What-up people!
This is an updated/improved version of the first chapter. Also, the Story has been revised, and its future… planned.
Since this was my first fiction ever, I didn't know what it would lead to at the time, but now I do.
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This is the first chapter… an introductory chapter, like a prologue of some sort. So… it might be a little different than the rest.
Disclaimer: I tried to kidnap Naruto but Kishimoto knew Sage-mode so I got my ass kicked…
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Chapter 1: Who has the Will?
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The fire nation, once known as the home of the most powerful clans and warriors, and as the home to the greatest power that there has ever been, a power that could make even the weakest of shinobi into a fearsome lion:
The Will of Fire
Though, it has never been more known for those things, than at the present time.
The 4th great ninja war ended. The shinobi villages came out on top against Akatsuki, though the biggest show of power was by far, from the leaf village of fire country…
What is so special about that land? What do they have that others don't?
Is it their numbers? No, Rock has two times the amount of shinobi.
Is it the amount of jutsu they have in their knowledge? No, lightning has always been proud of owning the most extensive jutsu arsenal.
Is it their adaptability to any kind of territory? Not that either, as Wind was always known to have the most survivability.
Is it the ruthlessness and brutality? Definitely not, Water was always the most aggressive and bloody.
So… what is it?
What ingenious master plans are being developed there? What are their well-thought-out and cunning missions?
Well, how about we take a look?
(Arriving at the gates)
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Konoha's main gates: They are medium to large sized steel reinforced gates, linked to a thick wooden wall that runs around the village, shielding it from unwanted visitors. Past the gates, there is a wide booth with two experienced special-jounin…
"Hey! Kotetsu! Wake up! Do you know the trouble, not to mention pain we'll be in if Hokage-Sama catches you dozing off on guard duty?" said one of the shinobi stationed there.
"Yeah yeah…. I heard you the first time, Izumo. Don't worry, the Hokage barely leaves her office. And if she does, then it's to get a refill of sake. If she stumbles here, then it's because she is so hammered that when she looks at you, she'll see four people on guard duty instead of one." The shinobi, referred to as Kotetsu, answered back before falling in a slumber for the seventh time that day.
"You do have a point" mumbled the first one, now known as Izumo.
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(Passing them and proceeding to the market district, still looking for anything that might enlighten us about the leaf's strength)
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"Come on Shikamaru! You are falling behind! I still need to check out those 17 stores!" said a stunning blue eyed bleach blonde, ponytail haired girl of about 17 years old, towards a pineapple haired male of about the same age, with a 'kill me now, and I'll put in a good word to Kami on your behalf' look on his face.
"Troublesome" the one known as Shikamaru thought, "Ino, will you slow down! My hands are killing me from carrying all these bags!" he cried.
"Will you stop whining? You're acting like a baby!" The bleach blonde yelled back, "You know very well this is my day off… So it's the only day I can use to go shopping!"
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(Sigh… nothing here, how about in the restaurant zone?)
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"Byakugan!" was heard from inside the BBQ.
(A Hyuuga? Could they be the reason?)
"Lookout Gai-sensei! He went into the kitchen!" the Byakugan user warned a green spandex clad shinobi.
"OK NEJI! WE GOT HIM SURROUNDED NOW!" this Gai person loudly said to Hyuuga Neji. Then, this green beast closed in on the kitchen ready to strike, but-
"SUIKEN: DINAMIC ENTRY!" was heard, taking the kitchen door down, making it impact on the unsuspecting shinobi.
"Gai-sensei!" a kunoichi with two buns on her hair shouted to the now knocked out shinobi.
"Tenten, stay back, I'll take care of him" Neji sounded, he then got into a Hyuuga stance with his arms open wide, "Hyuuga taijutsu: Hakke Rokujuuyon Sho!" he then sped up towards his opponent.
"TSUKINUKERO ATSUKI OMOI!" his opponent went for it too. There was a clash and an explosion that threw back several tables and chairs. But when everything was said and done, the Hyuuga was knocked out while the unknown fighter, who was also clad in a green spandex, was in perfect shape except for his walking being way off balance. "HO, HA, HI, HEHE, HU HA HOUYEI!" he…. 'said' or more like… slurred.
(Guess it isn't the Hyuuga what we are looking for…)
"Lee! Please calm down!" The kunoichi tried to reason, but to no avail. Then, the 'enemy' looked at her, and got in a battle stance, if you could call that awkward position he was in… a battle stance, seeing that his legs were practically stumbling on each other. "Oh no, please Lee! Stop-Uh?" she looked bewildered at what just happened, and then sighed in relief. The 'enemy' fell on the floor sleeping. Suddenly, she heard the front door open.
A head peaked at the inside and then-"HAAAAAAAAAAA! What happened in here! My favorite eating place is ruined!" a very bulky guy, probably an Akimichi, wailed almost on the verge of crying.
"Choji!" Tenten called.
"Uh? Tenten? What in the world happened here! And why are Lee, Gai-sensei, and Neji out on the floor?" Choji asked.
"Well, Lee is sleeping, but Gai-sensei and Neji are knocked out" she said shaking her head, "Lee was juggling a bottle, and then he tripped and the bottle accidently opened and fell head first into his open mouth, we started laughing at him but then we noticed that it said 'sake' on the bottle…" she explained.
"Oh, say no more, the drunken green devil strikes again uh?" he chuckled.
"Yes, indeed he did" she smiled, "Can you help me getting them to the hospital?"
"Sure"
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(The Hyuuga got beaten, and the drunken one cannot be controlled, that does more harm than good, it's a long shot but perhaps at the hospital?)
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"OWCH!" someone cried.
"Konohamaru-kun stay still or I cannot take care of your scratches!" a young girl said.
"I don't need my scratches taken care of Moegi-chan! I need for that old bat of a Hokage to stop sending us after the stupid cat of the daimyo's wife!" this konohamaru roared back.
"Konohamaru-kun, it is not polite to call Hokage-Sama an old bat…" this time a young boy said.
"Shut up Udon!"
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(It was a long shot anyway, hmm, what was that about the Hokage? Oh of course! The nerve center of the village! To the Hokage tower!)
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"Shizune! Get me my sake!" a busty blonde haired woman, with an age hiding jutsu activated, shouted to someone named Shizune.
"No! You already had 3 bottles today! Do your job!" Shizune, apparently a young woman with raven dark hair, shouted back.
"Stupid job….I can't wait until this stupid year is over for the brat to take it…" the Hokage mumbled.
