Hi, so this is just a poem i wrote for creative writing class and i thought i did a pretty good job so i posted it on here! tell me what ya think!
~90sbaby112
It was a cold winter's day
And I stood outside
You looked out your window
and said "Darling it's so cold"
You showed me around and kept me warm
Oh I couldn't take it and now I have to go
And I don't when I'll be back
So please don't stop loving me
Don't stop loving me
Everything will be okay
Save me when he takes me
Oh and please do not forget me
I love you
That's what i wrote to you
And now we're on a ship
And darling it might sink
I made so many mistakes
But i know that you love me
I know that you'll save me
So baby stay with me
Before we die again
And please forgive me
Of all these painful sins
I didn't mean to make you cry
But please hold me before I die
Before I die