Fibfi-Chan: Wow…we're writing Yu Gi Oh now?
Blank: Yup. We make awesome writing partners, huh?
Fibfi-Chan: Duh! Alright then, Deke, Masquerade, DISCLAIMER! Angel, Blank, CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES FOR THE REVIEWERS!
Deke & Masquerade: None of us own Yu Gi Oh, because if we did, Jou would be the main character, and it would be crossed over with all kinds of othe anime/manga.
Angel: Blank, come on! Let's go make the cookies!
Blank: Alright, alright, I'm coming!
Fibfi-Chan: YAY! I get to write this chappie! Alright then people, stop reading this commentary and read that story!
I ran down the road, feeling hot tears sting at my eyes.
I couldn't think. I couldn't breathe. I couldn't even see straight.
I was scared, terrified, and I just wanted away. Away from the horrible chaos that is my life. Away from it all.
I estimated that it was about mid-night, since the air was so cold, and it was so dark.
I wanted to go away to somewhere where no one would recognize me. Where I didn't know anyone and could restart and leave all this abuse behind. Where he could never find me.
What I didn't know though, was what my wishing would do for me in the long run, because back then, I just thought that wishing was some childish thing, and that wishes could never be fulfilled.
Oh, how wrong I was.
If only I knew what was about to happen to me, I would have been a better friend to everyone. I would have given Yugi, Honda, and Anzu anything they wanted.
I would have spent much more time with Shizuka, whether mom and dad approved or not.
I wouldn't have dwelled so much on myself and all the abuse my father was doing to me.
I was running down the road, fully ignoring the rain that had begun to fall, just silently wishing that someone would save me. Wishing that someone would take me away from here, away from everyone.
And that was when it happened. I stopped running so I could catch my breath, and looked up at the sky, only to see it light up with lightning, and see a bolt of the very same substance shoot down and hit me.
I let out a scream of pain that clashed with the rumble of thunder, as I swayed dangerously before falling backwards, feeling my burned body giving out on me, and I felt my heart beat slowing.
Every noise my failing heart was making as it attempted to beat again echoed in my mind, sounding louder and louder each time.
Every raspy breath I took sounded more pitiful and quiet on each attempt.
Every time I blinked, I heard my muscles trying not to fail me, and trying to keep my eyes open. Trying to make sure that they don't close forever.
I felt my body nearing the ground, and time seemed to slow.
Seemed to slow as my heart gave its last beat.
As my last bit of air hitched in my throat, and refused to reach my lungs.
As my back hit the hard ground, not allowing me to move anymore.
As my eyelids slipped shut, giving up the fight to live.
And I felt everything around me disperse into nothing as my body shut down, never to move or breathe again.
Little did I know, that that was the best thing that ever happened to me.
Blank: Well…this was…odd, to say the least.
Masquerade: People, we need your help! Tell us what you want to happen next, what pairings you want, and all of that other good stuff. We just want to know what you want, because we like know that kind of stuff so we could put it in and make you all happy~
Angel: Review and you get chocolate chip cookies!
Deke: Man…those things look good…
Fibfi-Chan: Alright, review, get your chocolate chip cookies, and tell us what you think! Hope you liked the chapter!