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(Well, there's not much greatness here either. Where is it? Could it be such a power that they keep it secretly hidden even in their own village? Unless… it is something taught to the leaf shinobi at a young age? To the Konoha academy!)
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(In one of its currently occupied class-rooms)
There were approximately 30 kids in it, sitting, waiting for something…
Suddenly, a projectile flew inside, braking one of the windows in the process. It hit the wall to the left while scaring the living shit from the young students. Attached to the projectile now stuck to the wall was a banner that was now close to the ceiling. It read: 'Introducing Mitarashi Anko, the replacement teacher for today!' Beneath it now stood a female, purple headed jounin of somewhere between ages 24 to 32. She was grinning evilly towards the innocent kids.
"Hello victims! I am Anko and I'll be your executioner for today by request of Hokage-sama!" she shouted. The children looked on with a frightened look.
One of them raised a hand while asking, "Heerrr, Anko…sensei? You sure you got the right room? We were expecting Iruka-sensei today…" The rest of them nodded in agreement.
"Well, too bad! I'm replacing him! I was asked to teach you about the things you might expect on a mission when they go terribly wrong!" She responded with a grin. "Now pay attention! Who wants to volunteer to be the first to be shown a few things that might happen?" Nobody raised their hand. Anko looked at them pissed. "Alright I'm gonna kidnap one of you at random then!"
"Hey! You have to tell us what happens! Not do it on us! That was what Iruka-sensei told it was going to be today!" Another shouted back. Anko just looked at him and pointed upwards.
"Look at the sign kid… Does it say: 'I give a damn' ?" The kid looked up and shook his head signifying a 'no'. Anko then grinned, "That's because I don't… Now since you have been the only one kind enough to rise against my methods, I think this will be best shown by demonstrating on you!" The kid went wide-eyed in a panic!
The screams that followed were heard throughout the academy…
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(Uhm… I'm guessing this isn't what we're looking for, otherwise there would be a lot of will of fire in the hidden mist village (bloody mist)…)
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Suddenly a very loud explosion was heard from far away.
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(A big battle! Surely it must be there that this will of fire is being used! It seems to be coming from the training grounds.)
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(Passing training ground 6)
"You forgot…" One accused.
"C'mon… man! It was an honest mistake!" Another defended.
"You shouldn't forget your appointments, it shows others a lack of responsibility on your part… people might be depending on you…" the first continued. The second groaned and smacked his face with his hand, dragging it slowly down in annoyance.
"Shino… it was the first time that happened! Why are you making such a fuss?" he enquired to the shinobi with a hood and shades, identified as Shino.
"Because it did happen Kiba… What if the first time happened during a mission? It could have been dangerous. Don't you agree Hinata? ... Hinata?" Shino took his eyes off of Kiba to look to his right, wondering why the lack of response from his other teammate.
There she was, sleeping on the grass with her head on top of a large K-9, who appeared to be asleep too.
"See? They don't care!" Kiba said pointing at the fast asleep dog and female. "Besides, Kakashi-sensei always arrives late to appointments while reading porn! And nobody ever makes a fuss about it!" he reasoned.
Shino just continued to stare at the two sleeping on the grass. After a few seconds, the Hinata girl stirred awake and looked up while yawning. "Hey… is it over yet?" she asked.
Shino kept his stare…
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"You fell asleep…" he accused, and Kiba let out a frustrated yell from behind.
"W-well, you guys were arguing for a-almost an hour…" Hinata pointed out in defense.
"What if you were suddenly needed? In a mission you have to stay focused, even if everything seems calmed and controlled." he questioned, always in his monotone boring speech.
Hinata just stared back with a 'how did I get pulled into this freaking argument?' look on her sleepy face. "B-but this isn't a mission Shino-kun…" she tried.
"The same situation could have arisen during a mission. Don't you agree Kiba? ... Kiba?" he turned back, looked down, and just stared with an obvious blank expression on his face even though it was almost completely covered.
Sprawled on the grass with his arms and legs spread wide apart was a now snoring Kiba…
Shino looked back to Hinata… who, after Shino directed his attention back to Kiba, took the opportunity to fall asleep again on top of Akamaru, to get out of the 'Shino talk trap'.
Shino looked back and forth between teammates…
"I'm being ignored… That is not nice… You cannot afford to ignore your teammates, or your teamwork might get affected… That might be dangerous during a mission…" he continued to talk despite the sleeping trio.
Suddenly, a burst of wind came from his right, probably from another training ground. He side-stepped it… A burst like that couldn't still be intact after being shot all the way from another training ground unless someone went out of his way to keep it strong like that.
He looked at the sky…
"That is not nice. As Kami, you shouldn't take sides on which human beings you like more or less. It might create jealousy between people. Jealousy breeds hate, hate breeds pain, pain breeds more hate. That might get innocents killed, and wars to start. As Kami, it is your job to prevent those scenarios as best as you can." He pointed out… To… Kami… -.- (OMG)
Unbeknownst to Shino, Kami just finished creating an EBay account, and placed his job for sale, with a side note: 'Will trade for the full Naruto rights, be warned that in this event, I will make the character Shino die a horrible death'.
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(Well… the will of fire is DEFINITELY not here, let's check another training ground. Like the one from where that wind burst came from…)
(On training ground 11)
"Katon: Goryuuka no jutsu!" a male shinobi called out.
"Katon: Goukakyuu no jutsu!" another breathed. Apparently the two were side by side as if they were a team.
The two fire jutsu raged on until-
"Suiton: Suiryuudan no jutsu…" a female voice calmly said from the other side of the battle field.
"Futon: Daitoppa…" a third male whispered, this one was on the female's right side, making them the opposing team.
They made the tiger seal, and when their jutsu were side by side both shinobi shouted, "Mugen Sajin Suishouha!" and a very huge jet of water collided with the two fire jutsu, the wind jutsu mixed with the water jutsu made short work of the two opposing jutsu, effectively ending them. However, the water jet, though slightly weakened, still raged on.
"Shit, Sasuke, we gotta move!" the first male shouted.
"Hn" the second shinobi known as Sasuke grunted in agreement and both shinobi jumped away from the incoming jutsu. They landed safely but with a little more distance between them. "Kakashi, they are trying to separate us" he warned and his eyes changed from dark to red with three black tomoe.
"So it seems" the first one, revealed to be named Kakashi, agreed. He then pulled his hitaiate, which was covering his left eye, in the upward direction, uncovering the same kind of eye as his teammate.
