Return of the Evil Choujin
Disclaimer: I do not own Kinnikuman and quite a significant number of the characters in this aren't mine. This fic is actually based off of an RP I started on Gaia with my friends, so some passages were written by them and edited by me into a more suitable format. It's turning out so successful, I decided to turn it into a fanfic. This is actually a sequel to Kinnikuman Nisei, but there is something you have to know: Most of the fights in this are reenactments of episodes that already took place in Nisei and Iisei as well, so you'll find some similarities in most of the matches seen in this fic. Anyway, enjoy the first chapter:
First Arc: The New Generation of Wrestling
Years ago, the DMP, an evil organization of wrestlers bent to taking over Earth, was destroyed by the heroic Supermen, or rather Choujin, told of in stories and legends. After many a battle, the world hoped that the DMP was finally dealt with. Sadly, in the year 2010, the Choujin have returned to us and are threatening to destroy the planet. What's worse is that the old legends like Mantarou and Terry Kid are too old to fight the evil Choujin and their predecessors are almost all dead with the exception of some who still have the will to go on. Sadly, even though they were still willing to take on today's evil, they were too weak to stop them and a few have died trying. New-aged Choujin have arrived to combat this new threat. Thus the battle for the world has returned.
We begin our story on Kinniku Planet as a young boy with red hair, a black sleeveless shirt and a wolf's tail he been dropped from a ship to start training for the battles ahead.
Neil hurt from being dropped out of the big spaceship that had taken him to this horrible boot camp. He looked up at the big ship, taking off and shouted, "I'LL GET YOU FOR THIS, YOU BASTARDS!"
Suddenly, a wrestler emerged from inside the tower, clearly there to greet the Choujin. There were 13 others there, ready for training while Neil didn't want to be here.
This man greeting them was a great Choujin told of in legends. His name was Terry Kid and he was the son of an even more famous legend.
"Greeting, new generation Choujin!" he announced, "You have all been sent to this planet to prepare for the battles that await you on Earth! Those of you who fail training will never be allowed to protect Earth and will deal with more extensive training, so you'd better do well this time. Say, 2 of our Choujin are missing. We will hold off the rigorous training until they arrive."
Suddenly, a beautiful young girl with long brown hair and a dress came from out of a ship. Her name was Jasmine and she was one of the few female Choujin in existence. She looked at Neil and said nervously, "H-hi a-are you new here too?"
"Yeah," Neil said, noticing this beauty before him. Never had he seen anything so beautiful. But she looked kinda frail. He looked at her and asked, "Are you sure that you are a Choujin? Someone as beautiful and frail as you shouldn't combat villains. Anyway, we're still awaiting another one. I hope he never arrives."
"Hey, I may be frail looking but I'm tough!" she retorted, but when she heard Neil calling her beautiful she blushed, "plus I don't really know if I am a Choujin."
Then she blushed and thought, 'No one's ever called me beautiful before.'
Just then, Terrykid Announced, "If the other Choujin doesn't show up, we start training without him!"
Neil freaked out and thought, 'He'd better show so he has to suffer with me.'
"Huh!? The match is starting?" Jasmine asked, completely unaware of what Terrykid was talking about, "No worries at least we're not missing the fun."
"Fun?" he asked in horror, "Well... if you think fighting is fun... yes, it is fun, HAHAHA!"
Terrykid heard this and said, "That is a shining example of the attitude I want here, but don't think that fighting is a game! You are fighting to protect your people! We judge you by how serious and skilled you are, so don't mess up! Okay, our last member has a while to get here. If he doesn't show up by the deadline, he is to start training later than the others, and that may effect his performance!"
Jasmine heard what Terrykid said so she waited and sat down on the ground.
Neil sighed, opened up a small handkerchief and said, "At least my mom sent me some Karubi Don (Beef bowl) incase I get hungry."
