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He woke up on a beach, with his shorts and his T-shirt on. All he could see was the sea gently rolling and the morning sun gently shining in his eyes. He tried to remember, but he couldn't remember anything. He saw a shipwreck beside him and another boy.
"Hey, Jack", yelled the boy
So my name is Jack, he thought.
"Uh, I forget your name again. What is it?"
"Don't play that amnesia game with me again, Steve."
"No, dude, seriously, I have no idea what is your name"
"I'll tell you it so you can stop acting. It's Rick. There, you happy now?"
"No, seriously, where am I?"
"You're in a land where I'm the King and I'm rich with all the things I could ever want. I have a castle over the hill, and you have to take off your shirt to get in."
"Really?"
"Okay, now I know you really have a problem."
"So where are we?"
"I'll tell you the story. So we are stuck on this island because we were the two people who were unlucky enough to get sacrificed to the element island. There is Fire, Water, Light, Air, a Dark, and Earth. But on this island, all the plus versions of the elements are here. They are Magma, Ice, Life, Wind, Death, and Metal. Every village or town needs to send two champions to the island to be on it. They stay there and learn from one tribe. But soon, people started using the elements as power or for killing others. So then the element lords, who run each tribe, decided that no one could leave the island unless you were a Savior. A Savior is a top member of a tribe that works with the other Saviors to keep calm and defeat monsters across the world. But no one wanted to go on the island anymore. So the two unlucky people would go to the island. We aren't the first children, you know."
"Okay, so where are the tribes?"
"I don't know. That's the first part of the test."
"What's the test?"
"The test is the process where we have to go through to become on of the element users. They say that if you don't make it, you would either die or get sent back home."
"Oh. How nice."
"So let's get going!"
They set out for the tribes. They found scorch marks, whipped trees, dead squirrels, and even a pile of eggs. They stayed away from the last one because all the marks around that indicated some serious spell casting. It was almost impossible not to step where spells haven't been casted. They followed the winding trail, back and forth, until they reached a small campfire, where some people seemed to be. `
"Should we walk down there?"
"No, I don't think so."
Suddenly, they were dragged across the field of grass. It felt ticklish with the grass moving them by shifting under them. The slowly, but steadily, made their way to the group.
"Well, looks like we have ourselves some fresh people," said the guy in the green
"I think these guys are cannibals." Rick whispered.
"I heard that. We aren't. You two fellows made it to the end of the test, so the start of the initiation."
Rick looked at him nervously.
"What does that mean?"
"It means you join a tribe based on what the stone picks for you."
"You base your picks by stone?"
"No. I was joking."
And with that, they walked through the trees.
Rick started following, so Jack followed too. It seemed the only thing he could do other than actually get lost. They finally arrive next to a pond, with a handprint on a stone.
"This is it."
Steve thought this was a joke. You could actually mind what element you belong to by putting your hand on stone? The man in the green pointed at Rick, who was about to jump in the pond.
"You, put your hand there." he gestured to the stone.
Rick put his hand on the stone, and a burst of flames came up.
"Cool!"
"You are part of the fire element. You will learn, like all, to make a small burst of your element, including looking into the future, and summoning minions of your element. You will move on to magma after two years of training. Your instructors will tell you more about the element. Your element specializes in destroying and burning non-living things."
Rick was very excited. He thought he would get landed with something boring, like earth or water. Apparently he wouldn't have a bad time after all.
"Now Jack, it is your turn to be up to the stone."
Jack braced himself up to the stone. He closed his eyes and slowly, and steadily, put his hand on the stone. He then heard a gasp of surprise come from the others. He looked up and saw not one element, but two elements coming out of the geyser. There it was Earth and light, coming out, one on each side.
"You are a mix of two element. Although it's not rare, it's unlikely that someone would be a mix. We call them radiant. There are others like you, but you have a powerful combination of power. Earth is an element that you can also summon a short burst. Earth amplifies others powers or the element users own ability. Light is a powerful and unique element. It can be used to harm, but it is the only element that can heal. It can also buff others. "
"Ok."
"Now we'll head down to the cavern, where we will let the others know, including the lords."
"How old is everybody?"
"About five to twenty-eight."
"WHAT?"
"Yeah. Some got sent here as babies. Didn't you know that?"
"No."
"At least they chose to come here, right?"
"Not really."
"I mean their parents."
"No. We got picked in a drawing."
"WHAT?"
" Ever since the people couldn't leave, people don't want to be here. Duh."
"This is shocking..."
"Yeah."
"Let's go now."
They made their way to a cavern, were there was a small campfire in the middle and the only way in and out was the cave entrance. There were stone stairs for people to sit on, and there were seven sections. Fire, Water, Earth, Light, Air, Dark, and a Radiant section, were there wasn't a lot of people, only four or five. Steve's spirits lifted. He wouldn't be the only one.
"Listen up people, we have two new arrivals!" said the man in the middle. He was about in his early twenties. He had a dark uniform on, so Steve guessed he was from the Dark element. He seemed cheerful enough, and had a hat.
"We have two new arrivals, and Ganer here will introduce them."
"Thank you, Victor. Right now, we have two eleven-year-old boys. First is Rick belonging to the... Drum roll please."
Jack thought everyone would be using their hand, but about most of the people used elemental was to drum roll, which cause interesting affects. The minions who were drumming from earth had their hands falls off from constant banging on the floor. Water and fire went everywhere, and the ground became cracked again. Everyone started laughing.
"... Fire Element."
The fire element whooped and cheered, while the other elements just clapped nicely. Steve was sure he saw some small gold coins go back and forth.
"Now next is interesting. This is Steve, and he is a ... Drum roll please."
When the drum roll died down, Ganer took a deep breath.
"Radiant."
The whole entire cavern was silent, except for the occasional burping minion or sizzling water.
"What two elements is he from?" asked Victor
"Light and Earth" Ganer replied.
And that was how Jack's year started off.