(The Sharingan! But of course! It must be them the wielders of this strange will of fire! Sasuke Uchiha, said to have killed his brother, S-rank missing shinobi Uchiha Itachi killer of the Uchiha clan; the S-rank missing nin Orochimaru; the A-rank missing nin Karin, and S-rank missing rock shinobi, Deidara. Then Hatake Kakashi, the general of the leaf village in the fourth great shinobi war, and killer of two A-rank missing nins named Juugo, and Suigetsu, and an S-rank named Zetsu! They are said to be the greatest of shinobi!)
"That won't do you any good Kakashi" someone said behind him.
"What? How did he-" The silver haired shinobi didn't finish his thoughts as he had to block a punch and duck under a wheel kick. He then countered with a punch in the gut and kicked the third fighter up, continuing with a series of kicks, putting his opponent way up in the air. After that he grabbed his opponent's arm and hoisted himself to the side, enabling him to get behind his 'enemy'. After that, he grabbed onto his opponent's torso, turned them upside down, and started spinning at great speeds towards the ground. "Omote ren-" But then he noticed that the ninja being dragged downwards was smirking… "Wait, this isn't…." And that's as far as he went as both shinobi blew up in a giant explosion.
"Kakashi! Damn it!" he then sensed someone and jumped avoiding a chakra enhanced kick. Doing a mid-air back-flip, he landed safely a few feet away.
"You don't have time to be looking the other way Sasuke-kun" a female, with a very… shall we say… 'appealing' appearance, said with a mocking tone. She was probably about 17 or 18 years old, about the same age as Sasuke and the third fighter.
Unlike Kakashi who had gravity defying spiky silver hair, and Sasuke who had odd shaped raven black hair, she had long and slightly curly pink hair.
She was wearing a flak jacket like some chuunin and most jounin wear, except this one has not only an elite jounin, but also an elite medic insignia. Underneath it was a surprisingly cool-looking sleeveless orange sports shirt that hugged her figure tightly but comfortably. Her hitaiate was wrapped around her left upper arm, and her hands were protected by an orange fingerless glove on the left one, and an equal but pink colored glove in her right one.
Her silky-smooth long legs were covered down to the beginning of her knees by black shorts, and they appear to be made of the same material as the flak jacket. Lastly, she is wearing black armor-plated battle boots.
"Hn" Sasuke grunted and went forward. He tried a sweeping low kick but she crouch-jumped over it; she then supported herself with her arms on the ground and delivered a right leg kick to which he used his arms to soften the blow, but still felt a little pain. Both got up fast and charged at each other. Sasuke prepared a Chidori on his hand.
"Oh no you don't" she said and punched the ground, causing a small quake, making the Uchiha stumble and fall, consequently ending the jutsu. "I got you now" she said and flashed through some hand seals. "Suiton: Daibakufu!" using chakra to bring the water from the nearby river, she sent a huge swirling force of water towards the downed shinobi hitting him with it. "It's ove-Aaah!" she suddenly cried in pain as she was hit by some lighting that was conducted through her water jutsu. "An electric Kagebunshin" she then gasped as she felt the tip of the legendary Kusanagi against her back.
"You were right, it is over" Sasuke started.
"For you" Kakashi finished. She gasped in shock a second time because right in front of her, with a kunai against her belly, was the copy ninja himself.
"I thought you were history Kakashi" Sasuke commented.
"It was close, but my Sharingan managed to spot it in time, though I had to use a water wall, and even so, my sleeves are a little burned." He answered casually.
"Are you two finished?" she asked with her arms crossed, annoyed that they were talking as if she wasn't there.
"No, but you are" the Hatake shot back.
"Hn" the Uchiha agreed.
"Really? You two must have used your Mangekyous one too many times then" she said smirking.
"Oh maaaan, I knew this was too easy" Kakashi whined.
"Genjutsu?" Sasuke thought "Sharingan….Kai!" his Sharingan swirled canceling the jutsu. They both looked back and there she was, casually against a tree. "Well Kakashi, I think we should try a little harder" he said, getting in a serious battle stance, with his Kusanagi in his right hand, ready to slash anything on his command. The former Anbu Captain nodded and got into his own stance. "And where the hell is the other?"
"Sakura, I assure you we won't fall for the same trick twice, so I suggest you ready yourself." Kakashi warned.
"Pfft!" the one named Sakura scoffed, "If you couldn't see through that, then I doubt you'll get out of this one" she said, then started going through some seals.
Both Sharingan wielders' eyebrows shot up, "You do know that you're not supposed to say that you are about to do a Genjutsu, don't you? Against the Sharingan it's a waste of chakra to use a Genjutsu if we are already expecting one." Sasuke explained.
To that, the pinkette just chuckled as she continued the hand seals, "Is that so? Well then Sasuke-kun" she mocked, "If you are so sure about yourself and your eyes, then please, do your best to entertain me" she said with a smug smirk, already finished with the hand seals. Sasuke furrowed his brows and griped his Kusanagi harder. "It is so easy to pull his strings, for a silent guy he sure can be hot headed. Reminds me of how that blonde knuckle head used to be in battle" she mused.
"Calm down Sasuke, you won't do us any good if you're not focused" Kakashi reasoned, and Sasuke relaxed his grip.
"Bah, you're no fun Kakashi. Well, here I come, Sakura Magen: Makyou Ikebana no Mai" she said, then got on one feet and started spinning gracefully, only to be dispersed into cherry blossoms, which continued floating around at high speeds. After five seconds they shot forward towards the two Sharingan wielders.
Both concentrated their eyes and, "Sharingan….Kai" but the pink blossoms kept coming.
"I tried to cancel it, but it's still coming, any ideas?" Kakashi asked Sasuke.
"I couldn't either, but the Sharingan can still tell when something will hit us, all we got to do is evade and counter, hoping that if she takes a strong blow the technique will end. I can forcefully terminate the Genjutsu, but I would need to know exactly where she would be" Sasuke explained, and Kakashi nodded. The blossoms were almost upon them when they suddenly stopped, only to triplicate in number a second later. Then they got all around the two. "Where are you…Sakura?"
Kakashi suddenly ducked five blossoms and tried to slash them with a kunai, but nothing happened. Two seconds later Sasuke jumped and brought his Kusanagi down, again, no hit. Kakashi then jumped but something caught him due to the way he stopped in mid-air. "Shit! She got me-waa!" he was pulled back down and he hit the ground hard. Sasuke tried a couple of swings but it only got him a punch in the face drawing blood and almost breaking his nose. He cried in pain but didn't stop to cover the flow of blood. "What kind of Genjutsu is this!" the copy ninja wondered as he got to his feet.
