Special Agent Alyssa Spencer
Hello all! Here's my rewrite of my original story 'Federal Sister', 'Special Agent Alyssa Spencer'
Chapter 1 - Ally
"Eric, Calleigh, what do we have here?" asked Lieutenant Horatio Caine, as he came up behind CSI's Detective Calleigh Duquesne and Detective Eric Delko
"Double Homicide," replied the female CSI "The Vics are Samuel and Francesca Banks, husband and wife. No signs of forced entry" she explained as she led Horatio to the front door of the house "But once you get inside the house…" she said opening the door "It's a blood bath."
Calleigh wasn't exaggerating, the walls and furniture were stained with blood and the two victims were right in the centre of the chaos, with their eyes wide open.
"How far have you gotten in processing the scene?" asked Horatio
"We started but were then told to stop and wait for you." Said Eric
"By who?" asked Horatio
"By me." Said a voice from behind Calleigh, Eric and Horatio
They spun round to see a man in his late forties standing in the doorway.
"And you are?" enquired Horatio
"I am Special Agent Bryan Alders of the FBI." Agent Alders replied showing Horatio his badge
"And what does the FBI have to do with our crime scene?" Horatio asked, ever since the incident with Monica West and the FBI he didn't want the FBI anywhere near his team.
"We believe that your 'crime scene' is just the latest in a series of violent murders that have taken place all across Florida, a series of murders that my team has been tracking."
"So you want us to do what? Exactly?"
"I personally would like you to drop the case and walk away, but one of my agents insists that your team can do the job as well as our labs."
"And who might that be?"
As if on cue a young woman stepped into the room from the back yard.
Calleigh's eyes went wide "Ally?" she whispered.
"Lieutenant Horatio Caine, Detectives may I introduce you to Special Agent Alyssa Spencer." The young woman before Horatio, Eric and Calleigh was in her late twenties with long reddish hair and fair porcelain skin, dressed in a dark suit with a moss green camisole underneath, and black high heels.
"Nice to meet you." Greeted Alyssa, as she shook Horatio's and Eric's hands, and just smiling at a shell-shocked Calleigh.
"Agent." Said Alders addressing Alyssa "You will begin processing the scene with the friendly neighbourhood CSI's then you will go to the crime lab and debrief the CSI's and then continue with the investigation. Any questions?"
"No sir."
"Good. Now get to work." With that Special Agent Alders turned on heel and walked away from the crime scene.
"I just want to say something before we start working. I am well aware of your history with the FBI and I assure you I'm not here to take over the case or order you around I'm just here to catch the S.O.B responsible for this." Explained Alyssa "Okay?"
"As long as you understand that we don't trust the FBI." Said Horatio
"Like I said I understand." Replied Alyssa, before turning her attention to Calleigh "You know you're gonna catch flies." She told her smiling
"Answer me just one more question Agent Spencer," Horatio said jumping in "You told your boss that we could do this job. Why?"
"You don't think you can?"
"Of course we can, I just curious as to why you think we can."
"I've heard good things about your lab and our team, and you have an impressive solve rate." Alyssa explained "I also have a history with Detective Duquesne."
"Do you two know each other?" Eric asked
"We went to college together." Calleigh said, a smile forming on her face
"Shall we get to work?"
Tell me what you think! R & R!