwwy Kid-kun~" she apologized in between laughter from the way Kid's reaction. Kid was still seething until Liz interrupted the little argument.
"Hey Kid, what did Lord Death want?" Liz crossed her arms over her chest and Kid turned to look at the older Thompson sister regaining his composure before speaking and adjusted his posture.
"Father gave us a mission to guide Death scythe's daughter from somewhere she lives in the forest possibly a cabin and then guide her to the Death room for reasons my father have not explain to me but he wants her unharmed" Kid explained still feeling confused himself about why his father never explained why or where Death scythe is exactly.
The trio continued walking down the empty hallway since class was still going on. The walls were an orange-tan stone with arch windows and columns lined up symmetrically as Kid walked in a straight line in the middle down the hall with Liz was to Kid's left an Patty was to Kid's right as they walked out the entrance of the gothic-castle like building that had large candles and comical skulls used as an entrance being supported by parts of it together.
Once they made it out to campus yard and reached the end of the stone steps exiting the DWMA and the sky was full of warm colors like orange and red with a mix of purple and dark blue as the sun tried fighting off sleep waking up and going back to sleep as a bit of drool hanged from the corner of its mouth.
"Liz, Patty" Kid said signaling for them to transform into weapon form.
"Hai~" Patty said saluting as she was enveloped in a pink light. Liz nodded and was surrounded by a pink light same as her little sister and they were shrunk in sized and moved to Kid's hands.
The light took form into pistols, the light shattered away to show silver pistols that are held upside down with a shinigami comical skull on the hilt, the guns looked identical which made Kid want them as weapons in the first place when he picked them up off the streets of New York.
Liz's reflection appeared on the pistol that looked a little frightened. "Wait Kid, Where does Death Scythe's daughter live exactly?"
"In a forest near the edge of Death City" Kid answered.
"Y-y-you mean at n-night?!" Liz stuttered in panic as a thousand thoughts through her head about what could happen at night in a dark scary forest in death city.
"Don't panics Liz if you get scared just go to sleep" Kid replied not really wanting to deal with an anxiety attack from Liz. Patty just laughed through her resonance with the two of them and answered.
"Yeah don't worry big sis there's nothing to be afraid of!"
DING DONG KILL KONG!
"Class is ending, let's go" Kid said wanting to finish this mission done for his Father. Kid held his pale hand out in front of him
"Beelzebub" Kid muttered and wisps of skulls came out of his hand using magic and a small purple light took form of a skateboard that had two shinigami skulls reflecting each other on the bottom of the green and black skateboard. The magic-infested skateboard levitated in front of Kid and he stepped on balancing himself and holding the pistols the same way he's positioned.
They started to go west side of death city where the forest. It was fall so all the trees were dead. Death city at night felt uncanny and the sky was now a midnight blue and the sleepy sun was replaced with a grinning moon with sleepless eyes and crooked grin showing all its white teeth proved it's on a new moon since there was no blood dripping through its teeth.
Death the Kid flew through the night sky as the wind blew his hair back and dodged some of the taller buildings. It was eerie and late at night giving the unsettling feeling that would just make you shudder. The trio came to a stop at the entrance to the forest considering they couldn't fly through with too many trees in the way.
Kid landed and held his hand out having him land on his feet as he summoned Beelzebub to return. The twin pistols glowed bright pink again and transformed back to their regular forms when Kid through them behind. Liz was stretching her muscles muttering something about being in weapon form for too long makes her tired and Patty took in the scenery of where they were at with big blue eyes full of excitement.
"Hey Onee-chan where in the forest would you think Death Scythe's daughter lives since there isn't much here?" Patty questioned innocently.
Liz froze and looked around. In Liz Thompsons's mind this place was her worst nightmare seeing how all the trees looked bare and creepy like hands ready to grab her. I hope there aren't any ghosts here or werewolves or witches or worst of all…clowns… Liz thought to herself as she clung to her little sister for dear life as she knew it.
"I'm not sure Patty maybe if we follow the path we'll see, you lead the way" Liz said trying to sound confident and brave but her quivering wasn't helping at all for the brave act. She looked over at Kid who didn't really say much and looked kind of frozen.
"Uhhh Kid is everything alright over there" Liz said slightly worried for her meister she turned to Patty who was drawing in the sandy ash soil with a tree branch leaving her sister vulnerable to the forest. Liz noticed Kid was starting to scratch his head a lot and twitch every few seconds.
Oh no….not right now! What about the mission?! Liz thought mentally freaking out coming up with the best solution for this situation but came up with nothing. She was interrupted by a scream of frustration and loathing.
"AHHHHH HOW COULD ANYONE STAND SUCH A HORROR! ALL OF IT IS OFF BALANCED GRAAAAAAAHHHHH" Kid screamed in frustration with an appalled look on his face and fell on his hands and knees banging his fists into the ashy soil. "Useless garbage…" Kid muttered.
"Oh lord death…" Liz muttered annoyed not wanting to deal with a meltdown. "Kid what's wrong this time" Liz asked annoyed crouching down in front of Kid to face his level.