"Kakashi get underground now! I'm gonna end this! KATON: DAI HOUSENKA NO MAI!" he screamed as he started spinning around firing dozens and dozens of medium sized fireballs in every direction. The fireballs hit the battlefield creating hundreds of explosions and dust was raised from the ground. He then stopped to try and spot her. Even in the unlikely chance that he didn't hit her, the dust formed would certainly block her view, but not the view of his Sharingan. He then spotted the blossoms again. He gritted his teeth in frustration, but got ready to attack nevertheless. He was going to speed towards the pink demons but something gripped his neck very tightly. "Uhg!Grhee!" it was a hand, and it was choking him, definitely a chakra enhanced grip.
"Tsk tsk, Sasuke-kun, I thought you better than this." A female voice said, from behind him.
"What! But the hand grip is in front of me!" he thought. "Gah!" the pressure of the grip increased, hoisting him up in the air. The grip was so strong that he couldn't even find the strength to kick in front of him, using every bit of it to stay conscious.
"Just because I can't see, doesn't mean I can't feel. And my Genjutsu enables me to feel everything that touches my namesake blossoms" the voice continued.
"Doton: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu!" came a voice from below. Sasuke felt the grip on him disappear and the shinobi go underground. Getting his strength back, he slashed behind him, but whoever was there a moment ago is already gone. Kakashi rose from the ground a moment later with several long bandages tied to his arm that disappeared underground. "I got someone, and I tied him or her as I pulled from bellow."
"There's more than one! Be on your guard. Is it him you got? The grip on me was pretty strong." Sasuke asked.
"I don't think so, the body wasn't bulky enough to be male. Don't forget she can get pretty strong when using chakra to enhance her attacks." He then pointed his Sharingan towards the empty hole in the ground, but he knew someone was there with only the head above ground. "I can't find a loophole in the Genjutsu even at this distance; can you give it a try?"
"Yeah" the Uchiha looked at the hole in the ground. "Found it, KAI!" the blossoms floating inside the hole converged together, and Sakura was revealed. "Look, there is still a bundle of cherry blossoms, Sakura did you conceal him in the Genjutsu too? I know the dobe can't do a Genjutsu this strong."
"It's amazing isn't it? I made it myself, and it's even about myself see?" Sakura chattered happily. "About him being concealed in it, well, why don't you find out for yourselves? Or are you chicken?" she challenged.
"More like a duck with that hair, and if the butt is in the hair, then the beak must be up his ass! Sure as hell explains his constant brooding!" inner Sakura said in a rare appearance.
"Be silent! I'm in a middle of a fight!"
"But that was so freaking funny! We got to tell fox boy about this joke! He's gonna laugh sooooooooooo hard! CHA!"
"Fine, I will, and yeah it was pretty darn funny, he-he, now scram, I got asses to kick!"
"OK ok, SHANARO!"
"So? Scared?" she taunted with a smirk.
"Like hell! Kakashi, guard her!" Sasuke ordered and sped towards the still standing blossoms, leaving Kakashi and Sakura behind.
"Sakura, you really need to stop doing that to him" Kakashi pleaded.
"Whyyy?" the emerald eyed pouted "It's not my fault he is so easily pushed….besides, it's pretty damn funny!" she said with a huge grin. Kakashi just sighed.
"You've been spending too much time with that knucklehead…..his personality is very contagious" he commented with a chuckle.
"Yeah, I know. But I like it…" A smile on her pretty face, "I like it very much"
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With Sasuke…
He began slashing at everything that had a pink color around him, but his Kusanagi never hit anything solid apart from the occasional rock or tree that stood in the way. Suddenly, his Sharingan detected wind chakra. "It's big, probably A-rank" he stood ready to counter, already having a fire jutsu in mind.
He heard a whisper, "Futon: Hanachiri Atsugai…" then he started going through some seals to throw a technique of his own.
"Katon: Rykuka Bunshin" he said mentally. The wind jutsu continued its path of destruction until reaching Sasuke and hitting him head on and enveloping him in a twister of thousands of razor-wind sharp flowers to continue inflicting damage. However, the caster of said wind jutsu did not expect for this Sasuke to turn into flames, igniting the wind all the way to him/her. And in a startled motion, said person gasped in shock, releasing the jutsu and jumping sideways. But it was too late, as his/her position was revealed and locked by the Sharingan the moment the Uchiha saw where the fire was leading to. So as soon as he/she landed on the ground, the Uchiha heir grabbed the person in a strangle hold from behind.
"Got you!" he claimed "Now, for the revelation, KAI!" he thought as his Sharingan swirled. The person was revealed to be…."SAKURA!" he gasped in surprise. "She can use wind jutsu too!"
Kakashi looked to where Sasuke was in confusion, and then changed looks between the two Sakuras. "What the hell? Did she do a Kagebunshin in the middle of the Genjutsu?" He then noticed the Sakura on the ground with a smirk. "Oh shit!" "Sasuke!"
"I know! Shunshin no jutsu!" he let go of Sakura, did a hand sign and disappeared at the same time that she blew up in a very big explosion. He reappeared 50 feet away, but it seems he didn't escape unharmed as blood was running down his left leg and his pants were burned up to knee level. He got on his hand and knees trying to catch his breath. "She can make her clones explode too! How the hell do they do it?"
Kakashi turned to the only remaining Sakura. "I guess you were the real one all along. Very nice Genjutsu, but in the end you lost."
"Again with the underestimating Kakashi? I expected that from Sasuke, but not from you. Can't you see that I have been in control from the very beginning? Don't forget to look….underneath the underneath." She said with a wide grin.
Kakashi looked wide eyed. "She can't mean!" he gasped, "Crap! Not again!" 'BOOM'
The explosion sent him flying, landing with a crash near Sasuke. He got up with his teeth gritted, and grabbing his bloody arm in heavy pain. "That one was a Kagebunshin too?" Sasuke asked in bewilderment.
"Ugh…it s-seems so. We walked right into her trap. She has been manipulating this whole fight since the beginning. I don't know if she got help, but if we don't start getting serious, we will end up killed." Kakashi noted.
"Took you guys long enough to get rid of them, and it appears that you had a lot of trouble." Sakura said from behind them. They looked to where the voice was coming, and sure enough there she was at clear sight, standing against a tree with a bored look. "Nice day uh?" she casually said. The two Sharingan wielders just stood there wide eyed. Suddenly the peripheral vision of their Sharingan eyes captioned a huge chakra source entering the training grounds, and they turned and again got in a battle stance as they recognized who it was.
The person just walked calmly towards Sakura. "Hey guys!" he waved, "Having fun?"
