Hi guys I'm back. I came onto fanfiction and I reread this story so I'm just gonna rewrite the chapters. Heres the new chapter 1.
Lily Truscott's sleepy eyes snapped open to the voice of her loud mom.
"Lily! I have some great news for you!" Lily's mom yelled from the bottom of the stairs. Lily groaned and rubbed her eyes before sitting up and placing her bare feet onto the soft, fluffy pink rug covering the dark wood floors. She shuffled downstairs in her red pajamas that had white red hearts on them from Aeropostale. As she entered the kitchen where her mom was waiting expectantly for her, she let out a yawn.
"Yes mom?" Lily questioned.
"Starting next week, you're going to take dancing lessons!" Lily's mom said excitedly. She waited anxiously for her daughter's reply.
"What?!" Lily exclaimed, instantly awake. "But mooom! I don't want to!" Lily whined.
"Lily, you will do something productive this summer, whether you want to or not," her mom said firmly.
"The summer has just started! I'm supposed to be relaxing and hanging out with my friends! Not dancing and getting sweaty!"
"Lillian Truscott, if you don't stop this whining right now, I will take away your cell phone," her mom warned. "Now, if you keep complaining, you won't be able to enjoy the classes!"
"I'm not going to enjoy them even if I stop complaining!"Lily argued. Her mom let out a sigh.
"Whenever I try doing something nice for you, you always complain. You can never be grateful!" Lily's mother said. She shook her head. "Why can't you ever appreciate what I do for you? I'm just trying to help you so you do better in the future!"
Lily rolled her eyes and ran up the steps to her room.
I can't believe my mom is gonna ruin another summer! For once I want to just relax. She never lets me do what I want! She just assumes that I will want to do whatever she signs me up for!
Lily grabbed her laptop lying on the small white table situated next to her bed. She waited patiently for it to turn on. After it was on, she double clicked the AIM icon on her desktop and signed onto her AI. Lily immediately opened up a chatbox and started to IM her best friend, Miley Stewart.
SK8TeRGiRl: ughhh!!
SmileyMiley: what happened?
Sk8TeRGiRl: MY MOM IS TRYING TO RUIN MY LIFE!
SmileyMiley: what did she do this time?
SK8TeRGiRl: dance lessons! She signed me up for dance lessons!
SmileyMiley: that doesn't sound too bad
SK8TeRGiRl: you're not the one that can never just sit down and relax for a bit!
SmileyMiley: um actually lily, I actually can't sit down and relax for a bit. Hannah is always super busy during the summer
SK8TeRGiRl: yea but at least you can actually hang with your friends every once in a while
SmileyMiley: yea.. so can you
SK8TeRGiRl: ahh miley you're not helping me with my argument!! can you just go along with my little rant pleasee?
SmileyMiley ::\ fine: OMG are you seriousss??? that suckks!
SK8TeRGiRl:I KNOWW! thank you for understanding :)
SK8TeRGiRl: anyways this stinks. There is absolutely no way I can get out of this..
SmileyMiley: Well then you're just gonna have to deal with it I guess.. when do the classes start?
SK8TeRGiRl: next week.. ughh! I don't even have any dance clothes to wear! Can we go shopppingg?
A Week Later
The annoying beeping of the alarm clock woke Lily up at 8:30 in the morning. It was a warm Saturday morning and the first day of dance classes.
Lily got out of bed and walked over to her closet. She took out a shirt and sweat pants and headed to the bathroom. She took a quick shower then pulled her long blonde hair into a high ponytail. Then she ate a quick breakfast of Cheerios and milk. While eating, Lily's mom came into the kitchen.
"Good morning," her mom said as she opened the fridge, looking for something to eat. Lily mumbled a greeting as she chewed on her cereal.
"Are you excited for dance classes, honey?"
"No.." Lily mumbled. Her mom turned around and frowned.
"Well make the most of it." Lily rolled her eyes and stood up. She took her empty bowl to the sink. And then left the kitchen.
"See you later, mom," Lily shouted as she opened the door and left.
Good? I think it's better than the older one.