"The trees…there…horribly asymmetrical…I don't think I can make it" Kid said with his voice sounding hoarse like he was about to be sick and Patty came up behind Liz and hugged her head looking over to see what's wrong.
"Kid…I really think you'll survive we just got to find Death Scythe's daughter and take her back to the academy I'm sure you can live through a couple of unsymmetrical trees now let's go before anything horrible happens, I'm sure you'll be the best grim reaper you could be so let's complete this mission!" Liz said in a motherly voice
"YEAH, LET'S GO KID-KUN!" Patty said getting giddy as she struck a pose.
Kid slowly lifted his head looking teary eyed with a puppy face looking up at the two girls "Do you really mean that?" Kid sniffled and the girls smile and nodded. Kid got up and regained his composure as if nothing happened. "Alright then let's get going then" Kid said walking downs the ash soil path with Patty trailing behind him chanting "YAY, YAY, YAY"
Liz sweat dropped awkwardly still crouched down with an annoyed look on her face *sigh* Rich kids are too naïve, I don't know whether he's a pain in the ass or easy to deal with… Liz thought and heard the wind howl and looked around terrified and ready to cry.
"WAIT UP PATTY DON'T LEAVE ME BEHIND" Liz yelled running after the two until she clung to Patty again like her life depended on it. Patty just laughed at her scared-y cat sister.
After a twenty minute walk through the dark forest they reached the point where there were Japanese paper lanterns with different painted designs hanging on the tree as a welcoming guide and made Liz a little less scared knowing there was light and not relying on Kid's sense of direction and glowing amber eyes not really helping her fear of the dark just making it more scary.
"Wow~ They look so pretty" Patty said in awe as she looked at the paper lanterns with different water colored animals and flowers painted on the white paper lanterns connecting to each with thin red thread that looked almost invisible.
"I'm guessing we're getting closer to who we're supposed to be protecting" Kid said looking around the lit path way for any sign of a trap.
"You're right though Patty these do look beautiful, I wonder what Death scythe's daughter is like." Liz questioned as she looked in amazement at the water colored details feeling much more relax.
"Hopefully nothing like Death Scythe" Kid said. Death Scythe was known for being an alcoholic and a womanizer ever since he's known the man but was curious as well mainly because his Father gave him no details on the girl.
"Hahahaha that's true I never knew Death Scythe had a daughter though. Why would she live out somewhere so dark and isolated?" Patty said laughing.
"Maybe she's-", Liz was cut off by an explosion with smoke coming from that pumpkin house…? An orange house that was shaped like a larger pumpkin stacked up on a smaller pumpkin with a dark green vine coming out of the smaller pumpkin and a little window sill and a little garden. The windows were open and letting out a lot of smoke and dust into the sky with the smell of burnt fish filling the air.
Kid took out a handkerchief and placed it over his nose and mouth to block out the smell and Liz gave Kid the "are you serious" look. Kid just shrugged as Patty started to laugh "Everything went BOOM!"
"DAMN IT, Blair I told you not to cook in the house if you're going to cook burnt fish! Get me the fire extinguisher quickly before you burn the house down!" A female voice said in an angry tone as the group watch the scene goes down while standing in the front yard.
"Gomenasai Maka-chan I was hungry and you were busy-nya~" Another voice said it sounded more feline.
The three saw a little purple cat run past the window and grab a red bottle which the group assumed was the fire extinguisher and drag it by her mouth a little more slowly as she ran past open window on the first floor. The smoke was clearing up and just left way too much foam.
"*sigh* Next time Blair just ask and don't assume…I'm going to read outside till all this foam clears up you're welcome to join me" The female voice said that Kid assumed was Maka and the little kitty they just saw was Blair.
The door knob twisted open and a girl with sand blonde hair that went half way down her back and her bangs short that were slightly being pushed down by her witch's hat that seemed to spiral sideways, big emerald green eyes, slightly tan skin that looked like a soft peach, a black cape that went over her shoulders with a green tank top under it, black shorts that went mid thigh, green thigh socks that matches her tank top, black boots that went to her shins, and black gloves that go to her forearms, there were sand blonde bunny ears sticking out of the witch's hat that fell floppy like. She was holding the purple cat in one arm that had big golden yellow eyes and ears with tuffs of fur and in the other arm a book of Fallen Kingdoms.
The green emerald met with the golden yellow several feet away from each other but neither could take their eyes away from each other. Death the Kid had a feeling this mission would change his and Death City's life forever.
"Hello…"
EnB: Tell me what you think of this new version and if you don't like it after a while I'll put the old chapters back but tell me what you think of this and don't think the chapters are the same as the old ones there's a little plot change up but still same concept
Maka: I was barely in this until the end
EnB: Don't fret I shall write the next chapter you get to show off some of your badass skills and be a bit tsundere ;D
Kid: Please review, follow, and favorite we'll try to update a lot since its summer but EnB doesn't get the laptop often and EnB does not own the book Falling Kingdoms but she highly recommends the book
EnB: Review or I reap your soul… Love Bunny Overlord see you in the next chapter~