The other two just shot him confused looks. "Where the hell were you? I thought you were here fighting with us…" Kakashi asked.
"Uh? I was here at the beginning, but after I made the clone my stomach rumbled, Sakura heard it and said for me to go eat and bring something for her after. She said she would take care of the fight, so I went. I forgot to warn the clone so he exploded himself because he thought my plan was still in action. I made a stop at Ichiraku to get some ramen, and on the way here I stopped at a dango stand" He said approaching Sakura. Then he took a scroll and unsealed it, revealing a box of dango and a coke. "Here you go Sakura-chan" he said smiling.
"Thank you Naruto!" she said, giving him a smile of her own. Then she sat down, back against the tree, and started digging through her food.
"You have to be shitting me…" Sasuke said with a 'what the fuck' look. "How can she be that strong? She fought against two Sharingan wielders, without ever looking directly into our eyes. And beat the crap out of us, without receiving so much as a scratch!"
"By the way" Sasuke heard Kakashi voice up, "How do you make your clones blow up?" he asked. Yes, Sasuke was wondering that himself…how?
"Naruto taught it to me" Sakura answered. Then they looked towards Naruto expectantly.
"I managed to discover that around the time Sasuke left Orochimaru to kill his brother" he answered as if it was the most normal thing in the world. "I'll show you how to do it someday…"
Sakura finished eating and re-sealed the garbage in the scroll before pocketing it. She then got up, stretched and yawned. "So…you guys ready for round two?" she asked.
"Yay! And now I'll fight too! So you guys better give it your all." The blond announced cheerfully.
"Very well. Let's get serious" Kakashi said and closed his left eye. Sasuke nodded and closed both his eyes. Three seconds later they opened their eyes, revealing their Mangekyous activated.
"Time to end this" Sasuke said.
"Hooooo….someone is angry, we better be careful Sakura-chan!" Naruto told her with a playful smirk.
"Indeed, we better watch our behinds, or they might become close to being close to almost surprise us by being very near to the level under the level that is under the level of strength that can almost be able to entertain us." She said matter-of-factly. Naruto looked at her with an emotionless face. Then his cheeks started becoming red, like a fire was spreading. Sakura smirked as his body started shaking like an earthquake. However Sasuke and Kakashi didn't wait to find out was coming next as they charged, ready to finish this second round. "Naruto, they are comin-" but he burst out laughing his ass of, rolling on the ground, clutching his belly. "Naruto! Heads up!" she warned, but he was too far gone. "Damn it, I got to stop them, at least until that baka stops laughing! Suiton: Ni Suikoudan no jutsu!"
Two water sharks shot forward. "Get Naruto, Sasuke. I'll deal with Sakura" Kakashi commanded. "Kagebunshin no jutsu" he created one clone, and they stood in front of the two water sharks… "Raiton: Jibashi!" both Kakashi and the shadow clone shouted and unleashed a very powerful electrical current that evaporated the sharks. The current went forward, straight at Sakura.
"Futon Kirazai: Kazekiri no Yaiba" on both her hands appeared very big wind blades. She jumped forward and slashed the incoming lightning attack, rendering it useless. She then began slashing in the direction of Kakashi and his clone, and sharp bursts of wind left her hands. Kakashi made a Shunshin, but his clone was destroyed. Kakashi reappeared behind her.
"Raikiri!" he tried, but Sakura turned around and took the Raikiri clean of Kakashi's hand with the very sharp wind blades. Both jumped away from each other after Sakura missed another slash.
Meanwhile Sasuke watched Naruto laugh while he was with his hand towards the sky. Clouds were already coming together by the time the laughter was beginning to lower into just several chuckles. "Sorry dobe, but I'll be sending you to the hospital. KIRIN!" Sasuke roared. Thunder crashed. Naruto heard some noise and looked up to see lighting from above ready to burst in a second. He chucked a kunai in the direction of the lighting out of reflex but the kunai missed as lighting stroke the ground where he stood. "Not only he missed, but he thought a kunai was going to stop anything? How dumb…" Sasuke mumbled. He then felt a presence behind him but was too late to do anything.
"Futon: Fuuhoukegan!" the blonde shinobi said from behind the Sharingan user as the Uchiha's Mangekyou eyes widen in astonishment. He didn't have time to move however, because wind picked up around Sasuke and trapped him in some kind of ball of very concentrated wind chakra.
"What the! What's this!" he asked as he tried to get out of said wind sphere. He then looked at Naruto. "How are you still standing? You were hit head on! There's no escape from lighting! It's an instant attack!" he shouted in confusion and anger. Naruto just looked at him with a smile.
"You are right, there is no time to escape from such an instant attack…except with an instant technique that is." He explained and lifted his hand to show the kunai he threw at the lighting strike before.
Sasuke stared at the peculiar kunai as his eyes widened again, this time in recognition. "Hiraishin…" the Uchiha whispered. "Shit!"
"Well Kakashi…" Sakura started, "looks like your partner got beaten. That only leaves you" she remarked.
"It seems so, but don't think it will be easy for you to beat me alone." He shot back.
"Who says she is alone?" Suddenly appearing from behind Kakashi, the blond, blue eyed shinobi asked the masked one who had his eyes wide.
"W-what? B-but what about Sasuke? Don't you have to keep him trapped?" Kakashi asked, perplexed.
"My attack doesn't have the weaknesses that the Suirou no jutsu has Kakashi. I don't have to keep feeding chakra and maintaining the form." He explained. Sakura smirked.
"Well Kakashi, what will you do?" she asked with a chuckle.
"Me? I'm going to beat you both" he said as he disappeared in a puff of smoke. Kakashi then jumped from the ground behind Naruto with a Raikiri in his hand. Naruto turned and ducked under the Raiton jutsu. He grabbed Kakashi's hand and got him in a choke hold with his other arm.
"That's just another Kagebunshin Naruto! He's going for Sasuke!" Sakura warned as she ran to where Sasuke was imprisoned. However Kakashi was already there.
Naruto disposed of the Kakashi clone, "Sakura! Stop!" He shouted, and she turned around with confusion on her face.
"What! But he's g-" she tried.
"He can't…" Naruto said, cutting her off. She looked at him puzzled.
"How come?" she asked.
"You'll see." He said and looked towards the two Sharingan wielders. Sakura did the same while walking to Naruto's side.
"Sasuke, how do I cancel this sphere?" Kakashi asked.
"I've been watching the structure for a minute but I can't figure it out." Sasuke answered with gritted teeth.
