This is my first story so I would like it if you could review it please

I was a dark night, the moon had just started to rise. On top of a hill looking into a bowl a man wearing armor and wild mid back length black hair surveyed the village in the center. He was joined by another man "Madara everything is ready for the attack" he looked down into the bowl "are you sure this is the village?"

Madara Stared at his lieutenant "their is no mistaking it, hide it as much as they want but that is the Hokage village" he rubbed his chin "attack with the moon rise" his lieutenant nodded.

Meanwhile in the village "Karen I get the feeling he will be a great ninja and leader"

the woman giggled "Oh Ensui you are just flattering me" she brushed a blond lock of hair out of their sleeping child's face "he is only three months old there is no way you can tell that"

"Call it a hunch, but I will say this he will be a better ninja than his father is" kissing Karen on the cheek and wrapping his arms around her pulling her closer.

Karen didn't resist his embrace but accepted it gladly "You know if he saw what we were doing he might grow up to be a pervert" she giggled as she kissed him on the lips before leading him out of the child's room and into their room. She started to undress but was stopped when screaming started.

Half naked Ensui jumped out of bed and ran outside, throwing open the door he looked in horror as his clan members were cut down by members of the Uchiha.

He ran back inside "quick grab the child and run into the forest, I will catch up to you" he told his wife as he grabbed a Katana. Karen did as she was told and grabbing their son ran off into the woods. Sadly watching them go he grabbed the katana and ran outside to help the villagers escape.

Karen was running thru the woods and feeling someone following her hid her child in a hollow log and turning around started to leave when red eyes with black tomoes stopped her "what the hurry? We just met theirs no need to be shy"

Karen stared in fear at the blood red eyes 'Ensui please hurry'

Ensui had just dispatched an uchiha clansman when he felt as if something was wrong, headed off in the direction that Karen took he ran as fast as he could. Parting a bush he sees her "Karen" he calls out joyously. Karen body fell to the ground and was replaced with the body of an Uchiha.

In shock Ensui could only look at the body of his beloved, the Uchiha advanced and stabbed the shocked Ensui in the abdomen twisting the blade before pulling it out "you damn Hokage have been a thorn in my side" as he flicked the blood off his blade "now all that's left is the Senju clan" leaving the two bodies where they lie.

Ensui struggled to crawl towards the now cold body of Karen and caressed her face, tears streaming down his face as he remembered how full of life she was. A wail brought him back to reality, straining he crawled towards the log that his son was hidden in and reached a bloody hand in and pulled him out.

"what a fuck up, we were the strongest clan and we just got wiped out by the Uchiha" the child stopped crying "you need to live my son, live and become the strongest ninja in history so you can protect those closest to you" he started to form hand-signs, on the last one a vortex opened up and without hesitation he put his son into it "live my son, you must live"

A couple was sitting at a freshly dug grave and crying, their child had died during child birth. The tears wouldn't stop flowing when a vortex opened up next to the grave. The shocked couple stared as a child came floating out of the vortex and landed gently next to the grave. The couple thanked the gods for this miracle and picking up the boy they headed towards their house.

THE NIGHT OF THE NINE-TAILS ATTACK

Their was a wail from a cottage about a mile from the leaf village, 15 minutes later their was another wail for born to the Minakaze family were twins. The masked man killed the two attendants and holding the children threatened Minato, who was able to save them and teleported them to a safe place, and went back to save his love. After getting Kushina to her children he went to save the village from the terror of the Nine-tails and the masked man. After freeing the nine-tails from the masked man he then teleported the nine-tails to another location and retrieved Kushina and their children. Sealing half of the Nine-tails chakra in himself he sealed the other half in the boy child Naruto and then him and Kushina left this world.

Minato was standing in what appeared to be a hall of a traditional Japanese house and sitting in front of him was the aborition from the grim reaper death seal.

"Minato Namikaze before I take your soul completely you do realize that there is a toll for using this jutsu" said the aborition

"What is the toll?"

"The toll is all of your jutsu, chakra, knowledge, and whatever you sealed using this jutsu belong to me, however I will let you keep your, chakra and knowledge for what you did to the seal of the boy but the price is the girl"

"Why is the price the girl? She has her whole life ahead of her why take her when she hasn't even begun to live?"

"Who said anything about taking her life? I will raise her as my child"

"But you aren't a living being, how will you raise her?"

"Fine don't believe me but I have taken my toll now begone"

Minato was dragged by a strange force towards the door, as he was dragged protesting to the door a scroll appeared and on it appeared all of the hand signs and the names of each jutsu that he had ever used and created and a description on how to master each jutsu. Right before he was dragged out of the door a smaller version of the Nine-tails appeared before him and walked towards the aborition, the last thing that he saw was the aborition becoming human and the nine-tails turning white.

"It as been a while since I have seen your real form shinigame" said the fox giving a bow

"how would you like to be sealed in the girl Yoko?"

"How will that help you my liege?"

"it won't help me but it will help the girl, and she will need all the help she can get"

"Fine I will on one condition, she gets the name Haruko understood"

"I understand clearly now then you must get the girl"

with that the nine-tails went off to collect her host.

XxX

The third Hokage and a group of shinobi advanced towards the spot where Minato had teleported the nine-tails to see if they were all right, they arrived their to find that a giant fox held one of the children in its mouth. Seeing them the fox leaped into the tree and disappeared.

"Suzuki after the fox, Shikaku and Inoichi give her a hand" the third then went to the pedestal and saw that the boy was alive. The three that went after the fox returned empty handed.

"The foxes trail just disappeared into thin air" said the head of the Inuzuki clan "I'm sorry my lord that we were unable to retrieve the other child"

"Not even my sensory abilities could sense its presence" Inoichi said "it just vanished into thin air, the hounds couldn't pick up a scent"

"I want every available shinobi out looking for the child, we must find her at all cost understood" the third said

After sealing the nine tails into Haruko he then went about to find her a family, someone who would raise her (the grim reaper couldn't leave his world), so he sent a messenger to retrieve a certain someone who owed him a favor.

"Now why did you send a shikigame to fetch me shinigame? When you could have just come as yourself to get me" said a man in black clothing wearing a black trench coat

"It was faster using the shikigame to find you than searching personally for you"

"So what do you want me to do this time? Perhaps wipe out another clan?"

Smiling "No not this time, this time I want you to raise a child, teach her to be a powerful ninja"

"So how old of a girl are we talking about?"

"five"

"well maybe still a little young, but sometimes the earlier the better, right?"

laughing "she is only five hours old and you need to find her a nurse"

The only thing that the man in black could do was stare dumbfounded at a laughing shinigame.