Then he gulped down the beef and just felt that he had to start dancing and sing, "The cattle of the beef, see it says "Moo-moo-moo"! The beef of the rice is really so tender! The rice of the beef is really so tasty! Ah-ahhhh-ahhh-ah-ah-ahhhhAh! Beef bowl!" (Those lyrics are what the subtitles will tell you, but you know they're off)
Terrykid stared at Neil after hearing that. He looked back and thought, 'My god, that's the same ridiculous song that Mantarou sang all the time when he thought about food. Is this guy going to be the serious man his father was?' (And no, Neil is not related to Mantarou)
Then the Texan man looked away and thought, 'I may be dealing with a lunatic.'
Jasmine stared at the sky thinking how lucky Neil was for having a family. Then she got up and went to the little girl's room to change… but Kinniku Planet didn't have one! This didn't really add up. Anyway, she put on shorts, an opened shirt and light shoes.
"Wow, now I feel good and ready," she said as she sat back down again.
Terrykid's eyes widened when he saw another spaceship roll in with an Elvin passenger. She had golden long hair, pointy ears, as did all elves, and she wore a traditional Elvin cloak.
Terrykid looked and said, "It seems we have another Choujin among us. She's not the one we're looking for, mostly because the one we await is a man, but it is nice to see more recruits to add a 16 to our fighter count. Now, we are still waiting for the one called "X", so feel free to go willy-nilly and get acquainted all you like."
When Neil saw the Elvin girl, who looked about 21, but she was really 1200, his eyes widened as he thought, 'Oh my god, she's so cute! But then again, that Jasmine girl is cuter... and we're close to the same age. Still, I might as well get to... ahem... know her a little... heheheh...'
He walked up to the Elvin girl and said, "Hi, my name is Neil! I am a Choujin hero! I'm already well-trained! I'm just here to show everyone how a pro does it!"
Jasmine stared at Neil for acting weird and said, "Hi nice to see that I'm not the only girl here! Nice to meet you."
The Elvin, whose name was Ezira looked at the boy talking to her and placed her hand on her hip. He looked like he drew trouble right to him. And the way he just started bragging. How dull.
"That's nice." She bent at the waist slightly and patted his cheek. "I'm sure you'll get a nice lollipop if you ask."
She chuckled and walked past him. She looked at Jasmine and asked, "It is a pleasure meeting you as well. Miss, what is your name?"
Neil gasped. It was clear that this girl didn't believe him. Of course, he was lying, but still! He thought that his act was so convincing, but he was a fool. He'd never even faced one opponent.
"I have to come clean," Neil said, "I was trained to fight well, but I never wanted to be a Choujin hero. I've never faced an opponent in my life."
Jasmine smiled and said, "My name's Jasmine, what's yours?"
"I am Ezira," she glanced at Neil then looked back at Jasmine. She pointed at him, with a swipe of the hand and asked, "Is he your friend?"
"Yeah, I just met him," Jasmine said as she said, "I'm just so glad I'm not the only girl here."
It seemed as if everyone was ignoring Neil today. Well, this was good. He hated telling this kind of truth, so it was best nobody heard him say that, especially not their instructor, Terrykid. He heard horrible stories about what Choujin did to lazy students, very horrible things.
Terrykid stood up at that moment and announced, "It seems that our other student, X, has not arrived yet, therefore we will start training without him! Come inside now!"
Neil just sunk and thought, 'Dammit... now I don't have this X guy to suffer with...' then had no choice but to follow everyone into the Kinniku League Headquarters.
Terry brought everyone into a courtyard. This is where training took place. He explained the basics and started on the first part. Hanging upside down tied to a pair of ropes around your feet. While the Choujin hangs upside down, he/she is beaten by a club, wielded by one of the supervisors. The test was to take in the blow and see if you could handle extreme pain. Neil gulped. He didn't like pain.
Terrykid pulled out a piece of paper and said, "First up are Jasmine, Raj, Minotauros and Jaeger Jr.!"
Neil watched in fear as the Choujin took in many serious blows. How they could deal with so much of it... they weren't human. Then again, no Choujin was mortal. He even saw that Jasmine was dealing with it.
After they were untied, Terrykid announced, "Next up are Rosaline, Savageman (He's related to Geronimo. Savageman was his dub name. That's what I'm basing this off of), Neil and my son, Dorykid!"
Neil squirmed as he was tied to the pole and beaten mercilessly. Unlike the others, he could hardly stand it. He just wanted it to end... then it did, and he felt like he needed to go to the hospital.