"It's wind, how about a fire jutsu?" Kakashi wondered.
"No. It'll roast me. Don't worry about me for now, I'll be out in a few minutes I assure you. Just keep fighting them until then."
"Ok, suit yourself" Kakashi then jumped towards the other two. "Nice jutsu Naruto" Kakashi complimented with an eye smile.
"He-he, thanks" he said with his fox grin while rubbing the back of his head. Sakura smiled too.
"Very impressing, that's Naruto for you….….amazing clever baka…" the pink haired thought while sporting her pretty smile.
Kakashi didn't stop for long as he looked to the two shinobi in front of him with his Mangekyou spinning very rapidly. "KAMUI!"
The air around Naruto and Sakura started to change. Even the scenery started to lose visual consistency. "Naruto, what's going on?" Sakura asked, noticing everything around them starting to unfocus. She then noticed Kakashi's concentrated expression. "Genjutsu!" Sakura warned.
"What?" Naruto looked around them, noticing what was happening. "This doesn't feel like Genjutsu, this feels like when I use the hiraish-" he stopped as he realized what was happening. "Shit! He's using his Mangekyou's special ability! We have to go!" he shouted.
"Too late!" Kakashi remarked as Naruto and Sakura started to get caught in the time/space vortex. Naruto threw his three pronged kunai to his side.
They disappeared in the already closing vortex, but a burst of wind left the small hole in the direction of the kunai. A moment later, Naruto appeared with the kunai in his hands. "Crap! SAKURA!" he shouted. Kakashi smirked as he looked towards Sasuke. A moment later a vortex appeared next to him, and for everyone else's surprise, Sakura appeared besides Sasuke, trapped in Naruto's jutsu.
Kakashi then turned to Naruto after finishing his jutsu. "Nice save, but now you will have to free Sasuke too if you want to free Sakura…"
"I must admit Kakashi, you are pretty resourceful when you need to be." Naruto said smirking. "But what makes you think I won't be enough to defeat you?"
"Well, I'm not sure, but let's find out shall we?" he challenged.
"My pleasure" Naruto retorted as he shot forward.
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Sasuke got in a battle stance when Sakura dropped by. Sakura also got into one of her own as soon as she understood what happened. "So, what now? We fight in this cramped space?" she asked.
"Why not? If I subdue you, I'll be able to force Naruto to release me with some negotiating. But don't worry, I won't bite…..much" Sasuke said smirking.
"…did you just make a joke?" she said astonished. Sasuke just chuckled.
"So she wants to play games uh?" Sasuke thought. He then slashed with his Kusanagi but Sakura blocked with wind chakra blades. Sasuke grabbed her hand and spun her around. She tried a kick but he blocked with his leg, jumped over her and gripped and blocked her arms with his hands, and her legs with his legs. Their faces inches apart. He inched forward, "well, still want to play around?" he whispered, his breath hitting her lips. He was thinking of making her squirm under his touch.
He inwardly smirked as he noticed her bringing her face forward, while her eyes were shut. However, when she was about to close the gap, she moved her head to the left, bringing her lips close to his ear and whispered. "I just did…" His brow furrowed in confusion.
"What are you-" but he was cut off as she brought her knee up very fast, using chakra to enhance her strike. "AAAAHH!" he screamed at the top of his lungs.
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Kakashi threw a punch but Naruto ducked and kicked away, but was greeted with a puff of smoke and an elbow in the face. The copy ninja jumped back as that Naruto went up in a burst. Both ninjas were again in front of each other, and started doing some hand seals.
"FUTON: DAITOPPA!" from Naruto
"SUITON: SUIRYUUDAN NO JUTSU!" from Kakashi
Both attacks nullified each other, but they went for another. Naruto started a Rasengan in one hand and a water jutsu in the other.
"FUTON: RASENGAN!" "SUITON: HAHONRYUU!"…. "GUFUU SUIKA NO JUTSU!" from Naruto
"DOTON: RETSUDO DAI TENSHOU!" from Kakashi
Again, it ended in a draw. "Damn, what's taking Sasuke so long? I'm almost out of chakra…" Kakashi thought tiredly. Naruto however….was as good as knew.
"What's wrong Kakashi? Not enough chakra?" Naruto asked with fake concern.
"You could say that" then, they heard a very loud scream coming from where the wind sphere was. "Oh you have got to be kidding me…." Kakashi mumbled not wanting to believe what he heard.
"Looks like Sakura's having fun. Kakashi, you should never put her and Sasuke in a small confined space. That will just put at risk his goal of rebuilding his clan." Naruto said, then he turned to Kakashi, "And by the look on your face, you were expecting the results to be the exact opposite, right?"
"Yeah, looks like you're not the only surprising ninja anymore." Kakashi chuckled.
"He-he, I was in need of a partner in crime. And I think she is the perfect candidate for that position. But back to the fight…..do you give, or shall we continue?"
"Continue of course" and he ran towards his blonde opponent.
Naruto threw a kunai, but Kakashi saw it coming, so when Naruto 'appeared' holding it near him he grabbed his arm and delivered a Raikiri to his stomach. But to his surprise, Naruto blew up in smoke. Kakashi was wondering how he could have been mistaken when he felt another three pronged kunai at his neck. "H-how?" he asked.
"When I threw the first one, you accompanied it completely, being sure that I would appear there. But that entire kunai was a fake." Naruto started to explain.
"A fake? But when you reappeared, you were holding it!"
"That kunai was a henged bunshin that performed the henge while holding another kunai. So when he released the henge, it appeared that he was holding the same kunai. And as I was saying, you concentrated yourself entirely on the first kunai, enabling me to throw another towards your back." Naruto finished. "So…you yield?"
Kakashi sighed "….yes"
"Good, now let's go check on Sasuke before he gets himself killed…
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"Ugh…" he grunted in pain. "I…got…played….by her! H-how! She used to become so annoyingly giddy every time I even looked in her direction all those years ago… This should have made her almost get a heart attack…..Damn it, how can she be stronger than me and my Mangekyou…..no, she isn't….NO ONE IS!" he looked at her suddenly.
"What?" she asked. "You played with fire, you got burned…." She told him casually.
"I-I played w-with fire! I'll s-show you what f-fire IS!" he shouted, "I'm tired of this sphere! Amaterasu!"
"W-wha-YOU FOOL! DON'T USE THAT IN HERE!" she warned. But to no avail as he released the jutsu. She ducked under it and the black flames hit the wind, spreading all around the edge of the sphere, making it look like a black orb of fire. He then deactivated the flames so as to not get burned and kicked her away from him. As she was flying back due to the force of the kick she threw a kunai towards Sasuke, but he side stepped it, and it got stuck in a rock right behind him.
