FIRST STORY (Would like constructive criticism)
Lets get some things straight, I'm replacing Garth with my charrie Snow for Lilly and will post Bio next chapter and will do Pov's of all of them and I'm writing this on my phone so may take awhile to update and apologize for any auto correct mistakes I overlooked (Please tell me if this is too long)
Chapter 1 It Takes a Turn The Worst
Humphreys POV

It was just a normal day in the western (was it?) pack as I walked through camp and smiled to a few wolves as I recalled the recent events that have plaqued my mind with memories. From rescuing Kate to seeing Garth and Kate divorce it had been an interesting week. As I walked through camp I saw Kate approaching and we smiled as nuzzled . I felt warm sensation spread through my body as we touched. "I love you Humphrey" she barked as I just stood there in her embrace. "Want to go on a walk before the moonlight howl?" I asked with a smile. She smiled "I'd love to" she said simply. I led her around the familiar territory in silence our company was enough for our endless love.

As the sun fell over the horizon I nudged her towards the mountain "We should probably start heading there." I commented as we sped up slightly. We emerged into the clearing and saw a few wolves already here. Me and Kate waved to them as we took our usual spot at the top of the mountain. As more wolves started to appear I howled first as Kate joined in. Our howls harmonized together in bliss as other couples joined in. Kate leaned on my shoulder and I knew we were meant to be together. As the howling died down me and Kate finished along with the last few wolves. With the moonlight shining on Kate's fur I looked at her beauty mouth agape as she giggled. I blushed and looked away but looked back into her eyes "Kate can I ask you something?" I said nervously looking into her face "Will you marry me". But instead of the surprised face I was met with a forlorn face l "what's wrong Kate" I asked nervously

Kate's POV

I was on the verge of tears but not the good kind as I choked on the verge. She couldn't say yes not now, not with the arising problem. All I could manage to say was "I'm sorry" and I ran away In tears rolling down my face. I ran to my den as my dad asked "What's wrong Kate" as I cried into his chest. "He asked me to marry him" as I felt him nod "Sorry Kate but It's the pack law" I cried more as my mind flashed to Humphrey and I really hoped he would be ok.

Humphreys POV

I stood there as I felt tears coming 'what did I do wrong' I thought. I felt a tear roll down my face as I ran off to my den. When I got there I broke down In tears as memories flashed to all the good times we had together. But as the thoughts of Kate were going I was pounced on by someone I assumed was Shakey and I grunted "Shakey get off me" I howled but no response came. My lack of silence cause my eyes be covered as I was engulfed by darkness.

My eyes opened to 3 silhouettes and the moon as my eyes adjusted I saw It was Kate, Winston, and Garth. Winston then barked with a growl behind it "Humphrey you have charged with the murder of a litter of pups and one alpha, your punishment is banishment from this pack!"

Don't you love cliffhangers :)
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