Perfect Shuzoku
By: SaKuRaStArS
A/N: This is my first fanfiction plz don't be too harsh but I want to know how to improve it plz review!!
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN CCS!! I WISH I DO BUT I DON'T!! CLAMP DOES N I'M BROKE SO DON'T SUE ME!! Hehe one day when I get rich maybe Clamp will sell CCS 2 me.but until then I DON'T OWN CCS!!
Chapter One
Touya, Tomoyo and Meilin fidgeted in the hospital waiting room with their father Fujitaka. They all stood up when the doctor came out.
"Kinomoto-san?" Fujitaka nodded.
"Congratulations you are the new father of a healthy baby girl."
"Oh great another girl," Touya grumbled. He was the oldest at eight years old and the only boy in the family.
"Oh! I'll bet she'll be so kawaii!! I'm going to make her kawaii clothes and catch all her kawaii moments on tape!! HOHOHOHO," said Tomoyo going into hanyan mode. Everyone sweatdropped at the four year old's announcement.
"Well I hope she's gonna be fun cuz we're gonna have lots of fun together!" said Meilin.
"Well let's go and see her shall we?" said Fujitaka smiling at his three year old daughter.
They entered the room where they found a lovely young woman holding a tiny bundle of blankets.
"Her name is Sakura," said the woman when Fujitaka, Touya, Tomoyo and Meilin reached the bed.
"She's beautiful, just like you Nadeshiko," said Fujitaka looking at his beautiful wife holding his tiny daughter and smiled contentedly
2 years later
"Nii-san!!" shouted a cute little two year old girl with long honey-brown hair and emerald green eyes.
"What Kaijuu?!!" yelled a ten year old boy with dark hair. He looked at his little sister and couldn't help but smile at her tiny figure running up to him.
"Kaa-san said to call you in for supper," replied the little girl, "Sakura no Kaijuu!!" She gave him the traditional stomp on his foot. He winced in pain.
"Touya!! Bring Sakura in right now!" called Fujitaka cheerfully, "It's getting dark."
"Alright otou-san!" yelled Touya. He grabbed Sakura's tiny hand and they both ran to the house. Tomoyo and Meilin were there waiting for them when they reached the porch. "Hello my kawaii little sister," said Tomoyo taping Sakura. She smiled seeing how the pink dress fit Sakura perfectly. "Oh, you're a designer's dream Sakura."she sighed, making Touya and Meilin sweatdrop. Sakura smiled and hugged Tomoyo.
"Hurry let's eat so we can play Saku!" shouted Meilin making everyone wince.
"Okay Meilin," said Sakura ( haha that's how her face looks like rite now hehe) as Meilin grabbed her hand and pulled her into the house with Tomoyo and Touya following behind them. In the kitchen Nadeshiko and Fujitaka were already seated.
"Tou-san! Kaa-san!" said Sakura as she hugged them both. Fujitaka and Nadeshiko smiled at their tiny daughter as she climbed into her chair. Touya, Tomoyo and Meilin sat down and they smiled at their parents. Fujitaka and Nadeshiko looked at their children contentedly as they started to eat. After supper, Meilin and Sakura went into the living room and started to play with their toys. Tomoyo sat video-taping them while Touya watched TV. Nadeshiko and Fujitaka washed the dishes and cleaned the kitchen. Then they joined their family.
"Time for bed!" Nadeshiko announced at eight. Sakura, Tomoyo and Touya went up to her while Meilin followed reluctantly. Nadeshiko took Sakura in her arms and took Meilin's hand and led them upstairs. Tomoyo followed them. Touya went to his room while Fujitaka went to his and Nadeshiko's room.
"Oyasumi nasai my dears," said Nadeshiko to her three daughters (they sleep in the same room)
"Oyasumi nasai Okaa-san!" they chorused. Nadeshiko smiled and left towards her and Fujitaka's room.
"Oyasumi nasai dear," said Nadeshiko.
"Oyasumi nasai Nadeshiko," said Fujitaka. Little did they know that their happy family would soon be torn apart.
To be continued.
A/N: well there's my first chappie I hope you like it. PLZ review!!!
