Well, ive only made a Sonic fanfic and after beating the three series of Jak and Daxter, I planned to make a fanfic out of it. Just now getting to it though.
Another One: Chapter 1
Out in the wasteland, a figure was walking toward Spargus. Heh had red hair with some black in it, but you couldnt tell till he pulled down his hood. He had green eyes and was 6'1. He had a cloth over his mouth and his hood of his cloak was up because of the sand. He stopped all of a sudden as a few Marauders flew off the hill and landed where he would have been if her kept walking. The spun around and started to fire at him. The figure lept into the air and landed on top of one of the vehicles. He pulled open the top part of the vehicle and grabbed the Marauder inside. He threw him out of the vehicle and jumped inside. He swerved around and fired at the other Marauders. The other vehicles took hits and exploded. After this was done, he drove the vehicle to the trees and parked it. He walked to the gates of Spargus and they opened automatically. The figure walked into a room with numeruous vehicles . Though, it seemed as if there was one that would be next to the wimpy looking car. He shruged this off and saw a very chubby man walking towards him. "Nice way to deal with though Marauders." he said. "Where exactly am I?" the figure asked. "Why, your in Spargus, the name's Kleiver, whats yours?" Kleiver asked. The figure took of his hood and pulled down the cloth around his mouth. "My name, is Jace." he said. "Jace eh? Well Jace, your pretty lucky you got here, a storm seems to be coming." Kleiver said looking out to the desert. "Tell me, these vehicles take up a certain area, but theres a gap between that wimpy one and the big one." Jace said pointing to the gap. "Does a vehicle go there?" he asked. "Yea, but the one driving it is still out in the Wasteland, hope he makes it back." Kleiver said. And just as he said that, a fast vehicle appeared over the hill and drove into the room. The one driving it parked it in its spot and got out. He had yellow and green hair and an orange ottsel on his shoulder. "Hey Kleiver, who's the new guy?" he said. "My name is Jace." answered Jace. "Well, nice to meet you Jace, the name's Jak." said Jak. He put out his hand and Jace looked at it for a second before grabbing it and shaking it. "Welcome to Spargus. Say, howd you get here anyway?" Jak asked. "I walked at first, but then these crazy guys in redish brown cars swarm me. So, I took one of there vehicles, took care of the other ones, and drove here." answered Jace. "That explains the Marauder car outside." Jak said. "Well, I suppose we should get in there, the storms coming." said Jak. "Right, VEGER!" yelled Kleiver. A brown ottsel in a vest came running from one of the cars. "What is it Kleiver." it asked. Jace's eyes got a little bigger. "It talked?" said Jace. "What, never seen talking animals before?" said the orange ottsel on Jak's shoulder. Jace looked at him, then at Veger. "Im not gonna ask." Jace said. "The name's Daxter, and you know my sidekick Jak." Daxter said patting Jak on the shoulder. Jak rolled his eyes. "Ignore him, he almost always says that." Jak said. "I figured." Jace said. Kleiver put Veger on his shoulder and they all walked through the door into Spargus. "Well, new guy, Jace, dont go around making trouble." Kleiver said with a mean voice. "Dont worry, ive had enough excitment for today." Jace said. He and Jak left Kleiver at the door and started to walk. "Soo, howd ya manage to get the Marauder's ride?" asked Daxter. Jace looked at him. "Simple, jumped on top of it, opened it, threw out the guy in it, took over." Jace said. "Wow, while it was moving too, thats sorta impressive, course, I coulda done it easily." said Daxter. Jace chuckled and continued walking. "Hey, you know of Haven City?" Jak asked. "Ive heard of it." Jace said. "Well, I need to head there tommorow, you comin?" asked Jak. "Why not." Jace answered. "Good, you can stay at my place, since I have a feeling you dont have one here." Jak said with a chuckle. Jace chuckled as well. "Heh, guess your right." Jace said. And they walked to Jak's house. "Hey Jak, who's that guy?" asked a blue haired girl. "This is Jace, Jace, this is Keira." Jak said. "Hello Jace, nice to meet you." said Keira with a smile. "Heh, same here." Jace said. "Well, its late, we all should get to bed." Jak said. Jace walked over to the couch and layed on it. Keira went into the room next to the kitchen after saying good night to the both of them. Jak went upstairs to his room and Daxter got into a little bed by the stairs. They all fell fast asleep.
Well, what do you think so far? R&R please.