"Ezira, Canadakid, Hexagon and Chess are up next!" Terrykid announced.
"I wanna grow up to be just like my dad," Dorykid said as Neil sighed and thought, 'Everyone here has a death wish.'
"Neil, are you ok… you don't look so good?" Jasmine asked with concern. She felt sorry for Neil having to deal with so much pain.
"Hey, I can help take you to your room if you want," she said kindly.
Terrykid heard this and said, "Uh... sorry, but there is no guestroom for anyone. In fact, you got changed in the supreme Choujin's lounge. I'll let it go, even though we drink coffee in there, but all training finishes today! Everyone is sent to Earth by noon!"
Neil felt his whole body aching and said, "This is nothing to a top Choujin such as myself!" and gave an unconvincing peace sign.
Jasmine marveled at his will to go on and asked, "Say, what's your home planet Neil?"
Neil found this question odd. Everyone he knew originated from either Earth or Kinniku Planet, so the answer was obvious.
"I grew up on Earth," he said, "Did you grow up on Kinniku Planet or Earth?"
"Actually no, neither one of them but since I have no choice, might as well go to your planet," she said, wondering what Earth was like. Jasmine tried to forget the name of the planet she came from.
Terrykid announced the final Choujin for the training, "Gazellekid, Seadog Kid, Sushiman and Nathan Mask are our last contestants."
Neil was starting to finally recognize some of these other Choujin. Clearly, Hexagon was related to Pentagon, one of the First Generation Choujin, but who knew that Pentagon had a son that could give birth to Hexagon? There was no record of that. Savageman was obviously related to Geronimo, another first Generation Choujin with no history of ever having a kid, but must have for Savageman to be here. Nathan Mask must have been the son of Kevin Mask, one of the Second Generation Choujin. Gazellekid... obviously Gazelleman. Seadog Kid... Seadog Man. SushimanRamenman. CanadakidCanadaman. Jaeger Jr.Jaeger. Clearly, a lot of these new age Choujin were related to past Choujin.
Terry judged everyone and said, "You all did rather well for that portion of the training! Now we move onto our next round!"
He then took them to another area with punching bags that he lit on fire.
"Some opponents will have the ability to deflect your attacks," he said, "This is to make sure you can hit those kinds of opponents without hurting yourself!"
Neil had no idea what to do and sent out a punch, hurting his hand in the process.
"That is incorrect!" Terry snapped, "Look at what my son, Dorykid is doing!"
Neil looked over and saw that Dorykid was kicking the punching bag.
"You can learn a lot from him. He learned that skill from me," Terry said with a proud look on his face.
The training passed by and Neil suffered while the others improved. Finally, it was time for the last part of training.
"You will all grapple this dummy and suplex it. But, if your back touches the spikes, you fail," the Choujin explained
Neil had no desire to touch those spikes, so he did all he could and barely managed to avoid the spikes while performing the suplex on the dummy. He couldn't believe that he had passed this portion.
Jasmine performed hers flawlessly due to her athletic build and said, "yay, I did it, what about you Neil?"
"I didn't get poked by the spikes," he said, then dropping to the ground and raising his hands in the air shouted, "I LIVE!"
"That's a good attitude," Terrykid said, "Now to move onto the final portion."
"Wasn't that the final portion?" Neil asked as Terrykid shook his head and explained, "Now you must each defeat one of the previous generation Choujin. There are currently 16 of you here, therefore you will take on one of the 16 Choujin each. There are 5 arenas to fight in, therefore only five can fight at a time."
"Is it going to start right now?" Jasmine complained as Terrykid said, "Well, if you don't wish to fight, then sit out while the others fight in your stead."
Jasmine sat down and looked like she was ready to sleep. She let out a loud yawn and said, "It's been the whole day doing this. Are we ever going to take a rest? Tomorrow I'll be ready."
Terry heard this and said, "No excuses! Today is when you must fight! Otherwise you deal with far worse that will leave you even less ready for this challenge tomorrow! Real heroes don't take breaks!"
Neil gulped and decided that he really had no choice but to do it today.