"I've had enough, there is no way I'm gonna lose, even if this is a spar!" he claimed. "Susano'o!"
Sakura looked as a skeletal ethereal warrior was forming. She recognized the sword and the mirror the 'god' was using, and knew there was no way to fight it and survive. Unless…
"Damn Sakura, why did you have to hit him in the nuts?" Naruto asked as he and Kakashi arrived at the scene. "Now he is totally pissed!" Naruto whined.
"Yup, you did it now Sakura, now it is up to you to put an end to his brooding. I'm not taking any part in this…" Kakashi said, taking his orange book from his pocket and opening on his tagged page.
"Fiiiiiiiiiine, I'll take him out… I swear, you guys are so lazy" she whined and huffed with an annoyed scowl.
"Hey, don't look at me, I beat Kakashi, I did my part" Naruto said defensively.
"Ok ok…." Sakura conceded.
"Ha! I would very much like to see how you'll do such thing" Sasuke challenged.
"Well, like this! Hiraishin no jutsu!" Kakashi hearing that dropped his book immediately to watch what was going on. Sasuke just got confused.
"She can't use that, that's Naruto's most secret and best jutsu…and even if she could, she would need to get a kunai inside the protected zone and that's not gonna hap-" he was about to call her bluff but he was startled when she just vanished from where she was, right into thin air. He was too stunned to react until he felt metal against his neck's skin. "H-how!"
She smirked, "When you kicked me, I threw a kunai your way. You side stepped it, but there is a rock right here. So it got stuck, and when you called your ethereal friend here, his protective aura went all the way pass the rock. So the kunai was inside. Now enough talk" she said pressing the kunai further against his skin, drawing blood. "Either you forfeit, or you lose your neck. Either way, me and Naruto win."
He sighed. "Fine, you win" he said, deactivating his technique and his Mangekyou.
Naruto jumped with a cheer, "Yay! Oh and Sasuke, Kakashi… don't forget that you now owe me and Sakura-chan a paid week-end in the border town's 'All You Can Spa' Hotel! He cheered happily.
"Yeah yeah….I know" Kakashi waved dismissively.
"Yup, a bet is a bet. And we won…" Sakura said with a smirk. "Now Kakashi, you should go to the hospital to get that arm treated." She advised.
"Hey Sakura…" Sasuke called.
She looked back to him "Yeah?"
"Kakashi told me that you found a way to counter the effects that the Mangekyou Sharingan does to our eyes every time we use it…" he started.
"That's right, what about it?" she asked with a raised eyebrow.
"Can you use it on my eyes now?" Sasuke asked.
"Oh? Sasuke-kun needs a little help?" she said with amusement.
"Hn" he shot back
"Ok, but what's in it for me?" She asked while crossing her arms, and with a smirk on her face.
"W-what?" Sasuke stared at her shocked.
"Well, I need something in return for that service" meanwhile Naruto and Kakashi were watching the exchange with a hint of amusement in their eyes.
Sasuke sighed exasperatingly. "Fine…..you can go on a date with me" he said with seriousness.
Now at that everyone went wide eyed. Naruto's shoulders started trembling so much as he tried to hold back laughter, but he was surprised when Sakura didn't hold out as long as him, because she fell on the floor holding her tummy, while rolling back and front, laughing at the top of her lungs. Sasuke was just confused…
"Ohhhh maaaaaaaan, no fair Sakura-chan" Naruto whined. "How come you can laugh so much harder than me?" he sweat dropped as he saw her laughing so hard that tears were falling from her eyes.
Kakashi just shook his head. "Come on Sasuke. She will heal your eyes tomorrow."
"Hn" Sasuke grunted as he followed Kakashi out of the training grounds.
(Two Sharingan geniuses, utterly defeated by two shinobi that do not possess any special kekkei-genkai. One, the jinchuuriki Hero of the last war, and the shinobi world's symbol of Hope (for true peace), though in this battle not even an insignificant amount of Kyuubi's chakra was used as help. The other, a medic-nin who has become the symbol of Life, having made healings that were nothing short of legendary by curing the incurable, and fending off hordes of enemies while doing said cures… The reports would seem exaggerated at the time… Apparently they weren't.
They are the ones, for certain. Only pure will of fire could make such genius from nothing more than hard work. But then, how does this 'Will' manifest itself in them? How and why do they have it? How do they use it? A close look at their daily lives might give these answers…)
Naruto shook his head with amusement at her current state and sighed as he went to a wide tree, sat on the floor, and rested his back against said tree. Sakura was only now starting to cool down. She was still chuckling a lot but managed to stand and walk towards the tree Naruto was at. She then sat down next to him, on his left side. And a comfortable silence ensued.
The comfortable silence was broken after several minutes. "I think Sasuke is starting to want me." Sakura blurted out. Naruto didn't make any movement whatsoever. He just kept his eyes closed, with a peaceful expression on his face. The gorgeous pink haired kunoichi was beginning to think he was sleeping when he finally spoke, but still not opening his eyes.
"It was expected. Though we both know that it has nothing to do with how you look." He calmly said. "You got his attention with your display of power."
Sakura made a disgusted face, "He is probably thinking about making me into a baby factory." Naruto chuckled at that. "Don't laugh! It isn't funny." she warned him.
"It is a little-OWCH!" he yelped in pain as Sakura elbowed him in the ribs. "S-sorry"
"You better be… by the way, are you going to tell him how you learned that Kagebunshin explosion?"
"Hell no. He will flip like a crazy ass Uchiha if I tell him that Itachi gave me some of his power." Naruto explained. "Besides, the point of Itachi giving me some of his power and knowledge was just to serve as a failsafe, in case Sasuke decided to turn into a monkey without his banana."
Silence fell again between the two. Sakura looked to her right to get a good look at him. He looked very peaceful with his eyes closed. He had his hitaiate in his right upper arm, so his hair was free and very wild looking. It's also a lot longer than it used to be. Some of it reached his shoulders and eyes. He was also wearing a flak jacket and an orange sports shirt with short sleeves under it, revealing his amazing physique, and also a pair of loose long blue pants that the Kyuubi container usually used for training. On his feet was a pair of battle boots, similar to hers.
She inched closer to him, and turned so that she was partially facing the fifth most accomplished jounin in Konoha, only behind the 4th Hokage Namikaze Minato, Jiraiya and Tsunade of the Sannin, and herself. Yes, she was the most accomplished jounin ever (jounin, not Kage... only counted what each did as jounin in the case of Minato and Tsunade), mainly because of both her active ninja and medic status and respecting abilities, some demonstrated during the war, some still in use today…not to mention how she shared her medical knowledge with all five great Nations, voluntarily.
