RWBY Prior

by The Communist Party of Vale

Hello and welcome to my story that barely qulifies as a Fanfiction! Story follows team VILE, a team with more than it's fair share of nutcases, as they settle into their new life at shade academy. Soon enough, things get about as crazy as they do, with conspiracies, creepy children, and a lot of grimm. This story contains, as of right now, a completly OC cast, but that may change

1. Notes (Read First)

Hi. Before reading this story, I recommend you take the time to read these short little notes on the natrure of this story. Mainly, this is for me, so I can get the feedback I need, but it's also just a breif clarification of what people will see in this story.

The first thing I should note is that this is the first story that I have ever written. It's not like I'm a compelte novice or anything, I've written several stories and essays in the past, but this is the first story I have (or hope to) written to compeltion. Thus, there may be some "rookie mistakes", and I would apprecaite feedback in that regard.

Secondly, as regarding to the nature of the story, I should warn it's less of a fanfiction and more of a seprate story set in the same world. As i said, it is set on remmnant, (the world of RWBY), and follows the same rules. However this story, as of right now, Consists of and enterily OC cast. You will also learn I decided to have the story set in the kingdom of Vacuo. I specificlly chose Vacuo because A) deserts are cool, and B) we know next to nothing about vacuo, so I get to make up my own stuff. Also, just for refrence, the story takes place about 5 years prior to the events of RWBY. Hence the name.

And I almost forgot. There will be a lot of changing perspectives in this, signifyed by a Horizontal line, like this

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See?

Also, in chapter 1, the word P.H.D always seems to change to P. so, tell me if that happens.

Furthermore, I'm still figuring out how to make this more readable, so bear with me as I screw around. (for example, I found the horizontal lines are not very helpful in the actual thing because of a fade effect. I may need to change that)

Also is chapter 3 broken? because nobody seems to have veiwed it yet.

Or is chapter two really, really bad.