Canadakid, Savageman, Seadog Kid, Gazellekid and Nathan Mask were the first up.
Nathan stood tall and proud as a familiar face entered the ring. This was one the first generation Choujin, a man by the name of Warsman, the Fighting Computer. He had trained Nathan's father, Kevin Mask, so he knew that he was in for some trouble.
Canadakid was surprised to find that he was facing off against Jaeger, one of the second Generation, and Jaeger Jr.'s father.
Seadog Kid was going up against Gazelleman. Meanwhile, Gazellekid was facing off against Seadog Man. How ironic.
Savageman was going up against Hydrazoa, another one of the Second generation Choujin.
"So, you're the son of my best friend," Gazelleman said to the young walrus teen in front of him, "It'll be a pleasure to fight you."
Meanwhile, Seadog Man eyed his foe and said, "You look just like your father. I look up to Gazelleman, so I don't expect you to lose."
Then the match between each one started.
Gazelleman immediately dashed at his opponent and pinned him to the ground, locking his leg in place only for Seadog Kid to easily escape and kick him in the face. Then he locked Gazelleman's head between his legs and slammed him against the ground.
Gazelleman just laughed and said, "You are tough, just like your father."
Meanwhile, Gazellekid was consistently unleashing Tai Knee Kicks to Seadog Man by the second. The walrus was very impressed by this, but he had no desire to lose, as he and Gazelleman had only beaten one opponent each throughout their career. So, he wrapped his arms around the young deer and spun around, slamming his head against the ground.
"You are very quick, but speed is only a small part of winning," the seadog indicated.
Gazelleman was still being kicked around, so he got tired of it and threw the walrus into the air. Then he leapt up high into the air at him and shouted, "SAVANNA HEAT!" as he struck the boy in the back with the two antlers on his wrist guard, thus dealing heavy damage to the walrus. Seadog Kid easily recovered from it and threw Gazelleman into the air and shouted, "WALRUS WATERFALL CLIMB!" as he placed his hands together and knocked Gazelleman higher into the air with his skull, thus sending the man crashing down into the mat. Gazelleman had been defeated.
Seadog Man saw this and decided to use this on Gazellekid, but as soon as he got the young Choujin into the air, Gazellekid flipped over, facing Seadog Man and shouted, "ANTLER FIST!" thus planting the antlers into the incoming skull and sending the walrus crashing down onto the surface. Seadog Man had also been dealt with.
We now take you to Nathan's match where Nathan was acting very smug. Nathan looked just like his father, Kevin Mask, except her wore a red mask and instead of armor, he just wore pants and that was it.
"So you trained my father," Nathan said with a grimace, "Well, I'm going to prove to everyone that I'm stronger than my father!"
"Why don't you prove that now?" Warsman challenged.
The other Choujin legends watched as a battle they'd wanted to see for a while started to take place. A Mask vs. Warsman. Robin Mask was the one who had trained Warsman to fight. Though it was for the purpose of defeating Kinnikuman himself, he became good after Kinnikuman spared his life in their match.
Nathan picked up Warsman in an instant and slammed him to the ground. It happened so quickly as if he had already been damaged before the match had begun. Now Warsman didn't take damage well. A bit more was sure to cause his circuitry to go insane, so Nathan was not to take him lightly.
Luckily, the masked wonder was doing very well for the most part. He managed to put his foe in a choke slam followed by a leg lock. Then he started to bend the computer's knees as the robot finally started to overheat.
Memories of the past and how he was tormented for a large portion of his life for being born a robot and not a human were coming back to him. This was one of the reasons he had turned bad in the first place and couldn't stand failure. It was because he had spent so much of his life being mistreated by humans, mortals, aging creatures while he was left to just grow old and remain in perfect condition either way.
Warsman reversed the maneuver and held Nathan over his head. Then he slammed the boy's back against his knee. Truly, this must have been a painful experience. This was a very powerful technique.
As if this wasn't enough, the robot picked him up and cracked the boy's back against his knee once more. What was the masked boy to do? Warsman had gone haywire, and of course, the spectators saw a problem with this.
All Neil could say was, "Glad I'm not facing that thing."