Interestingly though, the azure-eyed shinobi might be more powerful than her and the other three combined...
The pinkette looked at the blonde's face, gazing at the Jinchuuriki's unique whisker marks. Such exotic sign that identifies him as the host of the Kitsune: Kyuubi no Yoko. Though it is a wonder how such an evidence, to the presence of a powerful and evil being, could make him look so…. "Cute, adoring, lovable…" there are so many good things even in the presence of such evil, "His heart and will are able to leave the Kyuubi's might and hatred in the dust".
The green eyed, goddess-like kunoichi reached with her right hand to the sun kissed shinobi's left cheek, cupping it, and massaging his whiskers with her thumb while slightly supporting her body with her left arm on the ground. She felt him lean into her touch, while a purr erupted from the young male, making a smile appear in the, just as young, female.
Using her hand, she slightly turned his face so she could gaze at it fully. He, due to the sudden lightweight movement, opened his eyes, to gaze at her questioningly…
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"I love you"
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Ultimate Secret Scroll of jutsu:
(Information collected and written by the 6th ****** of Konoha/1st ********* Uzumaki ******, and by Uzumaki ******)
Suiken (Drunken-Fighting style) or, as Suiken Ryuu (Drunken-Fist style)
(S-Rank) Tsukinukero Atsuki Omoi (Crushing Passion): A suiken type of attack. Rock-Lee, while drunk, opens 5 gates releasing a massive amount of heat from inside his body, heating up the alcohol in his blood-stream releasing its power all at once. He then launches himself with so much speed and power, hitting his opponent in mid-air. Unless the opponent is very powerful and resilient (Top A-rank or higher), he or she, will die. A short time afterwards, Rock-Lee passes out… Unless he still has some alcohol left that wasn't consumed by the attack. If that is the case, he can unleash (if his subconscious wills it) a continuation of the initial attack…
(B-Rank) Hakke Rokujuuyon Sho (Eight trigrams, sixty-four palms)
(B-Rank) Goryuuka no jutsu (Great Dragon-Fire Technique)
(B-Rank) Goukakyuu no jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)
(High B-Rank) Suiryuudan no jutsu (Water Dragon Projectile)
(High B-Rank) Daitoppa (Great Wind Canon) or (Great Wind Breakthrough/Penetration)
(High A-Rank) Mugen Sajin Suishouha (Infinite Devastating Water Collision)
(B-Rank) Suijinheki (Water Wall)
(High B-Rank) Omote-Renge (Initial Lotus)
(S-Rank) Bunshin Dai Bakuha (Great Clone Explosion): An upgrade of Itachi's Bunshin Bakuha (Clone Explosion)… Naruto's and Sakura's solid clones can make themselves blow up in a big explosion, making the use of exploding tags seem worthless… Naruto learned it through Itachi's 'gift'. Then he taught Sakura how to do it, and both of them managed to develop a way to make the explosion even bigger than the original technique.
(High A-Rank) Rykuka bunshin (Flash-Fire Clone): Sasuke's try at an exploding clone. A solid clone made of fire chakra that when hit, burns up in flames. The flames can spread a little far, so it can be effective if used right, but has nowhere near the destructive power of the Bunshin Dai Bakuha…
(High A-Rank) Futon Kirazai: Kazekiri no Yaiba (Cutting-Wind release/manipulation: Wind-Bladed Sword): Taught to Sakura by Uzumaki Naruto after she mastered wind manipulation. Wind swords can theoretically cut through anything, fire being its only weakness.
(A-Rank) Daibakufu (Great Waterfall)
(High A-Rank) Dai Housenka no Mai (Dance of the Great Phoenix Fire)
(Low B-Rank) Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu (Double Decapitation technique)
(High A-Rank) Hanachiri Atsugai (Pressure Damage of Dispersing Flowers)
(High B-Rank) Shunshin no jutsu (Body Flicker technique)
(A-Rank) Ni Suikoudan no jutsu (Double Water-Shark Projectile technique)
(A-Rank) Jibashi (Electromagnetic Assassination)
(High B-Rank) Hahonryuu (Destruction Torrent)
(High A-Rank) Gufuu Suika no jutsu (Typhoon Water Vortex technique)
(High A-Rank) Retsudo Dai Tenshou (Revolving Split, Great Earth Palm)
(A-Rank) Raikiri (Lightning-Blade) also known as Chidori (Thousand Birds)
(A-Rank) Inakibari Bunshin (Electric clone) or (Lightning-Flash Clone)
(S-Rank) Fuuhoukegan (Wind Sphere Barrier): Can be used both as a very powerful barrier, or a very powerful cage. Its only weakness is fire. This jutsu can only be performed by someone who knows the Rasengan, as most of its concept is applied here. Also, the user must have mastered wind chakra manipulation. Last but not least, the user must have huge amounts of chakra, otherwise this jutsu won't be practical to use since the amount of chakra needed to be fed to it would make an average Jounin's full reserves go dry. Uzumaki Naruto is the only known user…
(High S-Rank) Sakura Magen: Makyou Ikebana no Mai (Cherry-Blossom Demonic-Illusion: Demonic Flower-Arrangement Dance):
Sakura's most powerful Concealment Genjutsu. She can transform herself and any ally into a swirl of cherry-blossoms. Then she can control these blossoms at will. Due to her amazing chakra control, she can feel/see anything the blossoms touch. Due to the high-speed movement of the blossoms and consequently, the high-speed flow of chakra running through them, it is nearly impossible to dispel the Genjutsu. Normal means like an outsider releasing the Genjutsu by infusing chakra on the affected team-mate would not work here, as this is an area-of-effect Genjutsu, and not a Genjutsu that would be used by manipulating the chakra inside other people. Chakra-sensing ways are useless too as Sakura's chakra is spread all over the place, so it would be impossible to pinpoint exactly where she is, unless the sensor is very proficient to the extent of sensing the user's soul or feelings (like Naruto's Six-Paths Kyuubi mode as shown by the manga).
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Well, anyway, here is the edited first chapter. Only small changes have been made.
How was it on a scale of 0 to 10?
I didn't release the full info of jutsu used in this chapter because it's a big list full of details. I'll put the rest on the next chapter and on more chapters after.
Thanks for reading.
This chapter is of course, subjected to changes like revising and re-editing...
Have a nice day…