By: SaKuRaStArS
A/N: This is my first fanfiction plz don't be too harsh but I want to know how to improve it plz review!!
Disclaimer: I DON'T OWN CCS!! I WISH I DO BUT I DON'T!! CLAMP DOES N I'M BROKE SO DON'T SUE ME!! Hehe one day when I get rich maybe Clamp will sell CCS 2 me.but until then I DON'T OWN CCS!!
Chapter One
Touya, Tomoyo and Meilin fidgeted in the hospital waiting room with their father Fujitaka. They all stood up when the doctor came out.
"Kinomoto-san?" Fujitaka nodded.
"Congratulations you are the new father of a healthy baby girl."
"Oh great another girl," Touya grumbled. He was the oldest at eight years old and the only boy in the family.
"Oh! I'll bet she'll be so kawaii!! I'm going to make her kawaii clothes and catch all her kawaii moments on tape!! HOHOHOHO," said Tomoyo going into hanyan mode. Everyone sweatdropped at the four year old's announcement.
"Well I hope she's gonna be fun cuz we're gonna have lots of fun together!" said Meilin.
"Well let's go and see her shall we?" said Fujitaka smiling at his three year old daughter.
They entered the room where they found a lovely young woman holding a tiny bundle of blankets.
"Her name is Sakura," said the woman when Fujitaka, Touya, Tomoyo and Meilin reached the bed.
"She's beautiful, just like you Nadeshiko," said Fujitaka looking at his beautiful wife holding his tiny daughter and smiled contentedly
2 years later
"Nii-san!!" shouted a cute little two year old girl with long honey-brown hair and emerald green eyes.
"What Kaijuu?!!" yelled a ten year old boy with dark hair. He looked at his little sister and couldn't help but smile at her tiny figure running up to him.
"Kaa-san said to call you in for supper," replied the little girl, "Sakura no Kaijuu!!" She gave him the traditional stomp on his foot. He winced in pain.
"Touya!! Bring Sakura in right now!" called Fujitaka cheerfully, "It's getting dark."
"Alright otou-san!" yelled Touya. He grabbed Sakura's tiny hand and they both ran to the house. Tomoyo and Meilin were there waiting for them when they reached the porch. "Hello my kawaii little sister," said Tomoyo taping Sakura. She smiled seeing how the pink dress fit Sakura perfectly. "Oh, you're a designer's dream Sakura."she sighed, making Touya and Meilin sweatdrop. Sakura smiled and hugged Tomoyo.
"Hurry let's eat so we can play Saku!" shouted Meilin making everyone wince.
"Okay Meilin," said Sakura ( haha that's how her face looks like rite now hehe) as Meilin grabbed her hand and pulled her into the house with Tomoyo and Touya following behind them. In the kitchen Nadeshiko and Fujitaka were already seated.
"Tou-san! Kaa-san!" said Sakura as she hugged them both. Fujitaka and Nadeshiko smiled at their tiny daughter as she climbed into her chair. Touya, Tomoyo and Meilin sat down and they smiled at their parents. Fujitaka and Nadeshiko looked at their children contentedly as they started to eat. After supper, Meilin and Sakura went into the living room and started to play with their toys. Tomoyo sat video-taping them while Touya watched TV. Nadeshiko and Fujitaka washed the dishes and cleaned the kitchen. Then they joined their family.
"Time for bed!" Nadeshiko announced at eight. Sakura, Tomoyo and Touya went up to her while Meilin followed reluctantly. Nadeshiko took Sakura in her arms and took Meilin's hand and led them upstairs. Tomoyo followed them. Touya went to his room while Fujitaka went to his and Nadeshiko's room.
"Oyasumi nasai my dears," said Nadeshiko to her three daughters (they sleep in the same room)
"Oyasumi nasai Okaa-san!" they chorused. Nadeshiko smiled and left towards her and Fujitaka's room.
"Oyasumi nasai dear," said Nadeshiko.
"Oyasumi nasai Nadeshiko," said Fujitaka. Little did they know that their happy family would soon be torn apart.
To be continued.
A/N: well there's my first chappie I hope you like it. PLZ review!!!