Give up
ok so here is the re-make of th the death of my best friend. Im re-naming it to give up, because leo technically doesn't die, or well, its up to you guys. So here it is
Leo pov
'Beeeeeeeeeeep, beep, beep' It was a moment before I realized, the machine that was hooked up to me was telling me I was breathing. Telling me I wasn't dead. I was, alive. I'm not dying.
Wait, that isn't right, I should start from the beginning. Before this happened, before being in jail and that stupid fire, and being beaten up. Let me start where Piper, told me how she was doing in her life. How she left me with no one and just randomly invited me some place.
Let me start with the basics.
I never really had a home. I practically lived in my workshop. I have a small bed in the corner, and lots of tables to put my machinery. I was putting my scholarship paper for NYU when the door opened. Hmph, I thought I closed it. And guess who came out the door.
Piper Mclean, the girl who practically ruined my life. She burst in, and looked really excited about something.
"Leo, I have good news, I'm going to a pageant where I could become Miss New York." I was suprised. But not by much, she is a daughter of Aphrodite.
"Really I'm so proud of you" I said half-heartedly, while I put the paper on the nearest table.
"What is that-"
"Nothing, nothing, just a paper" I said quickly and widened my eyes to give her the message that I didn't want her to see it.
"Leo, what is that, you can tell me" She charm-speaked me. I sighed.
"It's a-I got accepted to study engineering at a university up north from here." I said like it was a bad thing, which it was. I stared at the ground.
"Leo, that's great, so when are you going?" She asked, I thought about it. They usually do this during the summer, that's when i'm going, great.
"Umm, I'm probably going for the summer courses..." I said hoping she wouldn't catch on.
"So, will you come to watch me? Jason and Annabeth them are coming" She asked. I could just tell that she was going to ask me to come.
"Umm, sure, I guess.." I said unsure if it was going to collide wth my schedule.
"I'll come and tell you the dates, see ya Leo" She told me, and gave me a hug. It was really uncomfortable to know that when she's dating Jason.
And thats when my life started to go down hill.
I hope you like the re-make, it just seems better in Leo pov, for the whole thing, plus, the first part is vital to this, and I didn't think of it til when I was in a hotel with no wi-fi, so hope you enjoy, and for those just starting to read this, it's better that you read this then my other one, so thanks for helping me decide how to end, it, I will base the ending on how you will take it, and your responses.
Enjoy and review!
~percabeth17~
